aww man it's already over and i wanted to read more...... awesome story btw so when are u gonna write more? plz tell me throug my email when u write some more in other sites

aww man it's already over and i wanted to read more...... awesome story btw so when are u gonna write more? plz tell me throug my email when u write some more in other sites

please tell me where i can find the rest of the story or when you going to have the the story's please tell us scence you are going to have to put it one a different website scence this one is going to be read only

In chapter... 2 or 3, when describing the differences between Inuyasha and Sesshomaru's fighting styles, you used the word 'bronze', which is a type of metal, where you should have used 'brawn', which means muscles and strength. You might wanna fix it. Oh, if you need a beta, let me know, okay?

i hope u update soon

yeah dat was good please update soon

I woild like to say that I love your stories. I like when Kagome is tough and mature. That's how she should be after being in the fedual era for so long. Who wouldn't grow up. And as for Sesshomaru having "PUPS" I like it. Gives him a more approachable chacter. Besides if the way to man's heart is through his stomach. A woman's should through children. Let's face Kagome's a sucker for the Lil ones.

Being friends with that sorcerer is certainly handy.

wow I didn't expect tat. cool.

yeah! Kagome/Sessh action~! XD

I like the direction you are taking this part 2. I am curious to see what you will do about the dreaded "wish."

update soon plz

Ignore what they said about it being cleche, this is one of the more original stories I have seen on A Single Spark.

Besides, it is amazing the way it is.

Update soon please =)

I did not think it wrong of you for giving Sess a son and you should'nt worry about clique's.
If you have a story and want to tell that story you should write it as it comes to you no matter the repeated material.
It does not matter the Inu fandom has a long and glorious writing pool it would be difficult not to mention impossible to write a completely new original story and your efforts might becomes contrived in the process if you worry about what has been done before.
It all has been done or written before the only thing a writer can do is be true to their vision if you do this their is no way you can write a stagnant or unimaginative story.
Continue your work I am thrilled whenever I see an update.

This is a great story! Please write another chapter soon!

luved it!!!!cant wait 4 u 2 write another chap^_^!!!!!!!!!!
ps:peac+luv+respect=happiness

im so happy that you updated its getting so good keep up the good work i cant wait to read more

Oh! I am so very touched *tears*. A chapter dedicated to moi!

:D Thanks. And Sesshoumaru having a kid is so NOT cleche- I think there may be like 2 (very popular, rather long, but only 2 nonetheless) stories out with Sesshoumaru having fruit of his loins running around. Rin doesn't count- she's cannon, And that is my final say on THAT. humph.

I love the new addition to the Pack. I'm grinning like a cheshire cat at the possibilities for mayham. I'll be looking forward to your next update-

Thanks for sharing,
Kyuthe

^_^ Awsome. Poor kid. I can't wait to see what happens.

woah im so stumped on this one his son woah bby lol update soon the 1st book was amzing

I'm so happy you started the sequel! And the recap was nice; as you said, it tied up some loose ends from the first story. The ending I wasn't expecting, so I can't wait to see what happens next. I look forward to the next chapter!

dude. a kid huh...hmm...so kagoem will eith look at the kid and go aw.. and then get annoyed that she didn't know or the other way around. Whatever way it goes down, it promises to be good. ^___^

Well wasn't expecting that...what a surprise.
Love your story it is a fun read.

Ugh, not another fic with Sess already having a kid. I was looking forward to reading the rest of your series, but now I'm not. Him having a kid from out of nowhere in a "canon" story is starting to be a cliche, and I wished you didn't add to it.

YEA! They are Pack, the long awaited sequal of sorts to I am Alpha!, is now availible. Hairann is a wonderful author who's name can be attached to only the best fictions found in fandom. What new and exciting twists and turns do we have to look forward to? Only our exaulted author knows, but the suspense is worth the wait! Du dun DUhhhhhH!

ha! I'm excited about this if you couldn't tell. Awesome intro into a new story. I'd love it if you could give us a more detailed description of the pup in question.

Thanks for the update,
Kyuthe