Very interesting! I love the first installment--part of the trilogy! You author notes are not annoying, either.
Mirrorhanyou- Sun 16 Jul 2006
That was amazing, I can't wait to read part two in fact I'll start as soon as I finish writing this. You know those booing Inu/ Kag fans you mentioned I was once one of them but reading what you have written about him and seeing what he has done in the anime. Finnally makes clear what I already knew, Inuyasha is a selfish jerk who doesn't deserve Kagome's love. If she ever realised that in the anime I think it would be because of the situation you've described here. This is grade A material and I believe with a little spelling and grammer work you could turn this into a triligy of novels, as long as of course you gave proper credit to Rumiko Takahashi for the original idea of Inuyasha. Think about what I said and keep up the good work.
jamatta,
Mirrorhanyou
P.S. please e-mail me back in responce to my comments and suggestions:) arigato gosaimas
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