Okay, okay, I owe you 9 reviews now. And I admit that each chapter deserves its own review.

I don't know how you do it, one second I'm laughing and the next I'm drowning in tears; your writing is so beautifull evocative.

I love the characters. Rin, the psychotic chipmunk, may be my favorite. I, too, am a sugar freak. They all seem very real, very 3-dimensional. The love between Chora and InuYasha is so beautiful. I really appreciate the way you've caught the sweetness that I've always suspected lived in his soul.

Other that some commas, I noticed only two mistakes, though there may be others, I keep getting caught up in the story and miss anything subtle. Penthouse is one word, as is makeshift.

It's a wonderful story. Thank you.

RG

OnyxIvyStone,
Please take heart. Your writing is some of the most talented I have read, and I have read a great deal. As another 20-something woman, I know it can feel that fanfiction is a naughty pleasure - however, you bring some much enjoyment to so many. Please take as much time as you need, but do not second guess your abilities. Whoever planted the seeds of doubt in your mind needs to be whipped with a wet noodle. I can respect your decision (not be a whiner who simply begs you to continue) but do not sell yourself short. Who cares if the characters are not originally yours? The story lines and highly emotive situations that result are purely you. I was very sad to see Demonlordlover go, and am equally sad to see you take a hiatus. Please don't quit because of the expectations of others. You are talented and will be leaving (albeit temporarily) a loyal following.
Warmest regards, Adrian

'sigh of amazment' i have forgoten how to spell them lol i totally and im love with your story, completley orginal but i know that inuasha and thingy have mated well kinda but could you slow it down, maby in about 2 weeks, actually i think that it would be kool if at the end of the story kags and sess mated then shipo rin , and sango and mirkou announced their intentions to mate/ marry that way every thing dosent happen like bang bang bang .

just a suggestion lol

love it will be checking every day on this site for an update
cya keep up the good work

I was unsure about this story when I first started to read it, but by the end of latest chapter I've decided this story is BRILLIANT. I thought the last chapter was very good, the different insights and interactions of each group were great. I hope you update soon.

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

I must say that I thoroughly enjoyed your story, though there are not many chapters (many more then mine though so I am not allowed to speak) they are most enjoyable to read. I'm not sure if you noticed this or wanted it to be this way, but the people like Kagome and Chora would be 'Oh my Goddess'... were you trying to get at 'Oh my Goodness'? Or did you actually want 'Oh my Goddess'? If you did want the oh my goodness then it's... not like that in all the chapters but if you wanted oh my goddess then...yeah.
I Love your story, update soon please and thank you. You are awesome~! 3

nice chhapter...
yayy chora sang, step one to getting healed and goin outside

I love the way you brought in Jinenjii (sp?) I could feel the kindness and concern coming from your words. (yeah I know it sounds korny but, hey what can I say, I REALLY get into my reading). The singing through each scene was magikal! And I really like that Inu is with another hanyou. It seems fitting.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Tilayha

Things are looking promising for both packs now. A very moving chapter.

A very different story. Both Kagome and Sesshoumaru seem so vulnerable emotionally and Sesshoumaru physically as well. The pairing of the other couples looks interesting.

Great story; please update soon.

Ooo I'm so eager to sink my teeth into this new one from you! The first chapter is intriguing indeed. I really like the setting you've established and I'm already curious as to what the connection is between Kagome and Sesshomaru. It's a bit late tonight, but I will definitely read another chapter tomorrow if I can. New posts by you are always exciting :D

this is interesting. Can't wait for your next update.

Wow, I really like your fic. I like the story line, and even though i'm not usually a fan of an OOC sesshoumaru, I really like how you potray him in your fic. Can't wait for the next chapter!

Sesshoumaru appologizing first. I love it! And the sparks between Inu and Chora remind me of jr high crushes. They're soooo cute. I'm still waiting for Naraku to start his trouble making and you have me wondering if Kouga is really a spy for him.
Oh, and is Naraku gonna find a way to trap them in the MMO game? lol I know far fetched but hey, you never know when dealing with Naraku right! Loved the chapter.
Tilayha

Sesshoumaru appologizing first. I love it! And the sparks between Inu and Chora remind me of jr high crushes. They're soooo cute. I'm still waiting for Naraku to start his trouble making and you have me wondering if Kouga is really a spy for him.

i like it a lot (:

awww, this is such an adorable and intricate story. i love that all the drama is brought out from the get-go, it's so cliche when authors build the relationship up to bliss and then bring in some random secret that threatens to destroy the relationship.

good job :]

great story, love it, i bet the rest of them were out there listening in and then narating to sango and rin... lol, hurry and update

it's a real good story but the last two chapters... They made me cry from start to the end! This story is expensive in Kleenex! *grin* really great job. I can't wait to read more. please please update really soon!!!

Enjoying this story! The idea is original (hard to do in the iy world).
Will be waiting for the next chapter.

most intriguing! The story line is very refreshing. the Power Wars portion was very discriptive, it reminded me of Germany and Hitler. Which in turn was was the enabler for me to feel the emotions you were trying to envoke.
Chora is a wonderful addition to the group i might add. being an online gamer myself the idea of the girls making one of their own is awesome. i just have a feeling though that onigumo is not gonna let them go very easily if it comes to that!!
can't wait for the next chapter!
tilayha

I don't know if you realize this or not but I am waiting for an update on this fanfiction. Also, I have a list of names I plan to name my children: Isabella Joan, Emry Jane, Gabrielle Reed, Gregory Taylor, and as of last night I added Morgan Blaine to my list. If you're ever in need of a beta or anything- you can contact me. Seriously, I am very interested in this story. If you start an e-mail list I would like to be added. Thank you and hope to read more soon- Amanda.

I really like this story but i have a few questions... Why couldnt the braclets just be put back on or have every farie get the injection and not worry about a braclet, then there woulnt have been a problem? Did kagome lose or reduce her powers because she had sex? If why wouldnt kagome's scent over power sesshomaru's senses? And how could it be "pure" if she was mated? Update soon.

I really do enjoy this story. I love it and I want to read more on Sesshomaru here. Please update soon.

i love it. the second chapter towards the end is just to funny

Saw it up, had to read, need more. Who is Chora and what is the reason for her phobia? What's up with Sessh and his ailement?
can't wait for the next chapter!
I enjoyed the visuals of the shadowed 4th scent and missing partner. I can kinda relate. I had a group of friends like that. Once I stopped going to the bars we lost touch, so now when I go dancing I feel like something is missing.
Those were good times so thanks for bringing back those memories for me!
Tilayha

I really like it. from the first chapter i can tell thet it's original. I hope you keep it up! Really! =0