the ending on the third chapter was very cute i loved it actullaly please put up more pleaase thanks oh ya can you e-mail me when you put up a new chapter.
ashlea- Tue 29 Apr 2008
this story is good but i notice that you take your sweet time, it is not fair to the people that read these fan-fics. when you go to deliver the story it is common courtesy not to leave people hanging. thank you ashlea
ashlea- Thu 24 Apr 2008
AWESOME TYPE SOME MORE I CANT WAIT! OH AND PLEASE LET ME KNOW BY MY E-MAIL ADDRESS
al- Tue 22 Apr 2008
it could have been longer,but it's quite nice as is.
helikesitheymikey- Tue 22 Apr 2008
awwwwww.....CUTE! please update and may I suggest you have the story marked as Incomplete instead of complete....at least....I'm assuming it's not done yet. I hope it isn't.
I'm adding this story to my favs