I'm glad that you're continuing this story. I hope to see an update soon.

(sighs):( again with da evil cliffies.:D please update soon

(pouts) did anyone ever tell u the evils of cliffies :( i hope u update soon ;)

Mouuuu! What is it???? So mean.T.T Anyway, I love it so far! Please update soon!


~Kira

Wow... Interesting story so far...
I have enjoyed the first couple of chapters.... Iam guessing the tinkets in the boxes have something to do with Kagome and Sesshomaru maybe the whole gang... I also like the counterpart issue in the story... Its different and interesting... LOL..
Nice quote from the movie " The Mummy".. the first one i believe..
Can't wait to see what happens.. Hurry and update... I do like the story so far...
take Care
Mari

Ok let's see here. (In my mind) The fox and flowers represent Shippou adn Rin. The Dragon with the jewel in it's head i have no clue. The spider is Naraku and the tear drop might be Kikiyo. The circular hole might mean a necklace or the Shikon. Then the girl and the dog is Kagome and Sesshomaru.

As for the quote... "No harm ever came from opening a book." Was said first and that woke up a really evil dead mummy. Then your quote was said the second time. Evelin will never learn her leason. It's from the movie The Mummy Returnes.

I like the story so far you have a great description I think for what time has done to kagomes mother I hope this helps with any thing you wanted for a review please continue writing

A compass? Update soon.

Wow, someone did it and it's actually interesting so far. I like it . Thanks for taking the challenge. Ja ne

So, I read this, and it is a very good beginning! However, I was wondering if you knew that the last half of this chapter was in italics. I didn't know if that was your intention or not. And secondly, I noticed a lot of mistakes involving "there, their, and they're," as well as minor places where commas, periods, or semi-colons were needed. These are very, very small things, but they can distract from the flow of your story. You can change them, or you don't have to (it's your choice, obviously), but I thought I might bring them up. I'm honestly not trying to be snarky, but I am a writer too, and I know I would want these things pointed out to me. Good luck with the story, and I hope you update soon!

yeah really cant say much now but update and ill get back to u later