Love the story don't stop now!

That was awesome... i cant wait for it to be complete

great chap, i always look forward ot ur updates! please do so again soon!

Ooh so Shujin got the cole slaw slap to the face, nice! So Naraku go out huh. Heh I'm just wondering did a big guy named Bluto or Bubba pass Naraku around for a pack of cigs? LOL. Sorry I just HAD to say that. Lovely chapter by the way =D

LOVE IT!!!!!!!! Please hurry and write more before I lose my mind!

I really love the story!! I thought the song by Fallout Boy was awesome, I love that song. I was wondering though, about Shippou; I know he is little in the show, but you wrote that he is 13, and to me he should be around Kagome's height, and if he is that would make it pretty hard for her to physically baby him like she does.

Sesshoumaru is a human *so says Inuyasha* wonder when that will come back to bite everyone in the (covers Rin, Shippou, and Little Muse's ears) ass. I have to say I really think Shujin deserved more then a bowl of cole slaw in the face...but it's a start. Tell me Kagome gets to put the smack down on him soon...please please please! Oh, and Naraku's out of jail. I can practically hear his theme music from here.
Keep writing SF! *grabs pom poms and cheers* I'm hooked and can't wait for the next update.
Oh, and tell Silver to keep his head up. I'm sure his lemon will show up sooner or later.

Omg! So excited that you updated! I read this as soon as I saw it, despite having to do homework. I can't wait to see what happens next, but considering how busy I am, I totally can understand a wait between chapters. 3 love it! love you! write soon!

intersting. so, who is charles i wonder...anyway, update soon plz.

FL

I'm so happy to see you updating again. You are my favoritest (I know its not a word) fanfic author! Its always one journey after another and they are all quite enjoyable. Thanks for the update and as always, I love your story. I love how you have the dialogue at the end.

I have to say the idea of Sesshy going 'Woof' was just too much. I have this picture in my head of him being this cute little chibi dog and it is totally at odds with The Killing Perfection. I laughed out loud....alot.

I liked this story still!!! Plz put up more chapters soon!!! ^^ Keep doin an awsome job!!! ^^

"arf arf" - hahaha! that really got to me. It's always a pleasure reading your fics. Please continue.

I just love this story! Really, I do! It's one of my favs! Yay! Can't wait for the next chapter!

hey great chapter! poor sesshoumaru!!! please update again soon!

hey great chapter! poor sesshoumaru!!! please update again soon!

finally an pdate! this si the first story i ever read on this site and it will also be the last as i'm leaving once your finished. very good chapted. i giggaled quite abit through out it. and sessho being human. very nice. i bet inuyasha 's gonna gt his ass kicked when the truth is finnaly reavealed. ^^ good chappie!

I love it!!! finaly an update!!! I have been waiting for this for so long...Im totally adicted to this story like no other. Great chapter, update soon!!!!plz

I love it!!! finaly an update!!! I have been waiting for this for so long...Im totally adicted to this story like no other. Great chapter, update soon!!!!plz

I love it!!! finaly an update!!! I have been waiting for this for so long...Im totally adicted to this story like no other. Great chapter, update soon!!!!plz

Thak you, thank you, thank you for finally updating!!!!

I was a bit worried because the story was left like that since last year... Nonetheless Great Chapter!!!

Keep it up!!!!

I see you explaining to Sesshy about why he gets doggy training... Maybe instead of sending him to behavior school.... YOU NOT TAKE SO LONG TO UPDATE NEXT TIME!!!!!

You know I've been refreshing that last chapter every day since it came out? I was beginning to worry you'd gotten hurt or something. You didnt usually take this long to update before...

I just LOVE your story! Thank you so much for updating it!!

YOU UPDATED!!!!! YEAness!!!!!!! I can't wait for the next chapter to come out!

wow. Finally a chapter! I love this. Sesshoumaru in doggy school and bad little Shippou getting ppl in trouble. I wonder y Sesshoumaru didn't feel Kagome's reki and i would have thought that Shippou would have recongnized Inuyasha as the steward of the west. I'm really anticipating the next chapter. Please update soon.

Waaaah! YOU'RE BACK!!! I was beginning to give up on this story. I'm happyhappyhappy to see it updated with such a good chapter :) Plz don't keep up waiting so long next time, ne.

Great chapter! Shippou is such a cutie pie in your story!

ohmygosh! you updated! I LOVE YOU SO MUCH RIGHT NOW!!!!!*squees* (not stalker-ish so don't worry about that)

ok, maybe it was just me, but i thought this chapter was a bit confusing. or maybe not confusing, but inconsistent - you take random leaps from decorating shippos room to inuyasha taking him to the movies (and why did kagome suddenly agree? first she said no, and then shippo says that he wants to go and she lets him do whatever he wants...). and suddenly shippo's in inuyasha's apartment...
the events just seemed as if they happened randomly and it seems more like a "filler"-chapter.
but i hope you'll update soon, because i really like this story :)

So glad to see you back again! I had feared you may have given up on this and weren't going to finish it. Thank you so much for coming back and giving us more of your work to enjoy.

dat was horrid how dare u make dat kinky-hoe strong enough to curse sesshy-sama. poor sesshy poor poor sesshy

XD I'm so happy to see the update. Though now that it's out what happens....and ...gah I just just want to know what's going to happen next. ^_^

Oh you just made my day, welcome back^^!!!! I was wondering when I'd seen another chapter and here it is. Thanks for the update and I can't wait to see if Kagome resume's the dog training sessions. Honestly seeing Sesshou roll over, beg and shake hands would be so funny but I don't think he'd really like that huh. Oh well until next time *smiles and waves* see ya^^

What The Hell Inu!!!
He Should Have Told The Truth Instead Of Saying Sesshomaru Is Human ... Ummm Other Than That Awesome Chapter!!!

OMG THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU...i've been waiting on the next chapter for this fic for like....ever....please please please keep writing T_T

Update soon please!

I love this story. It is so interesting and you have had a lot of really good ideas. I wish you would update because I would love to know how it ends.

I just now stumbled across your story, read it (obviously), and fell in love with it!!! I cannot wait for the next chapter!

I just now stumbled across your story, read it (obviously), and fell in love with it!!! I cannot wait for the next chapter!

I just now stumbled across your story, read it (obviously), and fell in love with it!!! I cannot wait for the next chapter!

fiiniiiiish!!!! onegaiiiii!!!!!

*is totally addicted*

Well i guess i'm still waiting until the next update. You said october but its a whole new year. HAPPY NEW YEAR! I hope you update this summer. or sooner

can you email me at hazelsonice06@yahoo.com when you update?

Cmon Falcon, update! I'm dying without a Second Chance fix!

when is the next chapter i dont think i could waite any longer.....plz let me know as soon as u put it up...

I really liked this story, has abook worthy quality to it, it has captured my interest since chapter 1 but what's happenned?, it's been months since last chapter, i hope nothing is wrong, please update the story, it's pretty good

Aww how cute. I can't wait for the next chapter. Please update soon.

I hope the next chapter comes up I really enjoyed reading this story!!!!

I REALLY LUV THIS STORY PLZ E-MAIL ME IF YOU PUT MORE CHAPTURES UP!!! THANKS!!! ^^ E-MAIL IS CHLGDS7@aim.com ^^ thanks again ^^

Truly wonderful. Please keep writing:)

MidnightStar

please update soon

you story is realy good!!! so why did you stop writing??? I WANT MORE!!!!

you story is realy good!!! so why did you stop writing??? I WANT MORE!!!!

update please i keep waiting 4 like 4ever

Great story can't wait for the next chapter!!!!!! Keep them coming.........

Have to say that I really really enjoyed reading this story. I hope you continue to post, it is a story that I cannot wait to finish reading. Keep those chapters coming.

I luv this story it's so cute & all plz update soon this I hope is not the end ^^ plz e-mail me when u put the next chapter up plz plz plz ^^

I LOVE it!!!!! I can't wait for another update, this story just keeps getting better and better!

that chapter was the bomb diggidy!!!! I';m so happy that shippo got to be with Kagome, anf i can just imagine the hilarity that will ensue between Shippo and Inuyasha, oh and Sesshou and shippo, its gonna be one crazy ride!

YAY! GO KAGOME! i cannot stand that demon he is so rude! anyway, yet another great chapter! please update again soon

I've been reading this fic for about a week now & i really like it! Hope you update soon & can you add me to your update list lllotrfan@yahoo.com. Thanks

see. this is y i dont log onto single spark that often.. the next time i read this >_> it had better b done *growls.. ::bitter dissapointmen:: I WANT TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS!!! RAWR... ~signed ur faithful supporter Asmo.

ps. >_> can u add me to ur update list?

Awww Kagome And Shippo Are Now A Family ... Love The Kagome And Sesshomaru Fluffy Time!!! Update Soon!!!

Wonderful job as usual! I loved the story behind Kagome's birth and the entire chapter was very well thought out and detailed. There is one thing that I'm wondering about...Will Kagome get to keep contact with her kids? I hope so :3

Again, wonderful job!! and Ag, hang in there, there's bound to be pervy-ness somewhere soon!

Ezzy

ooohhhhhh!!!! nice ... like how this is going .... wonder what would happen next... i cant wait for the next chapter....
keep updating
bye bye

All i can say is I hope that Kags doesn't loose her job. She should defy them. Just for spite. Hahahaha. Or Sesh should get involved. XD

WOW! I love this story so far. And I'm glad that this was the first story I read on this site! It's funny, toughing, and all round fun to read. Yeah there was some sad stuff in it but who cares, it's a good story!

But I feel so bad for Mrs. Takisai she was so cute... I want a Grandmother like that ;-; Shippo was so lucky to have known her.

It's about time you updated. I saw it on the main page and screamed "YES!!!" My mom looked at me like I was crazy. Anyways I LOVE your story, please PLEASE don't wait me wait so long for the next chapter, or I'll get anxious bad things happen when I get anxious!!

