YESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS.

i love your story!!

well that was ... different. Not bad, but def an alternate lifestyle type of situation. The writing and grammer was good.

i really like were this is going.

kinda like shorts but still gives the reader enought info to keep the interest.

i think it's sweet how the 3 of them are best friends and so close...

and i actually like naraku in here. he's so... different. ^^

can't wait for the next chappie
3 3 3

ok, i REALLy like naraku in here O_o::

aww... that was nice.

how they were together after everything.

please update soon.

i want to know what happens next