Really? He's Going 2 Go Back 2 His Normal Self? That's Gr8!!!! But I Hope You're Not Doing That b/c I Seemed Upset!! It's Your Story, and I Like How Your Story Is Going! Please Don't Change Anything On My Account, Although....It May Seem Selfish of Me 2 Think That I Could Have That Much Influence On U. But I Just Want 2 Make Sure!!!! Anyway, Please Update As Soon As U Can!!

Kagome-Chan

Great story! I am very much waiting with baited breath to find out what's next in store fore our little miko. I know saddly that this web site will be on read only status soon so if you plan to write this story some where else please let me know. Thanks so much.

ive been reading this fic for quite some time now (whenever i get the time) and i enjoy it very much!!
plz write chapter 10 soon!!!
i like how u made things a little different from same old fan fics (green eyes) keep that up and make some twistes if u can,
think out side the box, make new people, and add some lusty eyes, lips, and hands too (LEMON!! i can smell it) jp lol
thank u

this entity named,
ashy_sama

This Was a Gr8 Chapter!!!! But WHY is InuYasha Being So Mean?!?! I Feel Bad!! But If Sesshomaru Comes 2 Save Kagome, That Will B Repatiton 2. Anyway, Please Update As Soon As U Can!

Kagome-Chan

For the love of any thing that is holy update i love it

i raelly like your stry
please wriet more soon
Ja Ne

dude....please keep it flowing

Oh... Gods....

This story is AWESOME!!!!

Kagome's feelings, her realisations, the plot, the drama, Naraku's dark plans... Seshoumaru's SEXYNESS!!!!!! [And his little best! ^w^ Gods I love that Beast!]

I can't wait to see what comes from now on.... Naraku seems to be high on evilness with this new kidnapping, And I've got the feeling that a certain Demon Lord won't be happy about a certain Half-Demon latest actions... Gods! The thinkness of the trama is chocking me... and I couldn't be Happier! xD

I don't know you, But while reading your fic, I got the sudden need to wack Inuyasha up his head... with a crow bar o.O Is that wrong? xD ...And well... there is also the *squealing* need to hug Rin... and Shippo... and Sota... And Kirara... seeshhhh... I guess the chocolate I ate while reading is showing off... if the constant squealing wasn't proof enough... o.O

Oh well, I guess I better stop my quie-long-and-a-little-useless rambling... xD

Hope see you around soon!

Ja nE!!!!!!

I love this fanfic!!! I cannot wait for the next chapter!!!
Hope all is well,
Chloe

I love this fanfic!!! I cannot wait for the next chapter!!!
Hope all is well,
Chloe

I like how this story is going so far. It seems very interesting. I would, however like to offer my services as a beta. If you are interested please e-mail me. I have a couple of stories on this site if you would like to see samples of my work.

I think you have a great plot line going so far, and I would like to help you with some of the details. ^_^

Damn, that was intense till the very end...
Plz update soon..

This story is really good. There were some spelling and grammer errors, but believe me, I know all about that, as I've noticed many errors in my own works only after I have posted them XD!

Anyway, I'm only a couple of chapters in right now, but the story has truly held my interest, which is quite an accomplishment, as I bore very easily. Great job so far !!! ^_^

meh, again sorry about the wait. i got swamped at school and finally found some time to beta yours and others' stories. so i'm working on ch 11 right now. ;D

FL

WHAT!? It ends there? Man I swear cliff hangings should be out lawed! I was so into the story I wasn't keeping track of how many chapters I had left to read. So I was socked to not find the link to the next chapter ;-;

Please update soon! I feel like an addict going through withdraw.

>, I loved this chapter.
and I realized the second thime I read it that you didn't mean I was angry. -_-` I was jsut worried you thought I was. But i love your fica and can't wait to see what happens next. I liked how you had him get her to tell what happened.

This Was Kindove a Boring Chapter, But I KNOW It Will Get Better. Your a Gr8 Writer, So I Can't Wait 4 the Next Chapter!!!! Please Update As Soon As U Can!!

Kagome-Chan

Wow this story is just so rich. I hope you update at the earliest convenience...which I also hope is soon! lol

Ah....Sango's Thinkin!!!! She's 2 Smart!! Please Update As Soon As U Can! It Seems Like Its Going 2 Start Getting REALLY Good Now!!!!

Kagome-Chan

Ok that was a majorly eevvviilll cliff hanger!!!! You update soon, I'm dying to know what happens. That was a really good chapter by the way.

I am loving this story so far! It really picked up my otherwise not-so-great day...Thanks so much, and I will keep an eye out for updates....*S*

Wonderful, can't wait for the next chapter.

Great story so far! xD Although, there are a few spelling and grammar errors in your text. Apparently you keep forgetting to use the word "not" in some of your sentences so when I read them it was confusing. Also there was one chapter where instead of using the word "It" you used "I". Those are just some of the ones I thought you might want to fix. Other then these few mistakes I thought your story was well done. ^_^

lol ^___^ I wasn't angry. I just got all excited. ^__^ I loved this chapter, and can't wait to see what happens. Seeing you update was like a mini gift.

