| I LOVED THAT STORY. MY BOYFRIEDN SAID I SHOULD READ IT AND HE SAID THAT THE END WAS REALLY FUNNY AND IT WAS. I LIKE HOW KAGOME WAS ABLE TO TRICK SESSHOMARU INTO THINKING THAT SHE WAS A VIRGEN. I ALSO LIKED HOW KAGOME STOLE SESSHOAMRUS BELT.
jestergirl- Wed 09 Apr 2008
| O.o DAMN!! Good one
I liked it. It had a good twist at the end. In fact, if you wanted to expand your endever into the world of lemons with this theme I have an idea.
Sango and Kagome have both conquered their sob stories, so the next challenge is to get Sesshoumaru to offer a threesome with his two underage students.
As far as lemon content went, you wrote it very well. My suggestion would be to try deiscribing the sensations and physcial aspects of other positions and more foreplay.
I really liked this one shot
Emily
cassie- Tue 08 Apr 2008
| I like it please continue...... another chapter
cassie- Tue 08 Apr 2008
| I like it please continue...... another chapter
gouka chibi fujo- Tue 08 Apr 2008
O_O what the hell hahahahaha I can't believe what I just read. Kagome what!!!!!
that was good, very good XD
louise- Tue 08 Apr 2008
| one word fabulous :D laugh my ass of in the end :D love it how you portray kagome and sango
| Great little romp. The little minx! Plural! Smexy as hell, especially considering all the hot IY boy-men are completely oblivious. Loved it!
Faye- Tue 08 Apr 2008
| What I liked about this is at the end it wasn't one of those "they were really already together" type fics. Good job.
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