I realized there was a cultural difference but I didn't say anything until this story. I also understand other cultures in terms of the word and I wanted to make it understood that this wasn't an attack on them or anyone else who had been labeled negatively by the word. I'm glad we're all on the same page. Now back to writing more freaky encounters...
laquiesha- Tue 20 May 2008
this was a great fanfiction.if you write some more can you send it to my email address i would love toread more.i have have loved the whole inuyasha group since i frist saw the show.you are a amazing writer.my email address is an tanglilmama@yahoo.com.keep up your riting and you will be better than steve shellie!!!!
Netealia- Sun 18 May 2008
You should make this into a 2 or 3 shot so that it can make up for the title. I love this series. Keep up the good work! Chow.
Spoony- Sun 18 May 2008
Thanks for clearing it up! Cultural terms I can understand and I had no idea that cultually it can mean something else. it had alwasy been a derogatory term to me.
No offense taken now that i understand. Thanks.
al- Sat 17 May 2008
It never occured to me to complain about any word said,or more specific,written in these series of yours.I have enjoyed reading them,as I'm sure you've derived joy from writing them,so who am I to complain?
You do very well,and if some people have a hard time understanding the concept of love without questions,they're frankly asking the wrong person.That sort is more internal.I like what you've done.I look forward to more.
Take care,and good luck.
Spoony- Sat 17 May 2008
I loved the original story. the first one shot afterward wasn't bad. however, I'm going to be blunt and say I wasn't too impressed with this one. If all their relationship is based on sex, then it's not one, and he can't think he can make things better by sex. however, i don't think that' syour intention, but it did seem shallow to me. at least you had her openly leave on vacation anyhow to show him that it isn't about sex.
I think what I take the greatest exception too is the fact that you call them freaks time and time again. I like a bit of pain during sex. Not a lot, but a bit. That does not make me a freak, nor does it make my partner a freak. it just means we need a little something extra for our pleasure. By calling them freaks you are labelling them and judging them...and though they may be fictional characters, taht label extends to others who are like that.
thank you.
daapatemysoul- Sat 17 May 2008
Loved it. It sounds like something I would do to a boyfriend who was ignoring me. XD
He does need to fulfil that little fantasies of hers of being tied to a tree in nothing but a leather corset, though. XD
*A-Kay*- Fri 16 May 2008
Just browsing on this site and even though I read this already on Dokuga, I wanted to re-read it because it was so entertaining. Lol. You know ever since you left that review I had been wondering what your mind was conjuring up. This was brilliant! K.B.P rocks.
I love basically all your stories. Keep up the good work.
I know I left a review on Dokuga already, but hey... I couldn't resist.
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