Hey!! I've finally found this story again!! I read it awhile and loved it, so I just had to look for it again!! :D It's got an awesome plot line and I always love it when Sesshoumaru isn't perfect and has a secret flaw. Haha. Well hope to hear from this story again soon!! :)
Tootles. 3
*Danielle`
tabbyg- Fri 23 May 2008
This has got to be one of my favorite stories ever. Can't wait to find out what happens next. Keep up the good work!!!
please update update.... when will sessh and kag get together...
please please update soon.... i really don't like sessh's stepmother... are we going to see her humilated... when will kag find out about sessh's little problem... well update as soon as you can... thanks
Aurora- Wed 09 Apr 2008
Plz update soon!!
luna- Wed 19 Mar 2008
will it be SESSHOMARU dressed as a DOMINATRIX.....lol..i doubt it but i can always hope...yeah hope..insert goofy grin here..
OMG, I just read it all in one sitting! It's frickin' awesome, please keep writing. I'm sorry about your fiancee being a prick.
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Falling.Angel
This is one of the best high school fanfics that I have read. The back story really draws in you and makes you care deeply for the lead characters.
I really love it, but I am confussed. You stated that Inuyasha was only 3 years younger than Sesshoumaru, fine. However, later on you state that Sesshoumaru is over 100 years old. It is not anything that plot is henging on or anything, but one of those things that many authors trying to do high school fics while keeping demons fall into.
Please continue to write and post, you have built quite a following.
I hope that you kicked butt on all 3 finals.
Emily
sleepy_tuna_fish- Mon 17 Mar 2008
I just want to say that I very much enjoy your story! Beautiful! Beautiful plot and story line as well! And I absolutely enjoy your characterizations of Sesshoumaru and Kagome~
Though Kagome's friends have much to be desired :P
lynnd- Fri 14 Mar 2008
like the way it turned out. Getting good
CeaselessLeeDreaming- Wed 12 Mar 2008
Hehee, I loved your explanation of how and why both demons and humans were created. Very clever. The rest of the chapter was also very enjoyable. I am so happy you added Jakotsu into the mix… the thought had crossed my mind… and you presented his character perfectly. Looking forward to more. And Good Luck on your final!!!
I love the way you're writing this story! Like with the video, you left us hanging for a little bit, but then brought it back into the story with an even better twist!! That's all I really have to say right now because I didn't notice any mistakes...So, I'll just say that I can't wait for the next chapter to come out!
mangadreams- Fri 07 Mar 2008
Love the story. really interesting back story too:)
burgundyburning- Fri 07 Mar 2008
Oh my God, I am dying for a lemon from this story. I hope it will be hot. This story kinda reminds me of "Hallowed Desire" by demolordlover with Sesshoumaru being fuzzy. I love it.
CeaselessLeeDreaming- Wed 05 Mar 2008
Interesting plot so far. I look forward to reading more of your work. ^_^
IceInu- Tue 04 Mar 2008
I am soooooooooo loveing this stroy!
Thank you soooooo much for writeing long chapters. please update soon.
lynnd- Tue 04 Mar 2008
great story, can't wait to see what happens
lynnd- Tue 04 Mar 2008
great story, can't wait to see what happens
Wow, not only is Sesshomaru smart but he is a furry hentai puppy! Stealing Kagome's panties...shame on him. I can just guess what he will be doing with them. I suppose Inuyasha will get a chance to do some more teasing. The festival sounds fun. It will be interesting to see what happens. A little jealousy, maybe? It would do his arrogant self some good. Well, the story is turning out nicely. I know that you are new at this, and I want to commend you for the long chapters and the well thought out plot. Having Kagome's Celtic background and unique genetic structure play into possible immortality is something I have not read before. I look forward to seeing where you go with it. Thanks for the read!
~Rin
toni- Mon 03 Mar 2008
i can see he realtionship happens
marquisha- Sat 01 Mar 2008
i so luv the story i hope u update the story soon cause u is burin this up i wonder what really happen to kagome dad and all of that stuff and what was he please update
shikon goddess- Sat 01 Mar 2008
Real nice. I can't wait for u to update. Please update soon because I think this story can be very addicting.
nice fic... great job... keep up the good work.... can't wait to read your next chap.... thanks
Sparky- Fri 29 Feb 2008
Hi! I like this fic, and I'm excited to see where you are heading with it. In the future, I would avoid giving so much specific detail to the reader about each character in the very beginning as you do with Kagome in the first chapter. But, otherwise, good job! I especially like the way in which you are developing the plot.
moonlit marauder- Fri 29 Feb 2008
please please i beg you update soon could you emial me when you update so i could read and reply sooner, i love it you write beautifully and i could see the movie as if it was really recorded and i was remembering clips from when i watched it say today. your great dont loose your inspiration because i think you have a natural ability to write. good lick and once again UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 'pouts' please.
Princess Dani- Fri 22 Feb 2008
I really like how the story's going - not too fast and not too slow. I also like the way most of the characters' personalities are being portrayed. I look forward to reading the next chapter.
interesting story, please update soon!!!
Carmen- Fri 22 Feb 2008
oh my gosh. this is awsome. please. please update soon.
Actually, your story isn't bad. In fact, it's quite good. Your characters are well thought out and there's a storyline instead of the mindless high school drivel that's cropping up a lot lately. The only pointers I'll give you is to watch your punctuation and speech structure and to not insert author's notes in the story.
I'll be watching out for this story...
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