LoL dats funny but i dont think i can actually see Sesshomaru being this OOC, but its still very good.

i luved it!!!!!it made me smile.....alot!!!!!:D ps:peac+luv+respect=happiness

Your writing is getting better. This is much more coherent. Keep working at it and you will only improve.

The story was cute, too. I'm sitting here, still smiling. You managed to convey the action clearly, yet briefly, in good, concise language. I have this picture in my head of Sessh jumping and punching the air because he kissed her! Good work. Keep at it.

RG

Absolutely loved the end!

This is my husband and my favorite song. He says it reminds him of how he was before he told me he loved me.

The whole thing was incredibly cute.

Christina
Sunset Miko