Man that's not fair Junes like a hundred months from now and 50000 days away. (I'm southern so I have to exaggerate.) I wish you could write more before than. Thanks for that awesome chapter. Can't wait for more even though its years away. Later.

hey yet another awesome chapter! i cant wait until you update/1m please do so soon!

I just have to say, you are an amazing writer, one of the best I've ever seen (And I've seen a hell of alot of authors >.>). I hope you can finish this story soon, its so realistic, and so inspiring.

i cant believe you ended that way! is it really the fired employee that was shot? and what about the phone call Naraku made before he got caught!! so much mystery and intreuge(sp?) this is still my favorite story on here. i am on the edge of my seat waiting for the next chapter!!
tilayha

yay next chapter! I'm excited! Thank you for updating, this was a great chapter!

Oooh, Oooh, it's getting close isn't it??? Close to the time that the curse ends and Sesshy gets to be himself all the time???? Oh, now my poor head is abuzz with questions.... will it happen in front of Kags? Is she gonna freak?? Oh, dear, time to hit the Excedrin, I fear!!

I so love this story... I love the twisty turns and how it all ties in together, I love the ups and downs and how Kags has grown through all of it. I just... really LOVE this story. And I SINCERELY hope you post the WHOLE next chapter here on Single Spark, since I hardly ever wander over to MediaMiner. Just in case, though, I think I'll sneak over there and put this on my story alerts!

When this chapter started out, I was afraid it was one of those odd digressions that authors sometimes throw into their stories. By the end, I was in awe of the way you tied EVERYTHING together. It was nothing short of MASTERFUL!! Thanks so much for sharing this 'brainchild' of yours with all of us!
:D
~~Wiccan~~

Another great chapter! Keep it up, neh?

Fantastic. This last chapter had it all!!! And I'm glad Sango didn't have to go without her insulen too long before being found. My cousins both had and have diabetes. The elder of the two died at 33 from complications brought on from the disease and the younger has to keep having her regimen adjusted as she ages. This fic is really getting interesting and I thought the Naraku plot was good... JEN

I love the story. I'm guessing the next chapter has something to do with Shippo's guardian. Either he finds out about her illness and approaching death or she passes away.

Nooooo a cliffy! I've been reading this fic for day's from start to end to catch up and am left with a cliffy. Well at least to me it's a cliffy. This is really good, please update soon.

hey yet another kickass chapter!!!! please update soon i can't wait!

Oh, that was a cute little chappie. But, the ending sort of has me spooked now. Poor Ship. I wonder when he'll find out how long Grandma has left. Kagome better adopt him!!!!!

Yaaay! Another amazing chapter! Poor Shippou, what is he going to do without Ms. Taiksai?!

Love chapter 32 the stuff leading up to the sex scenes and especially the sex scene.... believe me the scratching on the lower back when sitting on your mans lap does makes you feel like what you describes and it will definitely lead to lovemaking I know my boyfriend does it all the time. Keep up the good work and can't wait to read the next chapter and the next lemon scene....^_______^

Loving The New Chapter ... Shippo Is Going To Find Out Whats Happening To His Grandma ... I Think Kagome Should Adopt Him ... Well Update Soon ...

I liked the new chapter, please up date again soon i love this fic and can not wait to read more of it.

Chaos

I'm not signed in, but well done.
This fic is one of the best ones I have ever read, and I look forward for more as soon as possible. The only problem with a well written story, is when you run out of story to read. So please continue to the next chapter with haste.
Thank you,
M

Yay, I got mentioned...I think. I saw that A.N. about the Birthday question, and I think I was the only one that mention that. :D

Omg, I can't believe Kags said! I wondering, just like everyone else, what Sesshoumaru is going to say. *does the happyhappyjoyjoy dance* I love reading ever chapter. Even if I have to go back and re read a few chapters just to remember what happen last, I never mind doing just that. Most stories that I have to do that to, I just skim to get the basic facts, but I read word for word yours. I have a bad short memery so I have to.

Loved the lemon scene, I am glad they finally got together, though I was suprise in the way that they did. One would have thought that it would be a grand event almost with everything else going on. lol. but it's acutally quite a twist, with everythings so big and flaring with Naraku and the fire, and Shippo adn Kaeda, and just everything else. Something so simple is to be found in the romance for love and caring.

Keep up the good work!

omg...i love this fanfic!!!!! haha Sesshy doggy!!!!!!! i want one:( lol. update soon!

I think this story is my favorite out of all the ones I've read by far. It's awesome, so keep up the good work! :)

keep goin
i wanna read more
its really good

im so into this story. i know you are a busy little one. you have alot of stories goin' but i cant wait to see where this one is going to go!

I love this fanfic!!! The best chapter so far!

Jewish people don't eat pork. So the Jewish boy in chapter... 21 I think it was, or 22, wouldn't likely have pork to offer Sesshoumaru.

You're a Rurouni Kenshin fan, aren't you? 'Uncle Ken'? 'Wandering battousai'? The dog Aoshi who had blue eyes, whose alias is Hiten? Oh yeah, definately can't be coincidence with that many examples.

*sobs because it isnt complete* I love this fanfic! I normaly dont go for storys like this, ones that are not based in the feudal era, but this one is a great exception. I hope you update soon, this story has me utterly captivated!

Yay! They are finally getting somewhere! Well, Kagome is anyway. I am looking forward to your next update.

what i mean way to end a chapter*pouts* please post the next chapter soon. I absolutly love this fic. please please please, post soon.
chaos

yays! really awesome chapter! great detail too, anyway, please update soon!!!!

OMG this story is freaking AWESOME! I totally spent the last two days reading it, I was obsessed. I really REALLY love it! I do hope to see an update soon, though. I'm not sure how often you update since this is the first time I actually noticed the fic...

At any rate, congrats on a super wonderful awesome story! I'm so enthralled. Hopefully I'll be leaving more reviews soon. :)

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!! i waited sooo long for u to update *weeps... and now i have to wait even LONGER?? rawr ... no fair >_ *pouts

woah the story is good keep it up...

YEAH!!!!!!!! i thought you forgot about us! but i have to admit it was worth the wait. it is almost 2am here and i have to be up at 7am for work but i had to read the chapter. this is still my favorite story that i am reading.
please dont make us wait so long next time. (me pouting)
tilayha

Wonderful. I love the set up. I'm guessing that's what Sango's advice was. I wonder what he'll say back? Update soon.

nice ending lol!

man that movie was a good movie!

Okay I hope to hear that next chapter updating soon! Yes you heard me lol!

Seeya whenn it's up!

Ja Ne!

hehe, now i wanna watch Casper :)

"Can I Keep You?"

I think...I think I might love him too!! Whoot! Great lemon. What will he say???Hmm, have to wait til next chapter. Thanks for the update!

OMG!!!!!! OMG!!!!! O!!!! M!!!!! G!!!!!!!!! Thats the only thing I can think of, it just keeps running through my head. OMG!!!!!! YAY!!!!!!!! *happy dance*

omg! You have to update soon--I beg of you! I am entirely too needy and I need my fix of your story soon!!! Please?! When you're able?!

Loved The New Chapter ... Kagome And Sesshomaru Finally Did It ... Could It Be That This Story Will Be Coming To A Close Soon ... Awww I Hope Not ... Update Soon Pwease!

*computer monitor burst into flames*
NOOOO, do you know how much it is to get a new one?
*sprays with fire exstinguisher*
*sirens can be heard as 'C.E.T.s' (Computer Emergency Technitions) pull up out side. *
'Charging...CLEAR!'
*sighs morosely*
Oh well, ( 'Taps' is heard in the background) it was a good monitor while it lasted. I'll just have to get a new one...

p.s: WONDERFUL CHAPTER!!!!
Pleeeeeeeeeease keep it up!

p.p.s: Oh, and sending cyber energy boost to Silver.

Oh GOD! It's about time something finally happened between them! Hallelujah, praise SF, THANK YOU! But I wonder what Sesshou's response will be. O..o

THIS WAS A GRET CHAPTER BUT A HORRIBLE CLIFF HANGER! Finaly they do it i thing its safe to say that everyone was holding their breath for this one! Great job and can't wait for the next part just dont take so long!

Keep going ^_^

Wonderful story all the way through the lemon wonderful as their first had to have been. -dreamy sigh- I would say sess is OOC but from pervious chapters he's gone a long way from when he was cursed

Just wanted to drop a note saying how much I love this fic. And you're so evil for leaving it where it was then telling us you won't focus on them next chapter...pure evil, pure genius.

I believe you mentioned too the possibility of Sesshoumaru being a Great Pyrenees. You didn't confirm the breed, but I know you used it and I just have to say that until a year ago, I had a great pyrenees they are the greatest dog, giant, loveable balls of fur and so completely loyal. It's rare I see that breed in anything, so I hold a definite soft spot for this fic.

Beautiful Chapter. I'm almost wanting Sess to not turn back into Chance and have a lot of morning after explaining to do! But the plot must move on as planned. I'm glad we'll hear about Shippo though. I miss him!

Absolutely astounding story thus far. I'm sure the rest will not disappoint!

UPDATE ALREADY!!!

Hi!

You for shure that second chance is an awsome story usualy I don't read a lot of fanfics in english but hé! guess what I decided to try your ....with out noticing that it wasn't finish!!!!!

Not I just don't know what to do ....
I've been comming back on your maine page every 2-3 days since june.... And i'm going nuts ...I don't want an other chapter I NEED ONE!!!!

lol, I'm not crazy but... I think i'm going to go insane in the process of waiting^^

with high hope of having an update soon, Alilacia

I've been reading for a while. I'm not sure how long it's been since I've reviewed or even if I reviewed in the past. The point is that I have been following your story and I can enamoured. I love it. Beginning to end it has been a delight to read for many reasons. It is very well written. It is original which is hard to find in an Inuyasha based story. The characters are done very well and do not differ from what I would normally expect from them. The ideas flow well and allow the reader to feel a part of the story. It makes me want to by a Great Pyrenees. I am looking forward to your update and I hope to see one soon. You are an exceptional writer and deserved the nomination for the Inuyasha Fan Guild. Congratulations and continue with your excellent work.

