Oh My God!! I loved your story!!!
I've read other 'trapped in an elevator' fics before, but your was truly unique; and absolutely refreshing. Bravo!!
You should do a sequel, hell I know i'd appreciate it!! ^^
dottie- Sun 15 Jun 2008
you are a writing goddess this is so good i had to be peeled away from the computer just so i could do some things. cough. it was good, and i demad a sequel. sequel. sequel. this is so good not to write one. even the charater descriptions demad such.
if you ain't thinken 'bout one you should. is all i'm saying. gtg find mike cya.
C. Harris- Sun 15 Jun 2008
| I absolutely LOVE this story!!!!!!! It was a great combination of story elements. A sequel would be nice though. But I guess I could always use my imagination lol. Keep up the awesome work!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
C. Harris- Sun 15 Jun 2008
| I absolutely LOVE this story!!!!!!! It was a great combination of story elements. A sequel would be nice though. But I guess I could always use my imagination lol. Keep up the awesome work!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Megan Consoer- Sun 15 Jun 2008
| I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
aleerasuru- Sun 15 Jun 2008
| your story is amazing its well written interesting and has a nice flow and i love the playfulness that you make sesshomaru have and i cant wait for you next chapter
babygirl17- Fri 13 Jun 2008
| That was a great story! It's one of my favorites stories on this site. Please! please try and make a sequel, i am really excited to see what ideas u come up with and will really look forward to it!
Lady Amaya Ken- Fri 13 Jun 2008
| please make a sequel!!!!!
nya- Fri 13 Jun 2008
| I loved your story it was wonderful!
chareese- Sat 07 Jun 2008
| go,go,go!!!!!! awesome! plz continue!
BLack_Hearted_Dreamer- Thu 29 May 2008
| That was da best story i have read so far!!!!! So pplz hurry up and Write!!
odango- Tue 27 May 2008
in all honestly this is too good to have 7 chapters this can be a great fic all on its own with many chapters and many more lemons XD
GREAT JOB UPDATE SOON PLEASE
odango- Tue 27 May 2008
in all honestly this is too good to have 7 chapters this can be a great fic all on its own with many chapters and many more lemons XD
GREAT JOB UPDATE SOON PLEASE
odango- Tue 27 May 2008
in all honestly this is too good to have 7 chapters this can be a great fic all on its own with many chapters and many more lemons XD
GREAT JOB UPDATE SOON PLEASE
odango- Tue 27 May 2008
in all honestly this is too good to have 7 chapters this can be a great fic all on its own with many chapters and many more lemons XD
GREAT JOB UPDATE SOON PLEASE
odango- Tue 27 May 2008
in all honestly this is too good to have 7 chapters this can be a great fic all on its own with many chapters and many more lemons XD
GREAT JOB UPDATE SOON PLEASE
Khristen- Sun 25 May 2008
Okay,so the lemon was better than any other lemon I read on this entire site.
Details were..grade aplus and more.
:3
I can't wait for the resttttt.
april- Wed 21 May 2008
| I so love this story i mean seriously i love it well anyways please update soon
Sessygurl- Wed 21 May 2008
| This is a great stroy, keep up the great work.
andrada- Tue 20 May 2008
| I LOVE IT please hurry with the update
| wow so cool i can not wait please up date soon
Chanae- Mon 19 May 2008
| 0_0..'Wow'....I love it!! I can't wait for the next update!!
AnimeFan69(not logged in)- Mon 19 May 2008
| AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (dazed exoression) Dude i wish i had a Sesshoumaru male in my life do you know what i would do with him(starts dreaming). I love the chapter and i hope you can update soon! Ja ne!!!
toni- Sun 18 May 2008
| wow! spechless!
Solaira- Sun 18 May 2008
| WOW.....so very hot........I need a cold shower now...lol
toni- Sun 18 May 2008
| wow! spechless!
flynalien- Sun 18 May 2008
| Love the new chapter! Please continue with Kagome working for him!!!
fantaskie- Sun 04 May 2008
Oh, shoot! That review was meant for another story! This is what happens when you have too many review pages open!*bangs head against wall* Sorry about that sweetest angel!