Nice! I finally got caught up and I'm glad to see updates. The only problem I found was that I had to read it a couple of times because I wasn't sure how Sesshomaru showed up. I thought he was an illusion created by naraku until the third chapter.

Don't worry about OOC...I enjoy them very much...I prefer characters that have different ranges the their personalities...it makes the story more interesting.

Woot!!!! She's Back w. Sesshomaru Again!! I Hope At Least ONE of Them Figures Out They Have Feelings 4 the Other Soon! Or....Maybe Kagome Doesn't....Yet(?) Anyway, Please Update As Soon As U Can!!!!

Kagome-Chan

I just started reading your fic and love it! ^___^ I was so eager to read it that I was shocked when I came to the last chapter. ;_; Can't wait to see what happens next.

That chapter was great! My only question is what happened to Kagome's mother and grandfather?? or is that to be explained later? Anyway, again great job on an awesome loooong chapter. I can't wait for the update!

yay!!! a new chapter..
please continue writing and indulging me with your enticing story..

I enjoy this story and will be looking forward to when you update next.

Emily

I swear, if I were in Kag's shoes and Yasha kicked me in my wounded side and then had then never to get snippy, he would have been one DEAD puppy *evil grins*

I know Kagome is pretty much in character but geezs she needs to grow some balls when it comes to Inuyasha. *lol*

Looking forward to updates.
*hugs and smiles*

That chapter was much better! I can't wait to see what happens.

I understand entirely the slow process of writing, and I never mean to hurry you with my little quirks of 'please update soon'. It is in, I hope, a flattering light that I am describing my desire to read your work in such an informal way. Please accept any and all grievances if my words were misinterpreted in any other way. 3 because I do love this story, and I hope you update soon. 3

Grrrr InuYasha's Such a Jerk!!!! Y All of a Sudden Is He So Mean? I Don't Get It!! And Kikyo Holding the Jewel Shards? She Could Give Them 2 Naraku Again! GAH!!!! That Wemon Pisses Me Off!! Anyway, Please Update As Soon As U Can!

Kagome-Chan

Your Story Is Gr8!!!! I Really Enjoy It!! But U Have a Lot of Spelling and Grammer Mistakes, and It's Sometimes Hard 2 Read b.c It Makes No Sense. If U Don't Already Have a Beta I Would B Happy 2 Beta 4 U! Just Let Me Know If U Want Me 2!!!!

Kagome-Chan

Hi, just to let you know I'm still enjoying this story, but do have a few...... observations to make 1) I think it would really enhance your story if you could find someone to help edit it for you. Some of the sentences are starting to become a bit confusing. 2) Maybe try to touch on Kagome's emotions a bit more. What she is thinking and feeling about the situation with Sesshoumaru, and how she feels about the abduction. I would also suggest developing her feelings of insecurity wrought by Naraku's manipulation during her captivity.

Lovely chapter, yay *does happy dance* don't worry bout' updating right away, sometimes things just happen. I hope that your nan's surgey goes all right. Can't wait for more.

:)

-FangedBeasty

Can't wait for your next chapter, love the story.

you're most welcome. update soon! ^__^

oh cant wait for the next few chapters girl keep up the great work hunni.

from the sweetone!!!

Well hopefully the new chapter comes out soon because I can not wait to read more! Lovely job.

:)

-FangedBeasty

no worries. I hope you update soon. this seems like a very interesting story! If you ever need help with anything, lemme know! ^__^

You are doing a good job so far. I'm interested to see where this goes. Please update soon!

PLEASE update soon!!! I want to see what happens next! Hmmm, I wonder if the title is foreshadowing anything?? Lol, update soon please!

Uh, okay...I like your story. I really do. I like the mindfuck thing that Naraku has going on and it'll be interesting to see how you bend that.

The only issue I have is just a personal quirk of mine and it absolutely has nothing to do with the story in that degree. It's your use of the japanese words and the addition of the dictionary at the end. You have to be cognizant of the fact that your audience is mostly an english speaking one, so it's cool to use the japanese words (I use "miko" quite a bit when I'm using Sesshomaru to address Kagome angrily but he's snotty like that), but when you have to include a dictionary, perhaps you're using too many and should consider the english words. It doesn't make your story less authentic or less readable because it seriously is. If I as the reader have to keep going back and forth between the words and the dictionary, I'm going to eventually see that as a waste of time and give up. What I mean by that is a story should flow with your reader's focus on the story, not trying to guess what the words mean.

I will be reading...again, I did enjoy it...

LOVE THIS STORY POOR KAGOME KIDNAPPED BY NARAKU WHERE IS INUYASHA OH WAIT WITH KIKYO OFCOURSE WELL UPDATE SOON LOOKING FORWARD TO WHAT HAPEENS NEXT UPDATE SOON PLEASE.....