^-^ OMG! SO AWESOME!

I find myself saying the same thing everytime you update! Kinda weird! JKJK. Update soon!

Unbelievalble. To think a person can come up with such a great story and you did it. Can't wait for the update.
-OnyxLife

*Screams for an hour without a second breath* That was awesome, Koga totally got that bastard to fall for his trick and I truelly feel for Koga, he felt bad for watching the tapes even though it was his job. Sooooooooo funny haha Inuyasha got yelled at by a dog. Even if it is sesshomaru it is still hylaaaaariuos! Kagome so silly, pretending her head was going to explode and Shippo, so kawii, making fish faces at his, well, fish. And then there's Sesshomaru, goof he's so friggin' destracted by trying no to admit that he loves Kagome but it's so totally obvious Some guys are so damn oblivious to their emotions, and nobody denie that cause it's so totally true. Damn Icicall ass fluffy furball. He needs to learn to listen to Kikyo every now and then, ~even though I hate her guts too.~ God I need to go vent i'll be punching my tree for a while so yeah your story is awesome and please update soon. um ja ne!

*Screams for an hour without a second breath* That was awesome, Koga totally got that bastard to fall for his trick and I truelly feel for Koga, he felt bad for watching the tapes even though it was his job. Sooooooooo funny haha Inuyasha go yelled at by a dog. Even if it is sesshomaru it is still hylaaaaariuos! Kagome so silly, pretending her head was going to explode and Shippo, so kawii, making fish faces at his, well, fish. And then there's Sesshomaru, goof he's so friggin' destracted by trying no to admit that he loves Kagome but it's so totally obvious Some guys are so damn oblivious to their emotions, and nobody denie that cause it's so totally true. Damn Icicall ass fluffy furball. He needs to learn to listen to Kikyo every now and then, ~even though I hate her guts too.~ God I need to go vent i'll be punching my tree for a while so yeah your story is awesome and please update soon. um ja ne!

update god dammit

love it! please update soon, really looking forward to it

i love it! it seems too good to be true; a really really really good SessKag story!!!!!

Wow. Just wow. I've spent the last three days reading this story. It's fantastic. You're brilliant!! Update more soon, please

i have been waiting for this chapter for what seems like ages!!! im so happy that u have updated this story!! its my faverite one out of all that ive read by any author so far!!!
tilayha

I Sooo Love Ur Story ... Im Soo Happy I Finally Finished All 30 Now 31 Chapters ... Poor Kagome ... And Wuts Up Wit Sessho ... He Needs To Jus Give Up His Pride And Realize That He Is Falling For Kagome .... Ooooo And Is Kagome Ever Going To Find Out That Sesshomaru And Chance Are One In The Same ... I Mean Everytime Chance Is Missing Sessho Comes Around And *Finds* Him ...

*wince* My heart goes out to Sesshou...... poor guy, that was just mean......funny, but still mean. Nice job on this story. Couldn't be written better by anyone else.

Let me start off by saying that I have fallen in love with your story. I love the amont of detail and the actual detail; when it is used, and wat it says. i really enjoy your story and can't wait to read the next chapter. I just happened to find it and since then can not stop reading it. I have stayed up to 1:30 in the morning only to get up early to keep reading. I can not wiat to see or read what is going to happen. i luv all the twist and proggressions of the story. Til next time (*smiles*)

I've been gone all weekend and I'm sooo happy that I came back to another chappie from SF. Yay!

You have a very lovely story here. I like the way Sesshomaru's struggling with how he feels for Kagome. Be sure you write more.
Yours Truly
Aki-kawa

omg
u hav gotta keep goin
i luv this story
i need chapter 32!!
ill die without it
ahahh
a bit dramatic huh?
hhah
bonbon

I'm confused. why does Sesshoumaru hate the new moon? She made him human for the full moon? Is it because Inuyasha'a human night is the new moon? Love the story.

Keep going ^_^

Yes, another update. Wow, this chapter contained such a wide range of emotions-I nearly cried.
Well done!

Love it! This chapter actually had me on the verge of tears! I completely forgot about the tapes and stuff as well, which makes this all the more sweeter. Update soon! :o)

Yippeee, another update...Geez, I don't know but I am so in love with this story....btw I hope you feel better soon! I cannot wait until the next update and alas, there are only what...14 more chapters to go??? Oh no! lol....

Oh most excellent, I have another to add to my favourites list and joy oh bliss, millions of chapters to go....***BIG HAPPY SMILE***

No time to chat, gotta go read. Keep up the excellent work.

ElegantPaws

gah.... next chapter please.... and soon??? lol i so totally love this story

Yay, another chapter from the great Striking Falcon!!! Oh how sweet that she didn't lose her precious memories. That's what guardians are for, ne? But we all know he did it out of love. Can't wait for the next installment. Jen

That was an awesome chapter!

That was so sweet at the end! It truely was! Well um...

._.

Okay now you have to update soon so...

-pokes the computer screen-

Hey!

Hey you!

Yeah you!

Who else could I be talking to?

Hurry up and update!

Yes that's an order and no I will not leave you alone!

Update now!

Must know what will happen next so update now!

-pokes the computer screen again-

Did you hear me?

Then get to typing now!

-grins evily-

Ja Ne!!

You just keep surprising me with each new chapter!! For a bit there, I thought we were on the last couple of chapters, then you whip these twists up! And I was begining to wonder about Kagome's dad. Seemed kind of odd that someone as family oriented as the Kagome in your story didn't mention him. Now I need more!! Can't wait for the next update. ^_~

big fan of your story, another great chappie. please update soon!

You have just GOT to update this story soon. I love the unexpected twist and turns of the most recent chapters. I look forward to seeing it continue soon.

u hav got to finish this story i keep readin it over and over waiting for the next chapter keep it up

thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you for updating!!!!! Great chapter. But when will we find out how and why Chance/Sesshoumaru's schedule is out of wack?

I just started reading this story and I LOVE it. I don't usually read AU stories, they aren't my first choice, but I decided to take a chance on this one. WOW. That's all I have to say ... WOW.

The plot is incredibly involved, very detailed, thrilling, amusing, touching ... everything I look for in a Kag/Sessh story. I'm kicking myself for not having read this from the very beginning!! I love where you seem to be heading with this one and can't wait to see what happens if/when Sessh figures out that Kags will be the one to break the spell.

Thank you for a wonderful day's worth of entertaining reading!!
:D
~~Wiccan~~

its about time!!! lol ive been going nutz waiting for this one to get updated. only saw one grammar error(excellent!!) other than that nicely done.
tilayha

wow this is an amazing story. i can't wait to read more of it.
i simply love the fights between Kikyo and Sesshomaru in his head, they're too funny.
please keep going with this story

Luv it. Keep going plz:)

Update soon! I really really really REALLY want to know what happens!

I still love it

Still waiting for the conclusion..

I can't believe this story seems to Kick ASS!!

3 EVERYTHING about it ^_^

keep up the good work!! ^_^.....


>_

~ciao

keep going ^_^

keep going ^_^

keep going ^_^

keep going ^_^

It has occurred to me that somewhere in the ashes of the condo would be the new safe box Sess got her, along with the diamonds. I don't remember whether she put them in the box or not....

woohoo! ive been waiting for this chapter! but u kno wat wud b funny, if Chance was shopping with them when she went into, like Victoria Secret, and he nugged her in the direction of wat he wanted to c her in! lol can't wait for the next chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

impecabel, luckly you will be living for multipul years to com unfortunately for me that means I am denied the wish of seeing the auther that wrote this story that makes my cold dead heart to on some ocations spring to life for a pulse or two. please as you preasent dayers say update soon.

Wow....going by your excellent descriptions, that place sounds gorgeous! ^_^ I wouldn't mind moving in there! Lol
The only thing.....with Kagome now living just one floor above Sesshomaru....won't she be constantly wondering where he is? Well, lets just hope that Inuyasha doesn't run out of places for Sesshomaru to be. XD

I can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter! This story is getting soooooooo good! Update soon! *hugs*

Excellent update. I thought it to be very cute how Sess/Chance wedged himself between Yasha and Kags when they were walking around the apartment.

Looking forward to more updates...this is one of my favs.

Well done. :-)

Nothing like a pair of pretty brothers to plot for your well being. I'd be happy just to get one guy to look at me. XD Anyway, another amazing chapter, can't wait for the next. ^.^

Yippeeee...you updated!!! I love this story...normally AU stories are not my thing, but this one is so well done. It is so sweet and true. And the characters are well defined. You have made all the characters in this story come to life in such an amazing way! I am really very glad that you have continued with this tale...and I cannot wait until your next update!!!

oooh hurry and update soon that summary has me question what he found! lol update soon please!

Ja Ne!

Well it seems as though Kagome means so much more than she thought she did to Sesshoumaru. You know, it doesn't matter how long Naraku is in prison, I'm gathering that he's got alot of more trouble to cause. And when does the curse end? Does Kikyou have to hear and feel Sesshoumaru's confession of love? I'm wondering how Kagome will react to the fact that her dog was her boyfriend or is he going to just let her mourn losing Chance after he returns to his natural state of being? I still think he should have a better respect for what InuYasha has to go through with each new moon. Great work as always. Jen

This was awesome! Kagome got to stay at a beautiful new condo! HELL YEAH! I can't wait till the next chapter! Please update soon!

I keep trying to guess what's going to happen in the next chapter and you keep prooving my guesses wrong. I love this story so much! It captures you and wont let go, in the good way!

Can't wait for the next chapter! 333

*SCREEECH* I do that a lot, don't I?

AGAIN! YOU DID IT AGAIN! AN AMAZING CHAPTER WITH AN AMAZINGLY ANNOYING AND IRRITATIN G CLIFFHANGER!!!

GAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Aly2: Yup. Just ignore her--AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHGAAAAAAAHHHHHH-and ignore her even more.

Well, we loved the chappie-GAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH-and we hope-GAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHH-that you update-GAAAAAAAAAAH!!! WHYYYYYYYY??????!!!!!!!!-soon!-GAAAAAAA--WOULD YOU SHUT UP??!

Yeesh.

Yup. Update soon! Love this story. Love it. LUV LUV LUV.

Ok, one thing. I was a little confused in the beginning. I thought Sesshoumaru dropped Chance off...so how could he do that if he is Chance?

Do you ever reply to reviews? Please reply! PLEASE!---GAAHHHHH--I THOUGHT I TOLD YOU TO SHUT UP!!!!!!

BIBI!

hey im so happy that u updated thanks alot....love ur fanfict is the best!!!!!

come on now u cant leave the story like this!! im going crazy here. PLEASE update soon.
tilayha

awesome! uh eh heh heh I have been lazy and just remembered your fic! I went did she update and you did omg did you update -read 6 chapters and eyes are wide from all the writing- well I'm glad I am now caught up and thus comes my plea....

PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!

Ja Ne!!

write more dammit

please update soon

i am curious to know if you plan on continuing this story. if you send update warnings i would very much like to be added to the list.
this story has me hooked.

Poor Kago-chan. . . T^T That dirty perv-bastard Naraku needs to die >.
Sesshy is so sweet too. ^^

hehehe loved it please update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

hehehe loved it please update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Wow, I have not been enthralled into a story like this one in a looooong time. You keep story flowing well in the sense that I was never bored at all reading any one chapter. As well as the ending parts with with the cast, those always made me laugh. I happened acrossed your story while I was looking at the FanArt for this site, and I saw the name I remember reading anystory of yours on fanfiction.net (ff.net brat here). I am not an editor by any means, so the only thing I saw outta place was the ages that yousaid Kagome was, one said that Sess thought she was 22, then in another chap you said she WAS 21, and at the birthday chap, you said she was turning 24.

I love your work, keep it up. I really can't wait for the next! 3 Ciao Evi-chan

Holy cow. This story has me on the edge of my seat - I love it to pieces! And I have to apologize for not reviewing even once until now. Although I'm with you and this wonderful piece since- dunno - last summer or so... *hangs head in shame* But I'll stay with it until the end, that's for sure. Regardless of how long it may take to be finished. It's such a great piece of writing. Thank you for that!

And about Sesshy on the phone with Kags at the same time when Chance pops up... Anybody remember Aoshi? The blue-eyed black dog they got for Kanna? The bloke that can do 'impressions'? I may be wrong, but it might just have been him... *giggle*

Keep up the great work! I'll lurk around to fangirl you. Heh heh...

:D Yay you updated!!!

Please update again soon! I love this story so far! Keep up the good work! ^_^

love it! please update soon!

Awww man, it's been like forever since you last updated. I was so glad that you did. I was starting to have withdrawal symptoms *giggles*

Awsome chapter...Naraku, always the creep & jerk. I hope he gets his in the end...tenfold.

Anyway, that was very cute the way you handled Chance and Sess at the same time. Could it be that Sess pre-recorded that phone message knowing what Kags would say...that was a heartwarming reunion between the two.

Don't wait so long to update...can't stand having 'fanfiction withdrawls' although I should be doing my homework instead...hee...hee...hee!

Well done :-)

OMFGx#! OMFG1) YOU UPDATED! OMFG2) HOW THE HELL CAN THAT BE CHANCE IF SESSHOUMARU WAS ON THE PHONE?! OMFG3) THAT WAS SO FRIGGIN' AWESOME! UPDATE SOON!

thanx for finaly updating and so far it's a super story so please please please update again soon.

Yay!!! Very cool. I can see that we are starting to tie the loose ends up. I wonder if Kagome will be mad as Sessy when she finds out. Ba ba ba... :cheesy dramatic music: he he!

Yay!!! Very cool. I can see that we are starting to tie the loose ends up. I wonder if Kagome will be mad as Sessy when she finds out. Ba ba ba... :cheesy dramatic music: he he!

i'm sure addicted to this story lol... ever since i first read it... lol can't wait for the next chapter

naraku really is a creep... I'm glad he's out of the picture.
I wonder when Sesshoumaru will tell Kagome his "little secret"?
update soon!!!

you really are great, you manage to make kikiyou to be somehow connected to our sessho even if his havingsome ''affairs'' with kagome.[ NONONONO! keep that bad thoughts to your self people!!] well anyway some people likes the idea of kik/sess{disguzting} pairing but what's the difference? they look alike and yadayadayadayada except for their personalaties and other stuff.

AAAAAWWWWWWWWW I LOVE IT please update soon.

I REALLY hope Naraku gets what's coming to him. What he was doing was sick beyond reason. This was a great chapter though, a LONG one, which I love!!! lol I enjoyed every second of it! ^_^

CHAPTER 29 WAS SO GOOD!!! FILLED WITH SO MUCH ACTION, YEAH!!! I really enjoyed this chapter, I've been reading so much romance lately that I forgot how fun it is to read action/adventure! I'll give this a big fat WELL DONE! and please keep the good stuff commin'!

PS: poor kagome, so many horrible things happening to her in one day! It also seems that she has some dark ghosts in her past am I right? *wink, wink.* ;)

i like the mini conversation you make after the story but i think you still have to take some lessons from sada, don't you agree? god hers were really crazy

Yipee...I feel like I waited forever for an update! So glad you did...it was fantastic as always...I already am so eager for the next chapter...Now dear authoress hurry and update!! lol...

Wow! Another awsome chapter! I really love this story, and I honestly cant help but fall in love with Sesshoumaru over and over again when I read this story. Great Job! Please update again soon!!!

awww. I want a better summary too! anyways it was an awesome chapter. so much has happened and naraku is sick. having cameras in everybody's place. I can't remeber if there was a time that sesshoumaru changed in the house....oh well. PLEASE update soon!

SO NARAKU IS SOME KIND OF A LUNATIC EH ? SUITS HIM WELL ANYWAY i'm really exited to know all the characters that has'nt been introduced yet!!

i think your very brave for writing this chapter. i have an aunt and a cosin who are foster parents, so ive seen the damage done to these kids first hand, and your right if we dont talk about it then nothing will change. knowlage is power, and in this time we live in we need all the knowlage we can get....thanks for the great chapter.
tilayha

Hey, I've been following this fic from the beginning before you started posting here but I'm going to leave my reviews here so not to confuse myself. I have been so entranced by this fic and each time you update the story just seems to etch it's way further into my heart. You have given an extremely well written storyline and the flow and feel is captivating. You have drama, humor, romance, and angst all wrapped up into just a great fic. The whole idea of Sesshoumaru being forced to live as a dog until he learns to love, have compassion and to accept and treat others without predudice is quite a different approach. Now he knows how InuYasha felt with each new moon. I just have to tell you that this last chapter [29] is my favorite so far. You put so much more into this one chapter that I kept peeking over at the scroll line hoping it wasn't going to end. I won't go into every detail that I liked because quite frankly the whole thing was great. You are doing a wonderful job with this and I cannot wait for the next update. My only wish would be that you could post sooner but I understand that you have a life beyond fanfiction. Both my daughter and I keep each other posted whenever we see a new chapter up either here or on FF.net. So, again, great chapter SF. Oh and when you wrote to my daughter you said that maybe you should behave when doing the lemon/lime scenes...just so you know, I am way more hentai than she is and if you are going to put it in, please do. This is one reason I read here on this site and not FF.net, there are no restrictions on NC17 fiction. TTFN Jen

How does Chance and Sesshoumaru BOTH show up HMMM... And I'd soo see naraku doing that dumb stuff

(i wasn't logged in when i wrote this, sorry)

AH-HA! It all makes perfect sense now! Striking Falcon-san, you crafty little hanyou! You had this all planned from the beginning. That's why Sessie gave Kagome that fire proof safe as a gift to keep her precious things safe. Hell, he even mentioned, off-handedly, that if there was a fire then her stuff would burn.

Sneaky sneaky

but great job!

I was just waiting to see how Naraku caused trouble! Nice chapter. Can't wait for the next update.

that was amazing you did such a wonderful job please keep it up...sesshoumaru is such a romantic lol I would have never figured that.

update already!!!!!!!!!!

Well, I finally got through the fic. So as promised, I will review...:ahem:. I looooooove it!!! I hope you get the next chappie out soon. Angst, drama, romance...I love it all! Yay for sf and the muse. Now if you tell me where you purashsed your muse I shall take my leave. he he. Had a sessy moment there. Anywho, keep up the good work.

All right now I have waited for what seems like forever for the next chapter and it's still not here so PLEASE update soon

I was going to wait until I read it all to review but I wanted to tell you something. The part in the story where you talk about a woman abusing a child to get attention is called Munchausen by proxy. Thought you might want to know. Anywho, I am enjoying the story and will review again when I finish reading.

I really, REALLY like this story! I can't stop wondering if animals in our 'world' in real life may be youkai in desquise...lol! JK!
But truly, this is a fantastic story! And, im slightly sad...wait no...not slightly...REALLY SAD that you haven't up-dated or added any chapters for 20, yes TWENTY DAYS! you said you would up-date it quicker....and yet...you haven't....so im left to feel disapointed....and maybe, just maybe...you could have sesshy (as chance) run into a skunk sometime soon, and have to have kags wash him...on the night of the full moon....she finds out his secret and they have a lemon happen between them...or a smut...which ever...something with Sesshy (as chance) being washed and kags in the nud while washing him in her bathroom...*shruggs* i was hoping that would be in here...
a well! UP-DATE SOON SF!!!!!
TTYL;
joanne

hurry up and update allready!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!:(

Update!!!!

hey! Another awesome chapter!!! can't wait for you to update!!!!

*wails* Why can't you update sooner?! WAH!

