Reviews for Family Ties by Fluffy's Lady
hikari hime- Mon 05 May 2008
Fabulous story. I can't wait for the next bit of Fluffyness (pun intended :D )
dewa mata
Maria- Thu 01 May 2008
K,T,M- Wed 30 Apr 2008
mama-sama- Tue 29 Apr 2008
Can't wait to see what happens next!
Leggy's_Lass_92- Tue 29 Apr 2008
hikari hime- Sat 26 Apr 2008
I really liked to read your story FL. The flow is good and the story interresting and original in the concept. I'll just remark that Sess is slightly OOC, but I assume a baby and Kagome can do that to a cold Taiyoukai. The fact is I never imagined him to be so cuddly... lol
Just for informative purposes:
- I wouldn't recommend to put somebody in anything cold while sick. Fever is needed by the body, because it kills the germs within. So when you are ill, it is wiser to seek warmth, in hot baths and herb tea with honey. (Honey was used a lot by egyptian healers). The problem with fever is that it can induce convulsions. This is why a fresh cloth can be applied to ones' head, to keep the brain cool enough. ^_^
- The illness can go through a mother's milk while breast feeding if the infection is in the blood. The general state of the body is also to take into account. Otherwise, there is no danger... Other than antibiotics or chemical remedies of course, but there was none in the Sengoku Jidai. ;)
If you need any other medical information, feel free to ask, I'll be glad to help. ;)
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dewa mata
mama-sama- Wed 16 Apr 2008
So Sess took over diaper duty? Nice!
Tainted Sins- Sat 22 Mar 2008
Love and fudgesicles~ Tainted
snowbird- Fri 21 Mar 2008
Vulcana- Thu 20 Mar 2008
Keep up the good work.
K,T,M- Wed 19 Mar 2008
Inusbabe- Wed 19 Mar 2008
Miko53- Wed 19 Mar 2008
Alicia
FangedBeasty- Tue 18 Mar 2008
:)
-FangedBeasty
tiffd618- Tue 18 Mar 2008
MoonRose9- Sat 23 Feb 2008
The only problem I have with this fic, though, is that there are some historical errors. You have this fic categorized in the Canon Universe, yet you described InuYasha being buried in a graveyard in a coffin. People of the Warring States Era would be either cremated, such as Kikyou was at her original death, or just buried in the ground without any such coffin, as we've seen InuYasha and company do when they came across a dead village during their travels.
Some of your clothing choices for Kagome are also inaccurate. For one, there were no dresses or skirts in Feudal Japan. If Kagome was wearing anything of the kind, then it would be from her time, which you have yet to mention. And the only way there would be a skirt was if she was wearing a kimono, but it would be attached to the upper part. There would be no way she could remove just the skirt by itself unless she cut it, and even then the upper part would be gaping open because of the lack of an obi. Now, if Kagome were wearing miko clothing, then the case would be different, but for the most part women of the Feudal Era only wore kimono.
Either way, since this is a fanfic, it isn't that big of a deal, but I thought I should address this as it is supposed to be set in the Canon Universe. As I said before, I really like this fic and I can't wait for your next installment. ;)
elvira- Sat 16 Feb 2008
Lady Ky- Fri 15 Feb 2008