could make it longer



yours truely isabella a.k.a lulu

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

Dude!!! That should be a story it is so good....That should totally turn into a story. I think it would be really good.

i think you should add another chapter just for laughs because thats funny lol.

Sharilynn

x33 That was so~ dirty! I love it! 3 I wish I had a sexy cop for a fiancee. 'Cept I'd probably only jump him without his partner there. That's kind of...weird. O..o

You should totally add a second chapter so that we can at least see Kouga's reaction to Sesshomaru's statement, and hopefully a little at-home action.

that was amazin!!! u should make more chaps 4 this. plz!!!!! (puppy dog eyes) an if u do can u tell me? i really luved it an sesshoumaru is right here sayin th same thing.

it was very interesting , funny , kinky , and sexy..... i really enjoyed reading this.... luv it.

even better than when i read it this morning! good job!

realy funny!!!!i luved da end!!!!unexpected!!!!!!!keep writin'!!!!!!!3 ps:peac+luv+respect=happiness

Though a bit crude, I quite liked it xD More please! :D

i just have to say "WOW"!!!!!!!! i love this story. you did a great job of it You should try making her a doctor and him a patient that comes in and turns out to be the doctors husband and of course the lemon. hust a suggestion. Please let me know if you would consider doing it or should i post it as a challenge.

i just have to say "WOW"!!!!!!!! i love this story. you did a great job of it You should try making her a doctor and him a patient that comes in and turns out to be the doctors husband and of course the lemon. hust a suggestion. Please let me know if you would consider doing it or should i post it as a challenge.

HHAHAHAAH.
i liked very much!
hahha.
it was a cute foreplay.

it was cute
i loved it

I loved it. Really good.

Yum! Love this! I, myself, think that Sesshoumaru would be a boxer brief kind of guy. It's just so sexy imagining him in that tight uniform. Oh...

Oh now that was cute! I enjoyed it...

wow man can you plz add some more chapters? Your story is amazing plz I want more! Thanks

Evee

wow man can you plz add some more chapters? Your story is amazing plz I want more! Thanks

Evee

that was very good

Wow! Although i did exspect the ending, it was hot. U should definately write more like that one!

Chaos

*Giggles Madly* Hahahahahaha! I loved it! XD That was just too awesome. Keep up the good work. *Walks away giggling...*

hehehe
awesome one-shot
:P