This is a really good plot, but like on the other story (not to be rude) you can use a beta, and slightly longer chapters. ( I hope that you read mine and LadyNight's reveiws so that you can find out what a beta is, since you asked.) Gook Luck! And do you think that you can write more chapters, please. ^_^
Megan Consoer- Sat 22 Mar 2008
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
