This is an extremely well written chapter. (Except for a few typos) The story needs another chapter! Have you continued writing the other chapters? I really want to read them if there are more. Great job!
Aimee- Mon 12 May 2008
great story so far :P
LordSesshomaruLover16- Mon 12 May 2008
love this story its pretty good and amusing looking forward to what happens next so please update soon