Oh update this soon! I love it! Hmmmm..lookslike our favorite dog demon is intrigued by our nanny.LOL
I am geting a kick out of Rin. She reminds me of my daughter so much. She's one of those super smart kids too.
The Chapter was great!!
Hugs,
LadySafire
marquisha- Mon 21 Apr 2008
| please please please update the story soon this is a great story i wonder what will happen next in the story
E- Fri 11 Apr 2008
| excellent chapter. i love it keep on writing and don't worry how the story turns out as long as your happy with it. nothing else matters but your opinion about your story
Kawaii_Kilala- Wed 09 Apr 2008
Right, well, i dont usually read PG-13 material, but the title caught my attention, and the fact that little Rin is in it as well caught my interest immediatly! I love the fact that Rin still has her trade mark side-pony-tail, and that she has her orange and white jacket too! She is also a GREAT judge of character too! lol And the fact that she has her father seceretly wrapped around her finger is a bonous in its-self, lol! The way she hardly cries, unless she's ploting somethig to get her dad to do something, is really great! I can't wait for Kags to arrive at the mansion, even though Sesshy isn't there, she can still get the house to love her! I'm wondering why you didn't have her question why it pays $20 or more per hour, for just being a nanny? I mean, when i play nanny for a friends kid, i get paid $10, maybe even &15, never that much! lol, and the trips are paid for too! I would wonder why they have the pay so high, for just watching a kid, and wonder if maybe the kid is vindictive or plays pranks on the other nannys.....just wondering!
GREAT STORY! Up-Date SOON!!!!!!
TTYL;
joanne
I like the new chappy. ya might wanna know that you accidentally copied it down twice though.....
PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
Sarah and Lily- Mon 07 Apr 2008
We loooooove this story!!! (Yes, we are two different people reading online in each other's home). XD
Update soon, please!!
Ja ne,
Sarah and Lily
SLOLA- Mon 07 Apr 2008
| just so u know chappie two was posted twice on the same page...but other than that i liked it so far...UPDATE SOON!!
Elena- Mon 07 Apr 2008
I LOVE it so far! Please update soon!
~~Elena~~
Eternallove_495- Mon 07 Apr 2008
Weee!!! I love it!!!
Please update soon
toni- Mon 07 Apr 2008
| So far its good! but the lines need more spacing to make it easier to read! updare soon plz!!!!!!!!!
LadySafire- Mon 07 Apr 2008
Wonderful chapter! You write Rin so well! Keep up th egreat work and update soon. I am dying o see how this all plays out.
LadySafire
LadySafire- Mon 07 Apr 2008
Wonderful chapter! You write Rin so well! Keep up th egreat work and update soon. I am dying o see how this all plays out.
LadySafire
| ooohhhhhh i am loving it.... loved the 1st chap and i love chap 2.... continue the good work.... hope to see another update soon..... thanks
moniQ- Mon 07 Apr 2008
| aww i love it, i love it,Please continue. the main plot has begun i assume, this will be interesting
valentine- Mon 07 Apr 2008
| ITS TRUE THE WHOLE BABYSITTING PLOT MIGHT HAVE BEEN OVER USED BUT U MADE YOURS QUITE INTERESTING WITH THE WHOLE RIN AND STUFF I LIKE IT ITS REALLY A GOOD FIC SO PLZ UPDATE SOON!!!!
You didn't wait till May-ish! Yay! Even though it was only a month {Give me a break, it was late at night} Rin is so cute. 'I just don't like them.' I used to say that a lot..
I really liked this chapter. Can't wait till the next!
..And that didn't really say anything about why I liked this chapter, huh? Sorry...
Love and fudgesicles~ Tainted
I love this one already. I know it's going to be a good read. Rin is so adorable and smart in this story, you can't help but love her...hope Sess finds Kags smart and lovable.
Btw, only found a few minor spelling and grammar errors here and there but no worries.
Looking forward to future updates.
*hugs and smiles*
Oh My Gosh!!!! ANOTHER Cool Story By U? Hurrah!! I'm So Exited! This Is a Really Cute Story So Far!!!! Please Update As Soon As U Can!!
Kagome-Chan
What I really like about this story, is that you made Rin old enough to actually atempt this type of action. Too many times other authors have fallen into trap of trying to make Rin young and cute, but for too intellectually mature. I have complete faith that you will steer clear of the other plot sink holes, that are inherient to this type of plot.
I have yet to see one set up quite this way. Whenever you update, I will enjoy.
Please keep up the excellent work.
Emily
May-ish? What do you mean MAY-ish? Do you know how many months away that is?!
...I really don't care to count. Anyway, I really like the story line so far. Please update as soon as you can..
sparky- Tue 01 Apr 2008
The Canadian English doesn't bother me, but if you are using a pronoun to describe an object or objects, 'this' is singular and 'these' is plural. (Ex. This word is spelled correctly. These words are spelled correctly)
Thanks for enduring my grammar lecture. I like this fic so far, and I look forward to your next update.
LadySafire- Tue 01 Apr 2008
Dear Angel,
Ignore those flames. They are nothing but mean spirited people who all they can do is make others lives misrable,ok?
I love your stories especially this new one. I can't wait to read more.
Keep at it and don't let a few mean people get you down.
Hugs,
LadySafire
Nya- Tue 01 Apr 2008
| I think this is adorable just like little Rin please update soon, I can't wait to find out how she pulls this off.
E- Tue 01 Apr 2008
Really good so far. plz write more. I want to know if Kagome finds out what Rin was up to all this time and how shocked Sesshomaru is going to be
Thanks
E
Bay- Tue 01 Apr 2008
| I love this story so far! Very good plot, something fresh - and the style of writing is wonderful. Keep it up, and I hope you update soon! [:
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