OMG!!! That was sooo cool! I totaly love all your stories! You are such a good writer and so creative!I hope to be as good of a writer as you someday! (Gazes longingly...)
Yuka-senpai- Tue 29 Jul 2008
OMG!!! That was sooo cool! I totaly love all your stories! You are such a good writer and so creative!I hope to be as good of a writer as you someday! (Gazes longingly...)
Yuka-senpai- Tue 29 Jul 2008
OMG!!! That was sooo cool! I totaly love all your stories! You are such a good writer and so creative!I hope to be as good of a writer as you someday! (Gazes longingly...)
jen- Thu 24 Jul 2008
dude, this is awesome. i love how you do rin!
moonlit marauder- Wed 23 Jul 2008
i love it and update soon lol it is a very interesting plot yet i do not understand the connection between kagomes power and the wells and if the well now has kagomes aoria why would it still fight her and is it still written as a seperate entity, lol part from that i totally adore this fanfic ( i do hope once this site becomes a read only that u will post on either the new sesskag site that everyone is slowly re posting on, and changing from this site to the dokuga or fanfiction.net ) and ur lucky even tho their are not millions of reviews personally i would rather have several truely meaning full ones which provide feedback and ask questions and such, than the hord of useless and tho heart warming (un-intresting ....LOVE IT UPDATE SOON) anyway a loyal reader untill the end, hope when u read this this question will make sense 'how was ur hoilday' cya
I really enjoyed this story and I can't wait for the next update. I was also wondering, are you going to continue this story on Dokuga when this site doesn't allow updates anymore?
faye- Thu 17 Jul 2008
oh you must make some more chapters please i loved it.
RedRoseRuby- Wed 16 Jul 2008
funny i liked it keepup the good work
RedRoseRuby
mewmew- Tue 15 Jul 2008
this was by far the most fun chapter. i loved it. the other chapters i loved as well, but for other reasons (they put on my personal watertap :-) because they made me feel for kagome)
very good chapter. i liked it alot. it gave me that warm glow feeling in it. :D
Lady Katherine Of The Vampires- Mon 14 Jul 2008
I do so love this story :]]
And I look forward to your next update
studdedmisfit- Mon 14 Jul 2008
omg omg i was really reluctant to read this but i was proven wrong this story is ver ver good please continue writing i love it.
WhiteRose-Kurama- Mon 14 Jul 2008
I have to say... this has been one of your best chappies yet. I love the power displayed by both Sess and Kagome. And I have to agree with sess.... Kags antics are quite amusing. And I'm ecstatic that Kagome has another companion. Keep up the good work and hurry with the next chappie:P
very good two chapters. i want to see more please!
I Love This!
BTW, I like how you put the hanyou teenage character in this. Hmmmm...i wonder if Kagome is going to keep her as a companion. I will have to read to find out. Please continue. Wonder what she is mixed with.
WhiteRose-Kurama- Wed 09 Jul 2008
I really like this chappie but it was a bit short for me. Hopefully u'll go into more detail about what happened to the hanyou. I can't wait to see what happens next. Keep up the good work :P
Great story please updated it.
Akiyome-chan- Thu 26 Jun 2008
Why........why did you have to leave us with a cliffy. Do you know how much I was looking forward to reading another chapter only to find that you left a cliffy why.......lol.......update soon. I like pie, but you dont need to know that but pleae update soon thnkx. Really love the story
Angelique- Thu 26 Jun 2008
Hi night flame miko!
I just wanted to tell you that I think your story is awesome! Please, please email me when you update, which I hope you do really soon!
-A
Fubuki- Wed 25 Jun 2008
Very good! I think I spotted one or two minor spelling mistakes, but the srory was captivating, and I can't{ even though I have to} wait for the next installment
WhiteRose-Kurama- Wed 25 Jun 2008
Wow! That was definitely a great accomplishment for Kagome... to be able to spread her powers that far and then have Sess acknowledge her. I wonder how Sess figured out that Kaga-rei was Kagome's alias? Anyways, what's up w/ the hanyou girl? Why was she beaten? Did people think that she caused the sickness? And since the well energy has taken on her characteristics, does that mean she can use it as an energy reserve? Keep up the good work and hurry w/ the next chappie :P
Fluffy's Lady- Fri 20 Jun 2008
too cute!! i like this. i can't wait to read more! plz add me to an update list! thankies!!
FL
Katie- Fri 20 Jun 2008
I'm really impressed with your writing!
It's a very original plot, which is something
I haven't found in awhile. ^_^
Update soon!!
:D
rowdysgirl- Fri 20 Jun 2008
I've always maintained that proper punctuation clarifies communication, but you are the author and if pushing two buttons is too much work, then so be it. I wouldn't want ANYTHING to come between you and the next chapter. This is a good start to your story, I am enjoying it very much, so much that I am willing to accept your choices in punctuation with no further comment. As always, it is author's choice.
Khrystyne- Fri 20 Jun 2008
I am definately in love with this story, it is really a different perspective and I like how you incorperated Kagome and gave her soul stealers, it really makes her have a connection with Kikyo. A really good story and I cannot wait for the next chapter. :)
I just can't wait to read more! It's great start. I like the route you are taking with the continuation of the manga/show.
Two Thumbs Way UP!!! Thank you for the opportunity to read your work!
WhiteRose-Kurama- Thu 19 Jun 2008
I wonder what Sess will say when he finds out the whole truth about Kags' situation? And I wonder who else she will encounter w/ her travels? Also, when will u have Kags meet up again w/ the inutachi?
WhiteRose-Kurama- Wed 18 Jun 2008
This is a very interesting twist... soul stealers as companions? I really am curious on how this will all turn out. Keep up the good work and hurry w/ the next chappie :P
danny- Wed 18 Jun 2008
i enjoy the story hope theres more and i think you should put like pov's so that way the readers can understand what the others are thinking and also instead of these " you put ' but its your story and cant wait for the next chap
SabakuMoon- Wed 18 Jun 2008
I love this story. Interesting plot. Never seen anyone use the soul stealers like that. LOVE! Update soon.
accidentalgoddess- Wed 18 Jun 2008
This is really interesting and really good. I like the idea, as sad as it is, and you've done a really good job of setting things up and explaining them. I only have one critical comment, and it's just a punctuation pet peeve. WHen you do dialouge it's supposed to be in quotes or "dialouge" instead of appostraphies like 'dialouge'. Other than that istby bitsty anal retentiveness it's really good and I'm really looking forward to more!
Dark_topaz- Wed 18 Jun 2008
I can't wait for more i hope they traitors learn of their mistake soon
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