That was the best short-ish (lol) story I have ever read, and I hardly ever read any fan fiction, much less any short story. Smooth, brilliantly developed, and only three chapters.

Oh...how I would kill for just...a...tiny..bitmore.

Beautiful. I have never read anything like it.

~Yare

Beautiful i have no words to describe it other than beautiful

In a way your story kinda made me sad can't explain it but i wanna cry now, hehe.

that was depressing...
good lemons, and portrayles of characters,
but still........
maybe i'm just used to happy ending.......
either way, thanks for the great story *^_^*

that was depressing...
good lemons, and portrayles of characters,
but still........
maybe i'm just used to happy ending.......
either way, thanks for the great story *^_^*

that was depressing...
good lemons, and portrayles of characters,
but still........
maybe i'm just used to happy ending.......
either way, thanks for the great story *^_^*

I absolutely worship you! Out of all the fanfics. i have read with the Kagome/Sess. pairing i have never read one with the true reality of the situation that portrays the differences of their lives so well. Words truly can't express how much I admire this piece of fiction.
So in short I say congradulations for this is by far the best sess/kag. fanfiction I have ever read.+

No.... I don't want it to end :( It was a good well-written piece :)

That, was excruciatingly painful, and yet amazingly wonderful, to read. Your writing has left me in awe. I sank so far into your story, I couldn't pull myself out. I could almost feel Kagome's heart breaking. I could almost feel her pain. I could almost feel her loss, and her hope. You have a gift for writing, and I hope it is never, ever, wasted.

there is music to your writing. pavane for a dead princess was what played in the background of this story. it is impossible to read your work and not be caught up in it completely. you've broken my heart twice today and i sit here crying like a damned fool over a work of fiction based on a silly manga. you are a powerful writer. i doubt that i will read much of your work a second time, it is too painful to read the first time. but i don't regret a moment spent in the world you create; and perhaps, in some way, i will be a better person for having been there. now i had better read something funny to drive the tears away.

No matter how many times I read this story, it never ceases to amaze me in an astounding way. It is so well written and completely origional.

Meaning of course, that I've never read anything like it. You delved into the darker and more depressing aspects of Kagome that no one else ever really writes about. Which made it all the more enjoyable.

i LOVED it. and i love the fact that your writing is not stumbled by grammatical errors.

wonderful, that's really all there is to say, so wonderful in fact, it hurts.

beautiful, absolutely beautiful.

this is really good i think it should be a movie. I can tell how hard you worked on it to.

This story breaks my heart. As a writer, I know that one of the best things I have ever been told is that a work of mine made someone feel. I don't know if you get the same thrill from it, but if you do - I found this to be one of the most heart-wrenching pieces I've ever read. Thank you for writing something so profoundly moving.

I think what's so sad about
this is that we know he'll leave
her sooner or later.
It's not necessarily a bad part
on the story, but it's just really a
bittersweet ending.
It really makes your heart ache for
Kagome, whether you've experienced
'love' or not. I can't tell you how many
times I've read this story, but I'm damn
sure that it's a lot. The first time got me
crying so bad. In any case, I absolutely
love this story, even more so than
Tales from the House of the Moon.
You've portrayed an older Kagome
really well, and gave a believable
Sesshoumaru.

All in all, it was a fantastic story.

your story was absolutly beutiful and very well written and a new spin on the pairing of them in the future!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Wow, I'm just completely content now. This is one of the greatest fics I have ever read, it was also one of the most emotionally pulling fics. I really don't know what to say about it, the characters were amazingly deep. The plot was great, the lemon scenes where amazing, and the little details just added and spiced everything.
Overall just an amazing piece and a really wonderful read.

Wow... wow...
You have no idea how many times I cried while reading this story. I was in tears practically the whole 2nd chapter and half of the 3rd. Cried in the 1at chapter, too.
It was really good.
Poor Sesshoumaru - at least he has Kagome, for now.

It's so bittersweet and it tugs at the heartstrings. It's real and it's beautiful. It gives a warm fuzzy feeling inside even as it breaks your heart. I don't know how you do it but I hope that you don't stop.

