Reviews for Subjugation by night flame miko
elvira- Tue 24 Jun 2008
was rin rapded or somethong?..please!..update soon!
Sweet_Dark_Silence- Tue 27 May 2008
You are very welcome, and I look forward to the next installment in your saga.
As for you self-scolding over you late plot formation, so long as you've got it now, that's all that matters.
As for you self-scolding over you late plot formation, so long as you've got it now, that's all that matters.
sweetest angel- Fri 16 May 2008
I can't wait to read more of your story! really great chapter.please please update really really soon!!!
Kula- Thu 15 May 2008
Love the story, keep it up.
Mistress_of_Night- Wed 14 May 2008
I hope you ub\pdate soon.... I really liked this Fic ..... :)
Sweet_Dark_Silence- Wed 14 May 2008
Why not make each chapter about a new step/activity Sess must make/do, and how he grows as a person (becomes a more rounded person).
ascheritt- Fri 09 May 2008
very good for a first chapter. your characteristic of kagome, and how she would feel, along with inu and Kikyo is very in character.
KUDOS to you for not making Kikyo out to be a bitch ( like the majority does), when she trully isn't.
I feel bad for Rin do, that is quite alot of emotional scarring for just a child. I hope she'll be ok eventually.
Kagome would seem like a good choice to help her, in a mothery big sister kinda way.
I can't wait to read more of this.Great job!
I'll be watching this. ^^
KUDOS to you for not making Kikyo out to be a bitch ( like the majority does), when she trully isn't.
I feel bad for Rin do, that is quite alot of emotional scarring for just a child. I hope she'll be ok eventually.
Kagome would seem like a good choice to help her, in a mothery big sister kinda way.
I can't wait to read more of this.Great job!
I'll be watching this. ^^
Megan Consoer- Tue 29 Apr 2008
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
dottie- Sun 20 Apr 2008
you need to write a second chapter this this or it don't seem right to put rin through that other than that i love the way that you place raw emotion into the story pritty good too.
FangedBeasty- Thu 17 Apr 2008
that was so sad! A lovely start to a tragic story though
:)
-FangedBeasty
:)
-FangedBeasty