Hey this is a really awesome fanfic. Sesshomaru was defenitly OOC in this one but it was still a good OOC it wasn't like you took away his grace and his poise you just had him help Kagome. So I like to commend you on your fic because not most people can pull that off, and the fact that you pulled it of in the first two chapters is even more amazing. So again I say your fanfiction was absolutely amazing
Darkness- Tue 22 Apr 2008
heehee update soon i loved Sessy was off a bit but hey it was a small short touch of a masterpiece
Jasmine- Tue 22 Apr 2008
wow i didnt see that comin plz write more
Miss Jess`- Sat 29 Mar 2008
Wow! Your writing is amazing, it flows perfectly together...i'm dieing to read more! I just can't get over how smart your writing is!! Good job!!!
aww please dont get lazy and continue!
*Crazy Asian*- Sat 29 Mar 2008
I love the first chapter please update soon! cant't wait 4 the next chapter.
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