I'm rather impressed with the time and effort you are taking with this story. The way you are writing it is very pleasing to my senses as the very good stories will draw me in and I'll stop reading the story and start watching it with my minds eye. You have done just this with your use of sensual words and careful imagery. Please continue writing on this as I'm waiting ever impatiently for each chapter to come out.

DD

i hope u update soon

Excellent story!

please update soon

Very nice writing. You're taking both the story and the healing progress at decent paces. I am very much looking forward to the next chapters, and seeing Kagome purify that stupid bug right out of exisitance *smirk*. Take care, and keep writing!

DD

might be da fact dat sesshys not in his cute true form idk. please update soon

heya, this was a good chapter (altho short) i really liked it. can't wait for more! ;D

FL

oh that's hilarious "Mister-I'm-so-perfect-mud-prefers-to-flee-screaming-than-to-stain-my-perfectly-white-silk-robes" that's simply ingenious. where the heck do you come up with this stuff? lol. and sess cuddling Jaken? oh you're a genius, really and truly. roflmao *gigglesnort* oh, oh, oh, i love this story.

FL

aww...that ending line was sooo sweet!! *sniff* aw, seriously, you're good with the fluff. ;D

FL

I reviewed on ff.net....I love this story! You are doing a fantastic job! There is a good balance of narrative with meaningful dialogue....and like a previous reviewer mentioned, the action with Shippo keeps the tale moving along. It'll be interesting to see how Sess deals with the Scorpio youkai.

I wanted to reassure you that your command of the English language is impressive...much better than even many writers who are native speakers. Whereas many just communicate actions, you do that in addition to communicationg emotion, nuance, and subtle characters quirks. I want more of this story!!!!

mamasama
Amy

good story

I adore the painstaking care you take with developing Sesshoumaru's feelings. His observations entwined with his memories make for a rare, precious glimpse inside his growth as a man...er, youkai...ah, you get the idea. The scene with Shippo was a nice, definitely brisk and suspenseful change of pace. It effectively moved the plot along but also transitioned back into Sesshomaru's inner monologue for a tidy, satisfying end to this chapter. I'm really engrossed in this story and can't wait to read more!

I really love this chapter, especially the last sentence. It's a beautiful visual signifying the deep, unexpected repose they find it each other, almost hinting at how they aren't complete without the other. I know that's somewhat jumping the gun as far as Sesshoumaru would be concerned, but isn't he already sensing a change of course between them? Your progression seems very well-paced and natural, considering the circumstances. It's respectful of what Kagome's endured while making their growing affection believable. I'm really excited to read more of this.

YAY XD hope u update soon

I really enjoyed this chappie. I wonder if Sess will fall for Kags in the near future? Will Kagome be able to put this traumatic experience behind her? Keep up the good work and hurry w/ the next chappie :P

i hope u can update soon

So Kagome was raped by more than a few ronins? Did they know or care that she was the Shikon Miko? I wonder what sort of training Kags will receive and if retribution will be dealt to the ones who hurt her? Keep up the good work and hurry w/ the next chappie:P

I'm really liking how this story is progressing. You balance a sweet tenderness in Sesshoumaru's burgeoning compassion with Kagome's heart-rending pain. It'll be an interesting take on the "healing-an-injured-party" theme because these wounds are not physical, and both characters have the chance to heal each other in many ways. I'm eager to read more.