Loved this chappie, even if there isn't Kags or Sess.

i need to read the rest of this story so please hurry and get it written- and yes that is my way of saying yes to whether or not this story is good

Lol, i forgot my questions. I was too busy saying how good your stroy is. anyway, just a couple of things i've been wondering about. What happened to Koga? Does Kagome ever get the pictures she took with Shippo? Will koga and his 'partner' get together. I know its not about them, but I would still like to know if he still wants Kagome. Oh, and in the chapter where Sess stays human longer, why didnt Kagome realize her dog, 'Chance' was still missing? And when did he show back up and what happened when Sess went to see Inu? Thanks and sorry for all the questions! Keep up the good work!

Hey, I just wanted to say that I LOVE YOUR STORY! I thought it was going to be either stupid, or poorly written, but its neither! Its great and I couldnt stop reading it lol. Hurry up and get the next chapter out! Btw, keep up the awsome work!

Why, hello there SF!! *waves* long time-no see. XD How've you been? ^^

Ok, now for the comment......wow!!! Souta sure found some interesting things on that tape, didn't he?? lol. I wonder what he's going to do about them?

Yay! Happy Birthday Kagome!! ^_^

Ooh, this next upcoming chapter sounds reeeaaaaly interesting!! I can't wait for it to come out! *is excited* A breaking and entering?? Uh-oh...what'd you get yourself into THIS time, Kagome? XD

Well, that's about it......talk to ya later, and update soon! *hugs*

OK! now I have read the last updated chapter WELL DONE! I wish it was a little longer though and I guess somthing big really is going to happen! I've also noticed something, it seems that when sesshy is a human he has a different personality then when he is a dog. I think I like his human self better.

Ps: KEEP THE CHAPTERS ROLLIN' IN !!! =D

I feel in love with this fic on the first chapther!!! I noticed that this is not romance but action/adventure I'm cool with that besides it seems as though something big is about to happen! (forgive me if I'm a little late but I haven't read the next updated chapter!) In fact I'm going to go do that right now! =P

Thank you for updating. I loved the new chapter. It's getting very interesting.

oooo i live this story
please update asap
its one of my faves on this site =]
its soo good!

I love this story. I've laughed and cried, sometimes in the same line. I have a picture of Sesshoumaru that I saved. I don't know where to direct you to see it. I could email it to you. It will warm the cockles of your heart, whatever they are.

send me an email when sess tells kags he's chance

GAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1 YOU LEFT ME THERE WHAT IS IT WITH CLIFHANGER ENDING'S!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (then again i'm not one to talk............)
plz wright more *begs*

To the reviewer "tsukii" posted 03/22/07: I would love to see your picture of the human Sess. Where can I view this?

Thanks :)

Hmm...let me guess...Shippou's grandmother is going to name Kags as her replacement (so in a way Shippou gets his wish for Kagome to be his mother). Chance is now in his beasty form which is not so good for Sess (that is if Kikyo cannot intervene in time).

What 's up with Naraku? Why is he weirding out (not that he is already weird). I hope the spell on Sess is broken in time because we all know he has already fallen in love with Kags (just has to reveal his feelings to her). The plot thickens, as one would say.

Please explain the relationship of Shippou's grandmother to 'this board of demons' that Yasha is on. What and who are they? What is their purpose? Is it something that I missed in the previous chapters?
Does Shippou have some sort of high status among the demons? Was this already explained earlier and my senility is creeping up on me *LOL*?

Good chapter...great job...please update soon :)

more of a ?

when does kags find out chance is sess
by the way ihave a sesshomaru human pic

Well, I think it's the first time I review this fic although I've been reading it for some time. I have to tell you that I love it but it's taking rather long for that stubborn dog to give up and feel!!!! And I just got the impression he is about to abandon Kagome. That jerk!!!!!! NO MORE TREATS YOU BAD DOGGIE!!!

hey, awesome chapter... big cliffy! come on Sesshomaru! realize your feelings already. lol anyway, update soon please

awesome awesome... love the new chap... update soon....

Yay! Another update! XD

I really liked this chapter...Kagome was so happy after that whole day spent with Sesshomaru..^_^ Why is he saying that it must be stopped, though?! And how did the inu get out? Is that good or bad??
Who is going to replace Shippou's grandmother?
So many questions...so few answers. XD

Oh man, I can't WAIT for the next update! ^_^ Update soon!

TTYL! XD

I love the way this story is evolving. I'm so curious as to how you're going to work in the changes that Sess is going through with all the other side plots. You really have the rare talent of using side occurances to support to main plot without letting to sub-stories become to tedious. Plz update soon!

Hello Great SF-sama!

A highly entertaing scenario just passed through my highly disturbed mind, and I thought I'd share it with you.

Kagome is begining to become exasperated by Chance's many unmonitored excursions. Worrying that he will get hurt, or get himself into trouble while roaming about, Kagome decides to take a trip to the local pet store. 5,000 yen later, Chance is presented with his new "gift" : An invisi-fence system.

With a collar that gives him a good shock everytime he oversteps his bounds, how will Sesshoumaru escape before his impending change?

Muahaha!

*This has been a breif excerpt from a very disturbed person's mind. She is a trained professional, so please do not go searching through unstable minds. You might be infected*

Well, I love your story, and I also love the length of your chaps, so whenever you update again, I'll be there to read it!

Toodles!

Yippee! You updated! I needed my puppy fix! I cannot wait to see the angst you have in store for our favorite couple! It is always nice to see everything go so smoothly but this new twist you seem to be planning will add a new dimension to it. And hopefully Sess will finally come to his senses!!! Update soon...pretty pretty please!!

yeha, that was good timing, I was just checking out some new fics/;updated fics and I came upon this one, and I was like, "hey i've heard about second chance before..." The puppy one!! Lol so i was all excited. can't wait till ya update, ciao!

Midget

Its so sad! I was weeping near the end. Thanks for updating. This chapter was sooo good. I love the time Kagome and Sesshoumaru spent w/ each other and the sadness that Kaede expressed. Please update SOON!!! I'm sure my fellow readers are dieing to know what happens next.

David Bowie! Im sorry, but i cant help but notice the next chapters title and go Bowie hysterical. wow, i also cant help but notice that the story has changed more than a bit since the start. Im glad its not becoming rediculous with all the twists though. Inuyasha rocks, even though we see so little of him. Im curious about the limo incedent, where Sesshoumaru somehow breaks his cell phone and the seats have gashes in them. Well hell, I'll just be here lookin out for an update. This story rocks to much to be forgotten. Catch ya laters
Ymir-chan

You know, if you llike that one Fall-Out Boy, you'll probably like the rest of the CD, especially Thnks Fr Th Mmrs (Thanks for the Memories). Just a thought.

By the by: love the story.

Wow, its been a long while since I've read a fanfic that has held me captivated as this one. It is great, and the character development is simply amazing and true too. You are doing a great job, and I look forward to seeing how the story continues. Keep it up!!! : )

oh wow I really like this story....I've read other where Sesshomaru get's turned into a dog but they weren't very good, but this one is the best that's I've read in a long time I can't wait for your next chapter and I hope you keep writing.

loving the fic! getting a little citrusy here. are you going to include a lemon in this fic? doesn't matter to me nor am i opposed to it. just getting the feel it will considering what's been happening the last chapters. looking forward to the next update. keep up the good work!

I am so glad you finally updated! This story is just so sweet and lovely...I was afraid for a while that you were not going to update! But it was so worth the wait, with gobs and gobs of sweet fluffy goodness!!! I cannot wait til the next chapter!!!

I loved it , it is such a good chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!11

You're such a tease, damnit. Gah!
Write more faster! PLZ.

AWESOME CHAPTER! I loved the fluff *glomps fluff* I really hope ya update soon!

I can't wait to see what happens. Gah I'm all worried for shippou and what going on witht he relationship? What's been decided. ;_;

Aww! That was so sweet! I've been waiting for some more Kag/Sess fluff =D

ever the great writer! Can't wait for the next chapter to be up

awesome!!!!!!!!!!! =)

Yeah another chapter!!! This was awesome! Sesshoumaru got to spend a day w/ Kagome! It was so sweet. I wonder how long it'll be till Kagome ties together the fact that Chance and Sesshoumaru are never seen together. And poor Sango, being diagnosed w/ diabeties. I hope to read more from you soon!!!!

I loved it. Can you please update?

I loved this chapter! Is Sesshoumaru going to become Chance once again? Please update soon!

IS SESSY MAKING KAGOME"S CHOICES FOR HER!?!?!?!?!?
SHE"S GONNA BE MMMMMMMMMMAAAAAAAAAAADDDDDDDDDDD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

LUV THIS STORY SSSSSSSSOOOOOOOOO MUCH!!!!!!!!!!!

PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

WHEN WILL KAG BECOME SHIPPO"S FOSTER/ADOPTIVE MOM??

waaah super fluffy. I liked it.

That was a good chapter! Update as soon as you can!

OMFG!!! i can't belive it!! though i'm glad you stoped were you did litle intense there. btw i absulutly love your story!!! it's the first one i ever started to read on this sight UPDATE SOON!!!!. sorry if the spelling's bad as i am not from this contry

Totally, totally awesome, can't wait to find out what happens next. Keep writing.

I really but really like it.... it awsome I swear!!!! But I wonder am I just unbelivingly impatient or... are you teasing?

Any way I usually dont send reviews but I can stand up to the waiting!!!! I'm about to go crazy...

Ask my brother.... He sais that I should find something else to do since all of you unfinished fanfictions are driving me nuts ( and him at the same time^^)

Any how, keep on writting 'cause you are ... (there is no words for your oh so great tallent... in my opinion....though incredible could fit)
enough of palabre.... see ya

i have just 1 wrd 4 u: wow. i mean WOW! it took me 2 nights to finish this cause my mom wouldnt let me stay up past 2 am on weeknights... but any ways..... i absoulutly love it(spelling errer?)!!! i love wat u do at the end of the stories as well, but mostly i love ur plot and the charactorizations. well i only have till 10 tonight, so i gotta go , but keep writing, and plz email me so ill kno when ur new episode comes out !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! bye!! Yokai Priestess Riiko

Always a good cliffhanger...what happens next im dying to know, n what does happen to kikyo oh and what about shippo can't forget the little guy, does sessho ever find out about him?