As for this one...I feel the story is moving a bit too slow or maybe I was just getting impatient. Yet you seem to be in complete control of the characters, and ironically enough, I feel that it's a good thing you haven't rushed thing...especially with that kiss!
LOL...and I said I was impatient!
Looking forward to the rest of the story!
~ fantaskie
fantaskie- Sun 04 May 2008
After I'd read this fic it puzzled me that the ratings were so low. I really liked it. I wouldn't go so far as to saying that the characters were OC simply because one has no evidence or guidline to work on if these characters were put in such a situation as in this fic. After all Sesshoumaru does come to care for a little human girl. Therefore it would be natural for him to need and want comfort (which gradually turns to love), and the same for Kagome.
I really liked the tone of sadness yet hope that ran through the entire story. And I loved the last section! Personally, I thought that the story was quite the right size (except, perhaps the showdown between Sesshoumaru and the villains could have been a bit more elaborate) for there are times when a story informs you of so much more when it seemingly gives you little. I think had this story been way too detailed it might not have had quite the same effect.
Kudos for a well written fic!^_^
~fantaskie
| Nooooo! It was starting to get hot in there lol. Oh I hope it won't be too long before chapter 6 is up! I have noticed some mistakes with grammer/spelling but nothing really bad, I think you're doing a good job and look forward to reading more of your work. :)
Megan Consoer- Sun 04 May 2008
| I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
-sobs heard coming from reader- no no no no you stopped. so good and you stopped. uuhh no fair. well hate to say this but I hate your school stupid exam. make me wait longer to read the rest of this great story. XP. LOL well post as soon as you can. I'll be waiting.:P LOL
hugs and puppies
toni- Fri 02 May 2008
| this is so good!!!!!!!!!!
Sesshomaru's Loyal Servent- Fri 02 May 2008
| way to heat things up
clar- Wed 16 Apr 2008
| i dont believe the coincidence.... i had the song "elevator" by Flo Rida and Timbaland playing when i read this story.... the irony...."she's stuck on my ele-elevator."
tif- Mon 14 Apr 2008
| plsss update i really really want to know what will happen next pls plssssssssssssssss thanksss
tif- Mon 07 Apr 2008
| pls pls pls update pls... its really really nice pls...
| Very Nice! This is a good fic with great potential. I can just imagine some of the crazy things you can have the two of them do in elevator, and can't stop grinning! I like your writing syle, though the several grammer and spelling msitakes do take away from the story. But, since it is not very major, I didn't mind. Just one question...is the rest of the story going to be largely based in the elevator? Anyway, good luck and hope to have you update soon ~~~~~Briana
shikon goddess- Tue 26 Feb 2008
| Nice they should hook up. But I hope some one finds them soon.
tif- Tue 26 Feb 2008
| owww so interesting pls.. update again soon pls pls... thanks
| Aww they're bonding. Thanks for updating! This chapter was fun to read. I thought that Kagome was claustrophobic or something. Wonder y there nobody wondering where they were after an hr. not to mention poor Kaede having to deal w/ the bitches waiting for the interview. I look forward to ur next update.
Kohana- Fri 08 Feb 2008
| I think you are off to a great start. I think you are going to have a very witty story! Keep up the good work!!
Kohana- Fri 08 Feb 2008
| I think you are off to a great start. I think you are going to have a very witty story! Keep up the good work!!
| Hurray! Can't wait for the second part. Tee-hee, Kagura and Yura were all sluts. Good first part. Update soon, please~!
clavira- Sun 27 Jan 2008
hehe, i like it - besides, it'll give kags a chance to impress her future boss without being nervouse because she doesn't know who he is!
hope you update soon!
Holysinner- Sun 27 Jan 2008
Really good. hope to hear more from you soon.
wishing you well,
Holysinner
danny- Sun 27 Jan 2008
| Like it alot hope you finish it.
Priss_Kimio- Sun 27 Jan 2008
| I like it. I hope there will be some kissing in the elevator ;)
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