Sooo, i thnk u should totally up the rating and add sum smut 2 the storyline.
x)
lol
Also...
Luv the story so far!!!!!!

I'm really enjoying this. Keep it up!! Nothing like a good giggle to keep me going when I'm stressed out. and this has been ont giggle after another.

DD

rofl. that's a hilarious chapter! i love it! i was choking on my breakfast while reading it! lol good job and i can't wait for more!

FL

That was very amusing.... I wonder how sango and miroku will react to the truth? And are Sess and Kags starting to fall for each other? Can't wait to find out how Inuyasha takes the truth... that in itself will be very interesting. :P

*big grin* I am so glad that I could read some more of this story before I left to New Brunswick for three weeks. Your plot is amazing and Kagome and Sesshoumaru's interactions are humourus much of the time. I truly enjoy this story and I look forward to reading more.

I believe that your stories are going to be the death of me! I've been sitting here for hours on end reading now ... XD
Please please update soon?? And btw, I love how your portray Sesshoumaru *dreamy sigh*
-A

good chapter. i liked this one better than the last. truth be told, im a lover not a fighter. *grins* lol. can't wait for the next chapter.

FL

Wow! I wonder if Sango and Miroku already figured out that there may be something between sess and kags? What will everyone this of this bond when they find out about it? Can't wait to find out so keep up the good work :P

luv fic update soon pwweaseee ^ ^

Wow! That was intense! Wicked awesome to boot. I wonder if Sess will consider taking Kags as his mate? And I wonder what was going through the rest of the Inutachi's minds? Keep up the good work and hurry w/ the next chappie :P

more stories by you on ffnet? hm...i'll have to chekc that out. neway, this is going to be interesting. i just wish u weren't putting it on hold. :( it's too good to wait long.

FL

love the story Plz updated soon!!!!

I'm surprised at how protective he is already. I suppose Sesshoumaru doesn't do anything halfway. I can't wait for more.

You've made Kikyou and Inuyasha properly infuriating and I like how you have Sesshoumaru helping Kagome out and motivating her to do better, all in the first couple days. She will be extremely strong in no time.

I like your direction, I repeat thet this is a very original plotline that leaves me craving more. They are a little ooc but that is the point of fanfiction, you can shape them as you wish. I must say that I do like how you've shaped them in this story.

Seeing the event through Sesshoumaru's eyes was enlightening and I thank you for showing his perspective.

Very intersting and an original way for them to have their first friendly interaction. I like it.

LOL she flipped him off XD please update soon

Okay so great start, though there is soemthing I really dont' like. Doing the same sceene over again except from a different point of view is really.... annoying, Is the most polite thing I can call it. from my experience people don't want to read the same thing twice it defeats the point your relating things that dont' need to be said again, though if you really need to change the point of view every chapter I do suggest taking over after the previous sceene has ended and then have the other person reflect on what they were feeling at the time or what they were thinking, instead of repeating the sceene I know sometimes it's necessary, but in your future chapters you can always start the other's point of view half way through the previous instead back at the beginning. but anyway I really did like the story so far, but please, please refrain from repeating too many authors do this thinking that it makes the story better when all it does is draw it out unnecessarily. but again I love the story, I want to make that perfectly clear I try to give out constructive critisim as much as possible when i'm reviewing because I want your writing to get better as you go, especally when said person has a gift, and when people just say, "love the story, keep it up" it doesn't tell you anything about your writing all it tells you is that they like it and it peves me when I get reviews like that because I want to know why someone likes or why they dont' reviews are supposed to make you a better writer. any way i'm going to finish with that. and I look forward to the next chapter.

Penelope

meanie. :P lol. i liked it, aside from the cliffie. can u do me a favor? will you email me when you add a new chap? my email is unavailabletoyu@yahoo.com (that's the real email, lol). please and thank you!

FL

i love dis storyXD only problem is da chaps are to short. please update soon

Hmmm...nice story so far. I would like to see where this takes us...nice places I hope :)
A few grammar and spelling errors in places here and there...even though they were there, it did not detract from the story too much in my opinion.

Update soon...*hugs and smiles*

amazing story so far!
u must update soon.
lol

i know what you mean about sesshomaru being in character. here's my logic: all we really know of the taiyoukai is what he's like on the battlefield and how many ppl are the same on the battlefield as off? that's my whole premise for Family Ties. lol.

i thought you did great. just make sure to double space different speeches too. example:

"Kagome talks here."

"Sesshomaru talks here."

like that. ;D you are a good writer. i would suggest getting a beta reader. you have great diction/syntax you just need to work on punctuation. lol.

FL

haha, when you said it was rather fun to write, i immediately thought it was rather fun to read, lols. we finally have insight on lord sesshoumaru's thoughts/feelings! whees! lols. keep updating, this is really good! :] ill be checking for updates everyday!

ooooohhhhhhh.... it's sooo cute.... loving it.... i love their interaction with each other... i love when people protray kag with an understanding nature and see people or demon in this case in a different light.... and love your protrayal of sessh... it was just perfect.... keep up the good work... can't wait to see how their bond going to affect them and people, demon, especially a half demon around them... heheheheeee... update as soon as you can.... thanks

this is absolutely adorable! one thing i suggest is to double-space your paragraphs. it makes it easier for the reader to read. ;D other than that, it was very good. a new twist on a cliche. very good. plz add me to an update list unavailabletoyu@yahoo.com thanx!

FL