Always a good cliffhanger...what happens next im dying to know, n what does happen to kikyo oh and what about shippo can't forget the little guy, does sessho ever find out about him?

Perfect as always. I loved it. Is she ever going to find who he is? What happened to Kikyo? Update soon. ^-^

I just read Chapter four and it made me cry. It's so heartwrenching! Poor adorable Kanna! *hugs Kanna plushie* I'm sorry that your babysitter's such a prick! *cries* I love the stories and all those underapprieated social workers. *sniffle* choa is brewing! bye bye.

this is such a great chapter. Have I ever told you i love all your works. I mean really I do. Specially this one. I was ify at first but it is so wonderfull keep up the good work

Chelsea

Uh...look at this one bit you wrote and see what's wrong with it...[Gentle, strong fingers wrapped around her wrist and he apologized before injecting her with the insulin she now needed. He rubbed a little alcohol over the wound, placed a band-aid over it and tugged Sango from the tub to his lap after re-capping the needle and throwing it into a nearby wastebasket.]

can't guess? He should have used the alcohol BEFORE he injected her...not after!
I mean someone could get mega sick from that happening....it happened to my aunt and she got sick and now she doesn't let her kids get any shots....or if she does it's a desperate last option thingy...

PLEASE DO A REAL HONEST TO GOODNESS FULL LEMON BETWEEN KAGOME AND SESSY ASAP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I mean they can't really do it when Shippo moves in can they????....WAIT.....don't answer that.

PLEASE UPDATE VERY VERY SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! THIS IS ONE OF MY FAVORITE STORIES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Hurray! Another good chapter! (And don't let Sesshou get you SF. . . >.>)

That ending was most certainly a teaser. A good teaser, but a teaser none the less. That was an amazing chapter. While they were putting on the show at the festival, I really thought of Sesshoumaru being that character. I thought he was really going to hurt Miroku and Sango for a second there. lol oh, and speaking of Sango, from the last chapter I thought she had cancer or she was going to die. I'm glad she's alright. Anyway, I can't wait to read more!! ^_~

Awsome Chapters!!!!! I love all of your stories and I am always thrilled with the way that you write!!!! Its so GOOD!!!! Please update again soon and keep up the great work. I have to say that this is probably one of my favorite chap. of Second Chance. Kudos to you! ~Taiyoukai's Lady

This was a great chapter I really enjoyed it and hope that you update soon

YOU TEASE!! Awesome chapter though. But still! Oooh. Just when I though... oooh you big tease!! *tries to hit with a newspaper but misses each time* Tease! Tease! Tease! Tea- *stops for a second* I wonder if there's something imporant about it being a Blood Moon... hm.. *shakes head and tries to hit with the newspaper again* TEASE!!!!!!!!!

Yipee another chapter!!! This story is so much fun...I cannot wait for the next chapter! Please not too long a wait? But you didn't even leave a little hint about the next chapter??? That better mean you are updating very very soon!!! Thanks for writing such a wonderfully entertaining story!

Loved the new chappie! Having Sessy play his dad was priceless! I hope there's a lemon soon all these limes are beginning to adversely affect me LOL Thankies for updating!

you finally update ehehe

Hey!!!!!You can't leave it here...please...I don't think I can wait that long for the next chapter. I know you got a life outside of here..but...geez, this is one ot my most patient times of waiting for the mad,wild,passionate monkey dance to commence!!!! And you've been leading me on this path for,like, forever. Let him be with her soon. The torture of living with her and dating her must be so intense for the guy. Tell Kikyou to make him admit he loves her. I just love your fics!!!!

awesome!!!! =) i love it!!!!!

It's great that Sesshomaru is getting his power back, and I loved the play!

No chapter summary?!! How cruel!!

i loved it and im glad they didn't do anything she would be heartbroken in the morning

HOHMYJEEVUS..!

I nearly died from the shock of seeing and reading such a great chapter!!! I only hope you update as soon as you are able so as to get more excellent praising from your adoring fans!!

UPDATE I BEG OF YOU!

Please?

*cynical laughter in the background*

Yess..

*evil smirk*

^_^

update common i need more now! please i want to read more soon. you have to update. ppppppplllllllllllleeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaasssssssssseeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Heeey, I'm just wondering, what ever happened to Naraku? He just, kinda.....disappeared. o.o

Other than that, great story! ^__^ Can't wait to read mooore~!

I loved this chapter I lvoe how things take place slowly and not all at once. Keep writing and I will be patient until you get the next one up

I cannot believe how much I am enjoying this story. I have read through it twice while waiting for the next chapter. It is such a novel concept, but you somehow make it work, and still maintain it's depth and purity of the characters! You are doing such a great job, and I cannot wait until the next chapter!!!

Another wonderful chapter. ^^ Good job SF! ^.^

Yay!!!!! You're back!!! I've been in the worst ice storm Missouri has had in 20 or 30 yrs and this was such a treat to come home to. We had no power and ended up shuttling between hotels who had power. Our place has downed trees and there're hanging over our home right now...but there's no place like home. Bet Sango has diabetes, huh? My cousins went through that. And poor Shippo's grandma. Kagome to the rescue? Chance/Sesshoumaru is such a wonder isn't he? Just when we think we have this guy figured out...Hope you can update soon...real soon. I really miss your writing.

I'm so glad to see that you hav e picked up on this story again. It looks like I better grab a tissue, though, because I think theres some sad stuff heading this way. Poor Sango! And Shippo's grandma! I hope everything turns out alright for Sango. Diabetes, maybe? I hope its not life threatening. That would destroy Kagome and Miroku. *sniff* (me too!)

hey its me again I love your fanfic update soon. THERE WAS SNOW IN AUSTIN TEXAS!!!! YEAH!!!! WE DID'T GO TO SCHOOL EITHER !!!! YEAH anyways cool story.

This chapter was great!! Got me curious and confused on Sango's illness...Can't wait to read the next chappie!!

Noooo!!. Your so mean. I hate cliffhangers. What happened to Sango? What about Shippo and his grandma? This is starting to get really good. I love it a lot. Keep it up. Update soon please. ^-^

That was an AWESOME fic! I can't wait for the nest chapter!! *dances around excitedly* Please update soon!

i love it ive been waiting for ur next chapter update soon

This story gets better and better...I luv it. I don't think Kikyou is that much of a bitch. She seems to be trying to help or make Sess realize his potential as a humanitarian and without him knowing it, she is pushing him & Kags into falling in love so that the curse can be broken. Even though Kikyou put the curse on him out of the heat of anger, she does care about him enough to try and help him break the curse, well that's this one's opinion. Great chapter and even greater storyline. I appreciate your efforts to update as quickly as you can. Happy New Year! :)

kikyo's a bitch i would have bit her ass if she turned me into a dog but i loved the chapter

kikyo's a bitch i would have bit her ass if she turned me into a dog but i loved the chapter

great chapter! you know what this is funny as I read the summary for the preview and the tittle I could imagine when Kagome or Inuyasha read the preview for the next episode at the end of each episode hahahhaa

great chapter! you know what this is funny as I read the summary for the preview and the tittle I could imagine when Kagome or Inuyasha read the preview for the next episode at the end of each episode hahahhaa

I loved the new chapter. It was a bit sad, but I enjoyed it. Thank you for updating and I hope you will be able to update again soon.

good chapter I bet Sango has diabetes.

So like...is this story almost done...or is there lots left? Update soon. I love the story!!

~Lady Kirara

aw... I hope sango isn't dying too! ;_; andf I can't wait to see what happens! ^____^

I so loved that you updated. This story is great. I hope that you update soon.

Can you pleazzz update The breaking point so many people love that story

AWWWW. Sessy's such a sweetie!!!!!

He's really just a big cuddly fluffy puppy!!!

Is Kag gonna be Shippo's foster mom soon? What will happen when Shippo meets Chance? Will Shippo keep his mouth shut from his beloved mother figure??

Please update soon!!!!! I love this story!!!

I finally read the last chapter and you have just got to finish this story up. It is great. I love the humour especially Sess' thoughts and bickering with Kikyo.

This is a good chapter, but you have it here twice. Just letting you know, in case someone else hasn't told you yet, though I'm sure they have ^^;

man u aint updated -_-

You already posted this chapter a few chapters ago. Please update this soon, it's a phenomenal story. And when will Kagome finally realize that Chance is Sesshoumaru?

I don't know if you noticed but Chapter 24 is the same as Chapter 21. Love the story it's awesome please update soon!

Oh My Gods!!!!!!!!!
I absolutely adore this story!!!
It's simply awesome! ;D With all the inner stories of the Children... both Kagome's and Sesshoumaru's; and of course the main story lol
I fall in love with Isaac's story, it was so sad and human that really touched my heart;
I can't wait to see what'll happen next ^_^
And to find out more about Kagome's real potential, and if the changes Sees' curse is going through have to do with the feeling he's fnding along the way with his new "ward" ^_^
Hope see you soon
Ja Ne

This a really great story I just loved reading and hope that you update soon. You posted ch.21 twice.

As sad as this chapter was...I kept reading. It was tastefully done (rape of a child). I totally understand your feelings about the subject. I was molested as a child by the stepfather of my best friend who was also being molested by him. It was very hard on both of us. Her life took a different path which eventually led to her death at the age of 27. I got over it but had problems with relationships to a certain degree. Anyway, keep up the good work...you rock as a writer. :)

I squee once, I squee twice, I squee thrice and love this story even more!! Though after you mentioned Yu Yu Hakushou, I automaticaly thought of Gin of the wind. ^^

Anyways, keep up the awsome work! This story feeds my fandom like crazy!! And I wanna draw fanart for it now. Curses! *shakes fist with big grin on face*

will u PLEASE update on a role reversal?

man i thought it was a new chapter but its the same one 2 times

Love ur story, cant wait for the next installment. btw, ur chap 24 is mixed up.

