WOW, this is getting good. I can't wait til the next chapter. I promise to look in on this fic from time to time. Do you have a update mailing list , if so please put me on. This is wonderful!!!

Now this is intriguing, an entirely different and refreshing spin. Looking forward to more.

EP

You have peaked my interest with this one. It is driving me nutz that you haven't told us how she lost her memory but that is part of why i like this story.
Tilayha

I just read the whole thing and really enjoyed it. Looking forward to updates and am excited to see where you take it!

ya! you updated. well i liked it and i'll definitely be waiting for the next chapter. ;D

FL

Hahaha my first thought was "Rurouni Kenshin"? Glad to see you're a fan as well. Excellent series if I do say so myself. Nice chapter as well. I like this Kagome much better - feisty, determined, and you can tell she doesn't put up with his crap. Well done! I look forward to the next one.

~ Langus

Hmmm interesting. I get the flipping back and forth between periods, but I can see how others would perhaps find it a bit confusing. This story will be really fantastic once you get those slips fixed. Definitely look into how you slip from present tense to past tense during the scenes when Sesshomaru is reminiscing. One thing that kind of irked me, though you did explain it, was Kagome needlessly jumping in the way during Sesshomaru's battle. It just seems sort of, I dunno...I guess uncharacteristic of her. I mean she's brave but she isn't stupid. Jumping in front of a demon unarmed just seems kind of dumb on her part. Ah well, I have faith that you will continue to write a good Kagome. I like how you protray her during the Now scenes - very strong minded and strong willed. On to the next chapter!

~ Langus

Hey there,

Just wanted to say that I really like where this is going so far. It suffers from quite a few typos/errors but as you've said you plan on fixing those all is well and good. The pacing is nice so far, as is Sesshomaru's introspection. It should be interesting to see how things develop from here. From what I can tell this fic seems pretty canon. I've always read AUs as being something completely outside of the canon universe. If it were any different than every fic on this site would be an AU (because of the alt pairing) and I don't know if that's the case. Well, best of luck with your writing :) I'll be sure to review this again.

~ Langus

March 27 is my birthday! Hehe. I just thought it was funny.

Great job so far.

I've never read a fic like this, and it was great! The back and forth isn't really confusing but since the chaps are shot, it seem like each one isn't finished yet... Anywhoo, I can't wait to read the rest.

I liked it, can't wait for more.

:)

-FangedBeasty

this is interesting. i've only seen a few others where she got amnesia but they've never tickled my fancy like this one has. if you would be so kind as to add me to an update list, my email is unavailabletoyu@yahoo.com thanks!

I think your doing a fabulous job with the transitions between the past and present! I'm really getting into this story, it instantly draws you in. And leaves you wanting more! Ha-ha!! Great job! And thank you, for creating such a good story!!

i love sess frustration. I really like how u have develop the story.

I liked it ^.^ Keep up the good work!

THis story would be canon universe deviation because it takes off from the original storyline but doesn't follow any other existing pattern.

Love the idea so far...

I like it. I think this would be a CU, I forget what that means at the moment but AU would be if it didn't follow the manga or anime, like they're all in high school in Kagomes time & such.

I look forward to where you go with this.

AU vs CU, I had the same problem. It would be more CU than AU if you are going to follow most major events of the anime/manga. Other sites expand the categorization of CU. Continuation is usually for the stories that are picking up after Naraku has already been defeated. Divergence is used when the story follows mostly with the anime/manga but changes some signifcant things in order to make their fic work.

Oh, and the other note. NO Matter which one you choose, someone will more than likely disagree. My rule, write well and who cares about the categorization.

EMily