Hi,
I like the story. The idea is interesting and has a lot of potential to grow into an awesome fic. I specially like the diary entries as it gives character to the story, and gives it depth. Though some would say that the entries are too long and could be shortened a bit, I think that they're just fine.

Inuyasha is gay! ::laughs:: Nice touch.

My suggestion to you to improve the story is, please give a little thought to the characterisation of each character. While you described what each character was wearing, after reading all these chapters, I'm still not totally clear on what each character is like - specially kagome. Is she meek, angry, strong, confident, bitchy, smart, flirty???

Your grammar and spelling is good for the most part.

I expect with a little tweaking, this story can be great! Looking forward for great things from you.
love
Briana

GREAT! The is plot is very interesting. I can't wait to see what happens next.

really interesting story. I can't wait to read more. please please update really soon!!!!

like the story, hope that you update soon.

wow, good story