mama-sama,
I just finished the last of all the chapters you have written. I for one, am enamored with your idea of Rin and Inuyasha as mates! I love that, a very different couple, which I like. Don't get me wrong I'll read an older Rin/ Sesshomaru fanfic, but I can never really bring myself to finish them. This story was original, funny and sweet. Who really does like to be ignored by husbands or mates, who you rarely see and then when they do come home, they fall asleep! No one likes that and I love how you showed that even though Kagome is Lady of the West and Sesshomaru's mate, she still has that sassiness that makes her Kagome! My favorite part though, was when Rin denied Inuyasha! Classic angry girl move, and perfect Inuyasha (men in general) denseness. Keep up the good work and I can't wait to read more. Also one more, I love how you made the son look Sesshomaru but still have his mother's heart. Kudos to you.

um i love this story, i think you capture the characters wonderfully. THe story flows i had just intended to glance at it and then i was at the end. so keep it up

I love your story so far, its totally amazing and funny. I love the plot line and your writing style is totally awesome =D

Okay, before I review I'm going to address that "reviewer..." Is he/she kidding? How the hell would a 13 year old even begin to relate to the problems marriage/relationships have? Girl boo! Don't even sweat that sh*t. I was hooked from the 1st chap because I could RELATE. This story speaks to an adult crowd.

Now that's done... Funny chap! I still think she should've snuck out the window. I was totally waiting for her to creep out! *LOL*

i'm enjoying this piece. nicely written and entertaining, and boy does it sure hit home with me... *lol*

This is definitely getting interesting. I wonder how Kags will get back at Sess? And can Sess handle being around Kagome's friends? I look forward to seeing what u have in store for them. Also, when will Kagome find out that she's pregnant?

hey, i'm just a reader here. just wanted to drop by and say i thought your work was good, I've read a ton of these fanfictions and written a few to say that as far as what I've read I haven't considered you as a novice. The grammar and formatting is very organized, the plot is quite good and it isn't scrambled like some works are. I say keep up the good work, i'm looking forward to the next update

hey, i'm just a reader here. just wanted to drop by and say i thought your work was good, I've read a ton of these fanfictions and written a few to say that as far as what I've read I haven't considered you as a novice. The grammar and formatting is very organized, the plot is quite good and it isn't scrambled like some works are. I say keep up the good work, i'm looking forward to the next update

I personally like your story and your writting. Some people make there fanfics to wordy when they add too many details. You have to leave somthing to the imagination.

I love this story. I love how one minute Kagome and Sess are lovy dovy and the next they are at odds.

Hey sweetie, I love your story. Don't let the pricks who flame you and don't respond get you down. Your writing will get better as you write. I'm an author on ff.net under DeathFrost and I know exactly how it is. Just give it your all and reread what you write after a couple days, see if there's anything you want to change. You have a problem, you can e-mail me and I'll help if I can. Unfortunately, there are people that just try to make you miserable and they seem to multiply. But really, your story is really good and I really love it. I'm looking forward to more.

My only issues seems that the HTML on the story isn't working so well in this chapter. It looks like you have a BOLD tag that wasn't capped, and a center tag that was left un-capped near the end. Other than that, I think your story reads just fine.

(Though you should shy away from the FLASHBACK thing, because it's really a device that's used in screen-plays and scripts rather than works of prose (IE: story format). If you want to show something that happened in the past, it's best to find ways to integrate it into the story, rather than: Kagome remembered... FLASHBACK Kagome's memories, yada-yada-yada FLASHBACK. Just eliminate those FLASHBACK queues. They're unnecessary and they severely interrupt the flow of the story. And if your readers can't tell that she's remembering by the fact that you actually said that... well, it's really their problem and not yours.)

Anyway, that's my advice. I have more good advice... some bad. Some mediocre. And a few bits that are downright stupid. If you're ever in a bind, feel free to email me. I don't mind so much giving out free advice. After all, I was once in your shoes being new to the writing thing... and it's up to us veterans to help you newbies, right? So, no worries.

I agree that Kags is being a brat but i think that she should be allowed to act out once in a while. Especially since he kind of deserves it. I wonder how Kagome could get revenge on him for so many months of pent up frustration? Anyways, keep up the good work and hurry w/ the next chappie :P

She is SO not being a brat! He knew before he mated her that she was NOT the submissive type. Get real. I have to reasert myself alllllllll the time with my b/f. "You knew I was this way when we met! Don't act all surprised now (over a year later) & if you expect me to change (certain things) you're wasting your time!" Get him Kags! Climb out the window & don't come back till tomorrow. Stupid, pushy, Sessy. He needs to learn when to give in (privately & just betweeen them of course). what kind of married man is he anyway? Surely his father taught him the wife is ALWAYS right. It keeps peace in the house, beer in the frig, & the game on TV uninterupted. The man is the head of the house, this is true... but the woman is the NECK & she can turn the head any way she wants!

Anywho, you are doing an awesome job with this fic! Keep up the great work & I'll be watching for the next update.