I loved the new chapter. Thank you for updating. I hope we get to see the next chapter soon.

something is wrong with the chpater (24) i think you should have alook anyways other chapters LOVED THEM!!!!!!!! keep the good job

Yay! ^_^ You updated! *does excited dance*

I loved this chapter.....the part where Kagome and Shippou went to the manga and anime convention thingy was AWESOME! I want to go to one of those....

Man, Shippou's mom is really determined to get Shippou back, isn't she? I wonder why she wants him back so bad...but those guys that protected him were really cool! ^_^

Tee-hee....the part where Sesshoumaru scared the pants off that thief was HILARIOUS! I loved it....I couldn't stop laughing! lol!

I can't WAIT to see what happens next! Please update soon!! ^_^

This story kicks ass! Please update soon! Ja Ne!

'unlikely guardians!' great chap.... just let you know you reposted 'something like the wandering: the betrayal of isaac' as chap 24.. it was such a tease.... any hoot, love your fic.... keep up the good work.....

THANK YOU FOR UPDATING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I ABSOLUTELY LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

So....when is Kagome gonna be Shippo's foster or adopted mother?

When are they gonna figure out that she's {Kag} a miko...
...when is Sessy gonna figure out that he loves Kagome and.....
..WHEN ARE YOU GONNA UPDATE AGAIN!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?

PLEASE UPDATE VERY VERY VERY VERY VERY VERY SOON!!!!!!!!

Why did u post the same chapter again. i really like this story and it's kinda a let down to see that u updated only to find that it a chapter that u already posted!
Plz updated for real!
-Sesshoubabe

Striking Falcon, I believe you accidentally posted up the wrong chapter. It was supposed to be Chapter twenty-four "Injections" rather than chapter twenty-one "Betrayal of Isaac." Chapter twenty-one has already been posted up. >.>

"Something like wandering" was moved to the chapter 4... but now it doesn't work because you mention him having pink hair before that chapter, saying he had an aura, like a miko's ki surrounded him, or something to that effect...
I can't wait to read more, you leave me hanging and yearning for more.
: )
Good job

PLEASE!!!! hurry up, i love your stories!

ch.22
Awesome! I love the sweetness of their kiss. They are so in love that its so romantic. I guess the spell/curse is breaking.

I would never dream of reporting this story. Bad things happen in life and thats just one of them.... also this one so far is pretty cool. In fact its awesome. You have so many diffrent views of the people. Sure Naraku is pretty creepy so far but hes not evil. Kikyo isn't as bad as in the series and it seems like Sesshomaru and Inuyasha get along together. So ill keep reading but I prob wont review again untill the end.

I would never dream of reporting this story. Bad things happen in life and thats just one of them.... also this one so far is pretty cool. In fact its awesome. You have so many diffrent views of the people. Sure Naraku is pretty creepy so far but hes not evil. Kikyo isn't as bad as in the series and it seems like Sesshomaru and Inuyasha get along together. So ill keep reading but I prob wont review again untill the end.

hey, how come chapter twnty-one is posted three times? anyways, i look forward to an update!!!!

hi,
so i really like the story.... how ever are you aware that you re-posted "somthing like the wandering: the betrayal of issac" as your last two chapters

aaand again, you already posted this chapter. Three times.

...you already posted this chapter

Hey GREAT chapter! But one thing. You should be consistant...in this chapter, you said

“Oh no way,” Kagome disagreed and snatched the bottle away from him. “You’re only 20. You’ve still got a full year before you can drink.”

Earlier you said that Souta was 16, not 20.

not to be a bother...but....you have posted a previous chapter...twice...

Otherwise, you're an awesome writer and I look forward to reading your stories.

um...... do you know that the last 2 ch are the same and didn't you put those erler in the story?so like the short hare thing made sence at the wedding? not that i'm sure it's in there bc i''m coming over form the FanFic.net but just doesn't look right anyways love the wedding ch and can't wait for more!

Nuu, his lovely long, beautiful hair *weeps, is never obsessive about long hair, ever. Really.*

Mind you, I guess he's lucky that it didn't end up/stay pink too. Still, I hope it grows back, as I imagine it would be difficult to keep Chances coat trimmed all the time rather than letting it be the natural length. Hmm.

Anyway, I loved the chapter, everything about it really. The wedding, Sess showing up, and especially all the little hints about his slight transformation. *Squeel, dreamy sigh* Your writing is addictive.

God, look what you've turned me into ^^; Anyway, I eagerly await future chapters. With glee.

Greetings!

I have rather obsessively been reading your story for the past- three days now; every so often abandoning the hallowed halls of Hypnos in favor of finishing..just..one..more..chapter. I am writing to you both in praise of a piece of writing that inspired even my lazy ass self to bother to review and has most satisfactorily consumed many hours of my day, and to inform you that the final two chapters seem to be double, and triple posts of an earlier chapter sharing the same name.
Are 23 and 24 completed?
Will the great dog Lord ever be freed from the curse of a woman scorned?
Is pink the new black?
These are questions I hope you may be able to answer for me in future chapters of Second Chance.

Sincerely yours,

-J

I still love this story and I can not wait for another chapter and I am not sure if you have noticed but your last two chapters are the same as 21. just thought I would let you know. I am eagerly awaiting the next installment. keep up the awsome work.

GREAT chapter!!!! Also, it's mizu, with a u, not mizo, but close enough lol

O_O!!! Gah I can't wait for the next one. I LOVE this fic! ^.^ ~v

Sesshys curse is breaking! goody!!!!
come back soon & are you going to update A Light in Guiding Darkness anytime soon?
hope so. Ill be waiting
Ari

hey whats up i think you should read the last FIVE chapter of this story from another point of vew. this are the same chpters. so please update another one as soon as possible!!!!

Hey! long time no read!
Im glad its not dead
btw...jews dont eat pork, they think its dirty animal, therefore not kosher...or something like that. Then again... maybe they were starving? And the scene where the boy, his mom and the elderly couple die is kind of unclear. I understand that they died shot but I dont understand the reason or how Sesshoumaru was involved.
I just had those questions, but besides that, I was so excited about the update that I could barely read LOL. There were like...3 new chapters? I think I could die happy today
glad to see that the older authors of the btter stories haven't died
see you soon?
Kia

YAY!! I love this fanfic I cna't wait for the next chapter!!!

i 3 this story.

Hey what s up I don't know if you recognize the name but i have also written revies in fanfiction.net and so on. I really like this story you are a great writter but it seems that you put one chapter in what is worth fourth. You put chapter 21 in chapter 21, 22, 23, and 24 i want to see whats going on because i love the story and i want to know what it leads to. Hope you update a different chapter soon. and make up for the ones you missed. if you don't believe this read don't log in until you see and read the last four chapters you'll see they are all the same.

Wow. It's been a year or so since I checked on this one. Been busy with school. Awesome chapter and I can't wait to find about about the wedding. Keep writing.

MidnightStar

where's Naraku?

ok PLEEEEAAASE UPDATE SOON!!! THIS IS ONE OF THE RARE FANFICS I LIKE WHERE ONE OF THE BROS TURNS DOGGY.

It has been a long time since I have read Second Chance. I wait restlessly for new chapters not only in this fic, but in others as well. You hold my respect and wish you luck on future fics.

I hope you put up the next chapter soon, i love this story, i read it a while ago, but then i stopped, oh andi was wondering, did you purposely decide to have some many posts of the same chapter? because the last one is the one about issac, and it's posted a few times, so i ws just wondering... anywhos i think i'm gunna check out your other storys, but please put up the next chapter soon!!
Sam-chan

please update soon. im really enjoying the story so far. Oh and i dont know if you noticed but you posted the same chapter three times lol. Its all good though. stuff happens. Anyways update soon please please please please. okay bye

hello to you,

even if school is almost knocking on my door I can'stop my self reading all ( well i' not done yet) of you fanfics.... I tough that I shouldn't wait to must to cheer you up... you are really creative and have à style on your own... keep on going

In hope of reading more chapter soon... DS an addicted reader! ^^; ( I gess I've been cought... lol )

hello to you,

even if school is almost knocking on my door I can'stop my self reading all ( well i' not done yet) of you fanfics.... I tough that I shouldn't wait to must to cheer you up... you are really creative and have à style on your own... keep on going

In hope of reading more chapter soon... DS an addicted reader! ^^; ( I gess I've been cought... lol )

I love your story but why did you post the same chapter four times?

I'm not sure if you've noticed, but you've posted the chapter with the story of Issac 3 times. Well hope you sort out the problem soon, because i really look forward to reading new chapters!

this is an awsome story. plz update soon.

why is there 4 postings of the same chapter? Not that I didn't enjoy reading it four times

Woot. Johnny Cash, walk the line. Nice place to put it in. I love that song too.

I loved it ; but i was just wondering if u were going to delete the repeats and add another new chap soon?

love the story and i must say a pink sess is something i would love to see lol .but did u know u uploaded the same chpter like 4 times? if u alredy know then sorry for bring it up hope to read more ~*De*~

i know what ur saying there r sick bastardz out here i know 4 a fact; experience what that can do on a child; its not right they only get 7-8 years, 2 me that should be a instant death, but i love ur story

This story just keeps getting better and better!! Though the last chapter was a bit sad, sense it dealed with the holocust. i hated learning about it.*_* but anyway please update this story soon!!!^_^

Pink? PINK? AND cut his beautiful white hair?! Sue them, Kagome! Sue them and take everything they own!

hey! i just love this story! I'm sorry i don't send the reviews every chapter i have to print it out so my dad can sit on computer -_-.Anyway I really like this it changes my mood after i read this. Not many stories do that to me,i usually don't get so emotional with stories >_.I really hope you update soon! Keep up the awesome writing!!!

