Maru-KunKun- Thu 10 Jul 2008
Wuoh !!!
This took a sharp turn, fast ! Wasn't expecting you to go directly into action mode. Twas AWESOME !!! I'm really loving this story. Update soon.

sakurachan_1- Mon 09 Jun 2008
its n interesting fic...
you should continue...
wonder who those
characters were...
mmm...
keep updating

moniq- Sun 08 Jun 2008
Woah!, i really like how this is at teh moment update soon!

Maru-KunKun- Sun 08 Jun 2008
The trailer did it more for me then the first chapter. I mean, it was good, its just that it has been done a few times before, her going back even further in the past. So, if I hadn't seen the trailer, I wouldn't have been as excited about it as I am. On that note, cool trailer! lol. Anyway, I can't wait to see where you take this and how you make it unique and your own creation.

Update Soon. Toodles.
(P.S. when this place stops allowing posts, where are u going?)

Ethereal Siren- Sun 08 Jun 2008
This is a good start for what could be a good story. It definitely gets the reader to be curious about what will happen. I hope you next chapters will be longer, but if the aren't then I guess that's ok. They aren't supper short... just kinda short. Don't worry too much about reviews. A lot of times people won't review a story until it's got a lot more chapters.

helikesitheymikey- Sat 07 Jun 2008
okay....I now looked at the youtube and it ROCKS TOO!

helikesitheymikey- Sat 07 Jun 2008
hmmmm......were the two that knocked her out her kids? I mean her and Fluffy's? maybe that's why fluffy was acting all weird recently....cause he knew it would happen soon....and no I haven't seen the trailer yet but I will after I finish this review.....it sounds very promising so please continue it.

Lisa- Sat 07 Jun 2008
It really is a good start. The trailer is absolutely fantastic, it definitely makes me want to keep reading the story to see how it turns out. Oh and by the way, I think that if you write your story for the sake of writing it and enjoying what you do the reviews will come as oppose to writing the story for the sake of reviews in hopes of people liking it.

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