wow
that was wonderfully sinful
>:DDD
Inkasha Taisho- Wed 18 Jun 2008
That was..wow!! I feel kind of sinful after reading that, but I must say that if I were one of Sesshomaru's disciples, I would beat Jaken in my worship. Every minute you be a good time to pray!! That was amazing. Excellent. Oh, I can't wait for the next update of Breeding School either!!
velvetfire- Tue 17 Jun 2008
I'm assuming there isn't going to be more? Why of why not? Can't you see that it is aching to be more than just a one shot? I hope you consider making this into an ongoing story.
icekitten4u2love- Tue 17 Jun 2008
dear kiba,
it's a great plot can you please make into more than a one shot. i would like to read any story that contiunes from the ending i would love to see a fight between gods and if the lord of death rules thanks have a great day!!
christten- Tue 17 Jun 2008
i really liked this chapter and i hope you write more soon like....tomorrow lol and i also thought your lemon was just fine
Very good! The idea is an interesting one, I look forward to reading more.
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