It was a wonderful story can't wait to read more

YOU ARE A JERK!!!!! you made her die!!! how could you!!! this fic could inspire emo-ness!!!!!!!!! your such a loser! you better write more and make it just a little happyer, yes? (i cant really talk since with my newest fic shes dead and Sesshy is depressed. BUT STILL!!!) oh yeah and the last two reviews on the list are for that other fic that was coming up the first time i tried to read this. thats funny. but honestly, couldnt you make it a sort of happy ending? PWEASE!!!! *puppy eyes*

Hey,
I really like your ideas and the general flow of this story. It would be even better if you made sure that you grammar and syntax were correct. ;)

I really enjoyed this chappie. Could you make this more than a one-shot? I think this fic as the potential to be a wicked awesome story. :P

Cant wait until the next chapter