I absolutly LOVE this fic!!! I completely agree with the way that you are writting Kagome. My husband's job requires him to work insane amounts of overtime, which leaves me at home alone, with 2 kids under the age of 5. It's so infuriating!! I'm glad that you have written a story that is more like real life. I find a lot of fics make marriage out to be all sunshine and roses, without ever needing any real work to keep the passion alive and keep from drifting apart. I think though, most of that is due to the fact that a lot of authors are younger, and have no experience in this area. It's far more difficult than when your just dating I find. (Man, I'm only 24, but I feel so old saying that! Oh well, c'est la vie!)
Keep up the great work, and I'm dying to read the next chapter!!

Great story. I look foward to the rest of the chapters.and she is being a brat but when is she not.

Great story. I look foward to the rest of the chapters.and she is being a brat but when is she not.

wow great chapter!!!

I love your story its really fun to see the interactions between characters happen.
So update soon.

Ooooh....I love this chapter. I can't wait to see what happens. Please update again soon.

I absolutely LOVE this fic! I can't wait to read the next chapter. Please don't end it too soon. I'm enjoying it too much for it to be so short!

I like it and sorry but I agree with Kagome. That could definitely be explained by my age (older than 20 and less than 30) and the fact that I am not nor was I ever married. I have never had the pleasure of thinking in terms of more than one individual (myself), so I'm like go Kagome. I mean she had to find a way to get his attention (maybe not necessarily that way but hey it worked), he couldn't simply kept going on neglecting his mate and his son for cripes sake! So I guess we'll be seeing a lot of character growth in her which makes me wonder what Sesshou's growth will be. I was surprised at how long it took him to go after her, I would have thought he would have skedaddled just as soon as he found her whereabouts.

wowie. she's in a bit of a bitchy mood, not that I can blame her. I probably would've reacted the exact same way (minus the stomping back up to my room like a two-year-old)

I don't think she is being a brat. She is a modern woman trying to live in the feudal era. Of course she is going to revolt when he orders her around.
Great chapter! update soon.
LadySafire

I love this story. Personally I don't feel like Kagome is being a brat. Who would not get upset at an absent husband who thinks they can give you orders when they decide to show up.

That was an awesome update! I think you captured Sesshomaru's personality perfectly!! I can't wait for more, i love this story!!!

amazing story truly!!! i love it.. and will await more chapters.. =)

haha, I think I've witnessed this scenario somewhere before. This story is quite comical and true to life. I can't wait for your next update.

Hey, tis is very cute especially with Sesshoumaru going into lala land^_^
and also you should change your story tilte to Desperate House Wife beacause Kagome surely sound like oneLOL(^o^)
Great Job!!

part of me just can't help but think she's being so childish. But then again, we women can get that way when emotions get involved.

somebody is in for a rude awakening haha :P great chapter, this is a cute story!

i love your story but do you think you could e-mail me when you update?please

OO! So close, so close! I swear the anticipation is killing me.So, as that implies...well done. I'll just sit here and squirm until the next chapter and Sesshomaru wakes up....*Grin*

Hahaha. This is going to be sooo interesting. I wonder how Kags' mom can help her w/ her sex life? I hope Sess and Inuyasha can figure this out cuz they're kinda screwed if they don't. Keep up the good work and hurry w/ the next chappie :P

hahahahahah go kags!!!

i love it, i just loce tortures like this, and annyances to spouses, lol.

CONTINUE!

Ja ne !
moniQ

Hehehe... Looks like Sess is in for it. I can't wait to see how Kags plans on seducing him. Keep up the good work and hurry w/ the next chappie :P

"Laughing so hard she actually fell of her chair" This is really good. I love the way you show how things go, after the initial pink haze - coming from the first months married - disappears. There aren't enough stories that deal with this aspect. I'm looking forward for the next chapter. :D

The title is hystarical! That's what caught my attention. Can't wait for chapter 3!

The title is hystarical! That's what caught my attention. Can't wait for chapter 3!

Oh, this is great. I can't wait to see what happens when Sesshomaru gets his wake up call!

Hmmm... I wonder what she's up to. If Sesshy wakes up & leaves any other time, will he notice his son is gone? Of course I think Jaken will pop a blood vessel trying to snitch once the taiyoukai wakes up. I can't wait to see what happens!

I like you story, it's funny and original. I'll be watching for an update.

I'm having a ball reading it!! Keep up the good work!

OM-F-G! You had me at "Oh hell... she wants this Sesshomaru's cock pounding into her for hours." *ROTF* I TOTALLY feel Kag's pain. My b/f works construction & is out of town all week so when he gets home on Friday night, he's completely beat & wants nothing to do but sleep - but me? Oh hell no! I'm ready to pounce like a freakin' tiger. *LOL* Poor Kagome! I love this story already. Please continue writing... hell, maybe I can get some advice! *LOL* Awesome job.

Haha this is going to be good XD

oooo this will be good... im already smiling thinkin' bout all the stuff she could do! your writing flows easily and is a pleasure to read. keep up the good work im sure you have several of us anticipating kag's next move.

Hahaha... Sess is going to be in deep trouble when he wakes up. I look forward to all that Kagome has in store for him. So please keep the chappies coming cuz I dying to find out what she'll be planning. :P

Cute fic, I like how it totally relates to the real world, and not fantasyland. The writing is great too. Keep it up ; ) I'll be looking forward to the next chapter.

XD I find it great. And being a housewife I know the efforts it takes. There have been many times when mine did just that. Was too tire to do anything while I'm ready and waiting. >:/ SO please continue! I wanna see how this story goes!