This is really good....but chap 21,22,23,24 are the exact same thing.
When does Kagome take Shippo as her foster-care child?
I wonder how Fluffy {well not really fluffy anymore} will react...I wonder how Shippo will react.
The taiyoukai of the Western Lands being his social worker/mother's dog!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

that was great! but why was there like repeats of the last chapter?

WOW! That was fricken awesome! I loved it! PLZ PLZ PLZ UPDATE SOON! Also, I was reading this on ff.net under inusgirl17 (now seshssmate101) ao I think I might just continue to read it here

Uhh, I just thought I'd tell you, but you updated chapter 21 four times.

Great chapter! I seriously cried when I was reading the part about Isaac. THAT WAS SO SAD! And then when Kagome was singing to Sesshomaru, or 'Chance', to cheer him up; man, I really lost it! I'm STILL wiping tears from my eyes! T_T

I can't wait for the next installment!! ^_^

~Aishiteru~

Wow you just brought back a bad memory. lol. I hve a white chow with caramel ears. I took him to the groomer who happened to be a close friend of mine. She gave him the "Show shave" shaved his body and left his head all fluffy and died him pink. I litterally flew off the handle I was so pissed. I could have made a sailor blush with the words that came out of my mouth that day. Anways.. Awesome chapter. The historical stuff was still on enough to get the general idea of what was going on. Can't wait for the next chapter

*LOL* I guess you hit the "submit" button too many times. Damn, & here I was all geeked that you'd written 4 chapters! Great job SF. How horrible for Sesshy! And especially Isaac & company. So Sesshy found that fucker Genki on the next full moon & melted his throat with the dokasou, right? What a low-down, simple-minded thing to do! Bastard. I love the History Channel too. Can't wait for the next chap! Oh, & I would B>TOTALLY sue that damn groomer. I mean, it'll take forever for his hair to grow back! Well maybe not since he's not the average dog. But still! It's just the principle. Update ASAP! Awesome job!

ummmm...why did you post chapter 21 four times??

LOL. r u aware that u posted the same chapter 4 times?! It was a great chapter but its a bit much. Well anyways, I really love ur fic. Its sweet and theres some sad parts to this too. I look forward to reading more.

::laughs:: Damn it's the last uploaded chapter and I now have to wait for others to come out before reading agian. ::cracks a grin:: Dude I absolutely bloody LOVE this story! It's truely awesome. You've done a wonderful job on it hun, terrificly written and the personalities kick arse! Inuyasha and Sesshomaru - bloody rock! ::shakes 'er head laughing:: It's awesome, I can't think of what else to say without sounding like I'm shooting off bull. 'Cause I'm not. I love it. Please write more as your able, I'll be waiting as paitently as I can for more of it! lol ^_~ Blessed BE in all your writings! JA!

Loving this story, it is orginal and created with a lot of thought. Well written and interesting. Hope you have time to write more soon? Do you have a alert list when you post new chapters?

I'm not even done reading through this chapter yet, but I had to stop and post a "Holy crap I LOVE Sesshomaru's personality in this story!" message for you before going back to reading.... which I'm going to do now. So, Ja! lol

You have no idea how happy I was to see an updated chapter. This is one of the first stories that I actually put on my favorites list. Something about Sesshoumaru as a dog is SOOOOO appealing. I also love the interaction between him and Kikyo.
If they ever broke the curse, poor Sesh probably wouldn't know what to do with himself since he's been a house pet for so long. lol
Keep up the great work and I can't wait to see the next installment.

*applauds*

hey two new chapters awesome ^^ keep up the good work now!!

GREAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! SESS is getting his picture taken. YAY!!

Even for a filler, this chapter was a good read. Though that ending has me nearly pulling out my hair for more. XD

Your loyal reviewer,

Thesta

love it as always eaager to read more. email me when you update

Oh a new chapter!!! Happy dance going on here!!!!
I was afraid you had abandoned this story, and I so like Sesshy as a dog. So humbling.... lol NOT!
He's even arrogant as a pet!
Keep up the good work, and filler chapters are greatly appreciated too.

I love the last chappter so much, mostly when Miroku has to take pictures of Kagome and Chance -(Sesshoumaru). I think the pic tures should be done in a park or some thing like that. Also will Sesshoumaru go to the wedding party? If he dose in his human formit will be so cool. Any way I can't wait to read more.

I love the last chappter so much, mostly when Miroku has to take pictures of Kagome and Chance -(Sesshoumaru). I think the pic tures should be done in a park or some thing like that. Also will Sesshoumaru go to the wedding party? If he dose in his human formit will be so cool. Any way I can't wait to read more.

I love the last chappter so much, mostly when Miroku has to take pictures of Kagome and Chance -(Sesshoumaru). I think the pic tures should be done in a park or some thing like that. Also will Sesshoumaru go to the wedding party? If he dose in his human formit will be so cool. Any way I can't wait to read more.

I think this story is GREAT!!! it doesn't have that inu/kag conflict where sesshou sweeps into save the day shit. Not that I don't like those stories its just nice to see something different! Please update soon=)

I love the story. I can't wait to see how Miroku's picture of Kags and Chance (Sess) turns out. Updated soon now that your done with A Cross of Blades. I loved that story too.

You've got some serious awesomeness going on. You know that, right? Anyway, keep up the good work and try to update soon. I about between your last two updates.

Au revoir!

Hey welcome back!:) Good chapter. I loved the gift and how he wanted learn everything about Kagome's father and family- very touching. I can't wait to find out about the pictures. Until next time-soon.

It was great to see another update for this story. It's so different from the rest of the fics out there and gives us a chance to see another kind of story Sesshomaru/Kagome story. Especially now since things between them are starting to pick up. Thanks for updating!

- LtSonya

Oh yeah - I totally forgot to ask - but how long is this? You mentioned not being halfway through in chapter 17 or something and I was just curious.

Still love the story. That hasn't changed in the two seconds since I first reviewed two seconds ago. ^.^

I am sooooooo glad you updated!! This is my favorite story of yours next to To Bear Witness, but that one's already finished. I was just wondering if you knew when you'd be updating the next chapter to this so I can keep a look out. I'd really appreciate it, thanks.

Of course - great story. Obviously.

That was great!!!!!!!!! Please update soon. ^_^

Hey, Ok I don't do this much at all, the whole reviewing thing I mean, so I'm kinda shocked with myself. However, I absolutly LOVE this story!!! I can't help but review if only to beg you to continue with the next chapter soon!!! You're a wonderful writer and now my favorite author on this site, and I'm not joking. So please post the next chapter soon!!!

Thank you for updating. I've been waiting eagerly. Don't get me wrong. I'm sure you had a lot of things to do. Anyway, it was really good. I loved it. Can't wait for the next chapter. ^-^

i lov this story!it's orignal!!^.^keep writing,seeya^-~

omg i thought u gaveup on this lol! well im glad ur gonna finish it. i love this fic. cant wait for ur next update. till next chappi, mika luffs ya.

You, Striking Falcon, are AMAZING for updating Second Chance! I've been waiting forever and ever for an update that I had nearly given up hope! And now... a new chapter... and more to come! I'm so happy I could do cartwheels down the stairs! Please update soon!!

sorry that I haven't reviewed earlier but I couldn't stop reading....i love this story...everyone deserves a second chance....hopefully this story will have a sequel...a third chance never hurt no body....update soon im loving it...more than the actual series

I like it!!! I can't wait for the next chapter!!! Plzzzzz Update soon!!!! Update!! Update!!! Plzzzzzz!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

omg! It has been so long since you updated that story! I just can't wait til you update again.It's soooo awesome! Please please update soon

Yeah!!! I am so glad you updated, this is among my favorite stories...

Keep up the great work!

Wonderful chapter! I was afraid that you had abandoned this story. But you haven't and that makes me happy! You characterize the characters so well! Now, update A Cross of Blades and we'll being doing good!

I have to thank you for finally updating Second Chance. -bows- You've got me and many others waiting for so long. But it does not matter as long as you still continue. :)
I hope you'll update Cross soon enough too. ^^

~Chie

FINALLY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! it's been forever since you updated! I had almost givin' up hope! now, update more or there will be hell to pay!!!!!!!!! ^.~

yay... chaps.... great story... love it love it.... hope to see more future chap soon... keep up the good work...

B>OMG, OMG, OMG!!! Squeeee!! I actually had tears in my eyes when I saw you updated this fic. PLEASE *bows down* update soon! Love the chap! Love the fic! Hell, love you for updating! Weeeee!!

*gasps* it's... it's... *nearly faints* a CHAPTER!!! a NEW one!!!!!!!!!!
oh my god...
keep going
*hugs the falcon*

Yes! I'm so happy this is my all time favorite story along with everything else you've written. I'm glad your back and writing. Please don't wait to long to post the new chapter

Iam so glad your back... I love this story.. You have done a great job with it... Keep up the great writting and i cant wait for them to get together and lets hope they have a good time at the wedding... AHurry and update soon plz...
Mari

pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaasssssssssssssssssssssssssss pretty please with cherry on top update as soon as possible, beacause this is like my fav fic on this site! please!

love the story I keep reading it waiting for the updates it is my fave story. please update soon

dear striking falcon-sama, it has been a while since i have seeen a new chapter of second chance and of the fanfic a kiss for a prince i realize you have started other fanfics and must be very busy but i would appreciate if you could finish the stories i have been suspence for a very long time and i also been a fan of your work for the longest time i think you have alot of talent and i would very be very grateful if maybe you could do another chapter for these two stories if could email me when you finish the chapters that would be great sincerely yours
BR royal_treatment @netzero.com

I NEED MORE (WAIL) *sniff sob*

pluuullleeesssss update soon. My heart cant take the waiting. This was all amazingly written and i enjoyed every single moment reading it. You even got me to like kikyou a little. again please update soon!