I think that you have captured Kagome and Sesshoumaru as they were meant to be. No kids, definitely no grandkids, and no grandiose statements of love and fidelity.

It's very painful for me to read your stories, but it is like going into the sauna because afterwards, I feel cleansed and slightly more pure. And, I suppose, that's all that matters.

this actually made me cry. very very good fic.

Fugue III

Hn...the spark of revelation and absolution...finally they find it, and with it acceptance. Brilliant, thank you for sharing this work.

Fugue II

I wonder when Kagome will get a clue, that he is equally lost and seeking solace and love? Equally, when will she feel the present that she is slowly reckoning with and putting the past to rest? Both are in the process of healing, full circle and you are doing a wonderful, subtle job of it in the most sensual manner possible...or should I say, have done it...in the most sensual manner possible. A jolly good read.

Fugue I

Extraordinary, silent, and beautiful. Enthralls entirely, on to part II. Okay, just plain brilliant. One can actually feel TIME and its slow passage, by the reactions of the Taiyoukai....and the gradual understanding and the limbo of Kagome...and its unfolding..

Jesus Christ, that was good. I'm not too sure what to say other than that. Jesus Christ. Oh wait here: That was one of the best and most moving things I have ever read. Wow. Just wow. *worships*

oh wow...that was really beautiful but so sad. You read it, and it grabs your heart and wrings out all your emotions of love and tears and sorrow. And then it brings forth a ray of light and makes you smile. At first i was almost mad at how it ended, but i think more on it now and thats the way it shoulda been. It was beautiful. So much, but the lemon, thuogh there was alot, i dont ythink this story was meant for that. tragedy woulda worked fine for it. But yea bravo i mean really. inspired me outta my writers block. lol God bless and i cant wait for your next one.

The story hurt too much. Your story's fate was cruel and I understand the poetic license you used in your writing but this world has reality enough. I don't understand how the story was rated anything other than 10, but regardless, you have an amazing writing style and an odd sense of what goes on in these characters minds. Well done.

I think... I'm going to cry.

Sometimes I wonder how you can write such terribly beautiful stories. I wonder how you can write these heart wrenching words. But I'm so glad that you can.

Despite my name, I am NOT Flaming this story. It was absolutely amazing. You are a dazzling authoress, and I implore you, please send me a lemon-edited version of this story at my email. Not because I dont like lemons, because yours are excellently crafted, but because my friends dont, and I'd like them to read them. If you cannot, then I understand. I shall make them read this amazing fic anyway.

Ja Ne.

Wow. I feel so stupid because I can't really think of any words to adequately describe how beautiful this story is. All I can say is that you're the Single Spark author equivalent to Nora Roberts and Sandra Brown--one of the best authors I have ever had the honor of stumbling across. Keep writing your amazing stories.

This work of art is amazing! At first, I wasn't sure that I liked it (much angst) but I love it so, so much. It's the fic I read during my terrible break-up with my first love. It makes me feel hope and heartbreak and so many wonderful emotions. Please keep writing wonderful things. You are truely amazing.

Another beautiful story has come to a close. Please continue to write stories with the gift that you have been given.

gods, this story had my heart breaking...my heart is breaking still...what's more painful than knowing you'd eventually leave behind the man you love? that in the end he'll be alone? argh! the tears are coming!!!

gods, this story had my heart breaking...my heart is breaking still...what's more painful than knowing you'd eventually leave behind the man you love? that in the end he'll be alone? argh! the tears are coming!!!

that was very good and very sad. why did he said he would leave her again though? and in most of your kag/sess they never have kids, why not? Anyways very good please make another kag/sess story soon!

after reading this for the nth time I still can't help but be mystified by your talent as a writer. can you write a sequel? just a one shot? XP I really love this story. I'm starting to read Tales from the house of the moon, sadly I don't have enough time to finish two chapters a day. But I do like it already. Keep on writing. If you'd get one of your stories published, I'd search the whole world for it! You RoCK!

greetings from the Eastern Lands,
The LadyOfTheLake,
lacus_somniorum