| I think that your poems were really great, I like how you did your rhyme scheme and how the verses were written. I wish that you would do another poem where they get together or maybe in the point of view of their son. That would be cool, keep up the good work!
Ayame- Wed 23 Apr 2008
| Oh my gosh it took me less than a minute to read both poems but they were so touching and it proves to me that desire for one another among to people can be huge put some will never let it be shown. Truthfully I think I'm one of those people who won't show there love for some one because I'm scared to be shot back down. What do you think?
Nancy- Sun 20 Apr 2008
| Those two poems were amazing, I loved them very much, and I liked that they rhymed. Good job, keep it up.
To sad for my likings other than that its okay. Make happier poems maybe I will leave nicer reviews. SO please writ happier peoms next time.
-Sweetbunny
Nooo! Oh, god, it made me cry. I enjoyed it immensly, but.. Poor Kagome. Poor Sesshy.
....Is there any way that they could end up together..? Happy?
Love and fudgesicles~ Tainted
| Those were sweet! Sad but sweet! Nice job...
| dat waz so beautiful!!!! (sniff sniff) :) =) ^.^ but now u should do one in sess's point of view. ^_^
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