| I hope you update soon.It has been a long time since the last chapter, and I hope you don't plan on discontinuing it. Wating in anticipation. :)
K,T,M- Tue 15 Apr 2008
i hope u get a chance to update soon
Oh. My. Gosh.
Sesshomaru? Being raped...no friggin way ish dat possible... him being the runt of the litter? also not possible, but heck. ish your story. good story by the way... i read the part, where sesshy got raped and i was like... no friggin way. oh right, and EW... heh heh.
update soon plz. 3
Nice story. I like that you made Sess save her and that she didn't trust him. But I would like it if she did start to trust him a bit. And you should write more Capyes.
Sweetbunny :)
Oh, that's just so sad! And... sad! How can people enjoy causing others harm?! Sickos. They should all..!!
Then again, 'twas rated angst for a reason.. In all truth, grammar is lacking and things probably could have been worded a bit more skillfuly, but I really, really like the plot. I want to find out how Kagome heals-emotionally- and Sessh's part in that healing. Update soon, please!
And if you ever need any one to beta for you, I'll be here, just ask.
Love and fudgesicles~ Tainted
birning_ice- Wed 19 Mar 2008
| Il love your story. I think you should up date more often with longer chapters. I hate wating, and I cant wate till the story gets futher along. Keep up the good work. :)
K,T,M- Wed 19 Mar 2008
| please update soon
| I think this is one of the best fics I've read that involved Sess being raped as a child. I wonder if Ukio's spirit will stay close to Kagome like the Lord's son did. Also, how come Sess can see here spirit? Keep up the good work and hurry w/ the next chappie plz :P
n8tivegurl- Wed 27 Feb 2008
| I'm glad that Kagome wasn't harmed. It's horrible what happened to Sesshoumaru though. Who found him as a child or did he deal with it on his own? Did they find the creep that harmed the pup Sesshoumaru? I have so many questions but will wait patiently for the next chapter. I'm glad that he decided to protect Kagome after what was going to happen to her. Hope to see another chapter soon but don't rush.
Rei- Wed 27 Feb 2008
| Hey, I think the story line's pretty good, but I feel like in your excitement to get it out, you rush it so sometimes the writing doesn't flow very well. I sort of get confused and need to reread certain parts. I'd suggest you slow down and reread your writing or try to get a proof reader before you post. Otherwise, keep up the good work.
Queen of the Past- Tue 26 Feb 2008
| Another great chapter congrats I do have a question though you said Sess. was the runt of the litter how many brothers/sisters did he have and where are they now? also how old is he in human years Please keep writting and Please update soon
Queen Of the Past- Sun 24 Feb 2008
| well hey thanks for another great chapter I can't wiat to see what happens next in the story. Please update soon
cocoke5- Sat 23 Feb 2008
| thank you for up date the story is getting real good now can not wait for next chapter and see what happen next.
kitsuna- Fri 22 Feb 2008
| awsome!!! I can't wait for the next chapter!. Please post soon!
AB- Fri 22 Feb 2008
| Would you please enlighten me, how old is Kagome?
arielle langley- Fri 22 Feb 2008
| what can i say but great job on this chp even though i do wish she could have gotten raped im a sick person dont mind me lol keep up the good work n hopefully update soon thanks
n8tivegurl- Wed 20 Feb 2008
| Hmm, very interesting so far. I wonder what Aikio is planning. A possible escape plan right? Hope to see another update soon.
| this is an inetresting striy so far i can't wait for the next update
Sicilia- Tue 19 Feb 2008
| It was great as the first chapter, wait no it was even better, i loved it, i hope you can update soon
MissJess- Tue 19 Feb 2008
| Oh such a great story! This is definitly something i don't read everday, and I like that! It instantly draws you in, and dammi I want more!!! Ha-ha, great story!!! Keep up the good work!!
birning ice- Tue 19 Feb 2008
| I love your story. I cant wate for your next chapter. :)
amadoni- Tue 19 Feb 2008
| interesting story so far
arielle langley- Tue 19 Feb 2008
| I love this story now could u pleeeeeeeease do me a favor n update the story n also finish it! Its soooooooo goooood! Keep up the goood work update asap thanks
arielle langley- Tue 19 Feb 2008
| I love this story now could u pleeeeeeeease do me a favor n update the story n also finish it! Its soooooooo goooood! Keep up the goood work update asap thanks
Sicilia- Mon 18 Feb 2008
please update soon it seems like a very interesting story
I don't think I have ever read anything like this.
I like it. Update soon?
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