IceAngel- Sat 19 Apr 2008
Aw... It's over... Oh well! It was fun while it lasted! Lolz i hope to read your other stories soon! ^_^

Ice_Angel- Sat 19 Apr 2008
FINALLY!!! THAT WAS SO FREAKING LONG!!! lolz sorry about that... i'm just so happy that sesshy told kags that he loves her! ^_^

Ice_Angel- Fri 18 Apr 2008
Um... So they're the Kami? Lolz I guess I should read the next chapter to find out huh? ^_^'

Ice_Angel- Thu 17 Apr 2008
It's so cool how you just make these things up! Lolz yay! Inu has his sword! ^_^

Ice_Angel- Thu 17 Apr 2008
(Squeals) Yayz! The friends are reunited! Lolz

Ice_Angel- Thu 17 Apr 2008
You just love cliffies don't you... Lolz oh well! I'm going to read the next chapter to find out what happens next! ^_^

Ice_Angel- Thu 17 Apr 2008
Whoo hoo! Rin's not evil! Yayz! Something bad is going to happen? What could it be? Lolz I want to read the next chapter to find out! ^_^

Ice_Angel- Thu 17 Apr 2008
Oh no! Kags is running away! And Fluffy is avoiding her! Ah the suspense... Lolz

Ice_Angel- Thu 17 Apr 2008
Do you not like Rin or something? Why'd you have to make her so evil?! She's just a little girl... This story is getting good! Lolz ^_^

Ice_Angel- Thu 17 Apr 2008
AHHH!!! NO!!! Kags can't do that! She just can't! lolz keep up the good work! I'm lovin' this story!

Ice_Angel- Thu 17 Apr 2008
I just love your story! I love angels! See? My name is an angel! Lolz please keep up the good work!

kawaiidemons- Fri 07 Mar 2008
This is an excellent story. it's such a coincidence, i was just watching the fallen series on tv before i started reading this. i think the story is beautifully written and well thought out. writing a story based on one religion's beliefs can be hard, it can cause lots of upsets, but you've done a great job. so keep it up! and update soon!

Kawaii_Kilala- Thu 21 Feb 2008
AWW!
*starts tearing up* how sweet! Although, if i was kagome, i would have had him explain it, just in order for me to hear why he acted the way he did towards 'me', instead of hearing it from his father. lol
I'm so happy he finaly told her how he feels! he swalloed his pride, applaus to sesshy! lol
i love how this is working out! Up-date the final chapter soon! Please and Thank you!
TTFN;
joanne

WhiteRose-Kurama- Tue 19 Feb 2008
It's about time they finally got together... I have been waiting such a long time for such a huge update like this. You have satisfied my curiosity of how u'd incorporate the shikon jewel into ur fic. And I'll be sad when this fic ends... would u consider making a sequel of some sort? Becuz this has so much potential for further plot development like... Sess and Kags having kids or their life in the modern era. Keep up the good work and I look forward to how u'll wrap everything up. Also, kudos to ur beta for doing such a great job! :P

WhiteRose-Kurama- Sat 09 Feb 2008
Alright... I have to say that you've definitely just made my weekend soo much better. The battle... the excitement is so intense and let's not forget Sess reaction to finding out Kags' the high general and that she's using his cold facade and throwing it back at him. Also, let ur beta know that she has done a mega-amazing job with making the fic seem flawless. I found no grammar or spelling errors... *kudos and brownie treats to u and ur beta* Keep up the good work and hurry w/ the next installment and thanx for making the chappies longer
:P

WhiteRose-Kurama- Sat 09 Feb 2008
I really love how you introduced the 2 swords into the fic very smoothly. You have a talent for incorporating stuff from the anime w/o taking too much away from the anime... it's starting to seem just like the anime except on a much grander scale. Things are different yet still the same. I'm liking how this will turn out. Also, will u include midoriko, kirara or the Shikon later on? Keep up the good work :P

WhiteRose-Kurama- Sat 09 Feb 2008
It's nice to know that everyone is finally back together. And Sess really is an idiot... it took him this long to realize what a fool he was. *sigh* I look forward to what u have in store for everyone. What will happen when Sess gets Inu's letter? I really hope Kags doesn't skin him alive. Keep up the good work.

Maddie- Fri 08 Feb 2008
i love that kagome has power!
wohoo good job

WhiteRose-Kurama- Thu 07 Feb 2008
Wow!... All I have to say is that this has been the most amazing chappie yet. You've really outdone urself this time. And thanx for making it longer. I loved how Kagome found out about her origins and meeting her mother again. Didn't expect Rin and Koga to get together. Also, you might want someone to proofread ur chappies cuz I noticed some minor grammar/spelling errors that you may have overlooked. Anyways keep up the amazing work and keep the chappies coming :P

Faithless- Thu 07 Feb 2008
Amazing! Cant wait for the rest of it. Please keep writing.. =)

WhiteRose-Kurama- Wed 06 Feb 2008
I'm glad that Rin isn't as bad as I thought she would be. She was honest and even tried to warn her friends. I wonder why the elders didn't bother to tell her the truth cuz it would have made things easier. Also, will sess really not go after kagome? Plz hurry w/ the next chappie... so excited about fic! Keep up the good work :P

WhiteRose-Kurama- Wed 06 Feb 2008
Wow! The plot thickens!...*dum dum dum (dramatic music)* I wonder what the letter said? And what will everyone do when they finally notice that she's gone? Also, the seer's prophecy... now that i think about it, couldn't it mean something different than what Yuma thinks? I was wondering if you could do a chappie about Kagome's origins? Like how her mother became pregnant w/ her in more detail perhaps? Keep up the amazing work :P

WhiteRose-Kurama- Tue 05 Feb 2008
Wow! I wasn't expecting that twist in the story at all. She's the daughter of a nephilim and her grandfather is an archangel and an elder? Wow! That is a mind-blowing idea that never crossed my mind... is that why adara, haru and the other nephilims are always watching over kagome? You truly are a very talented fic writer that has kept me on my toes. Can't wait to read what else u have in store for them all. :P

nightmare- Fri 01 Feb 2008
oh my fruckin god this introducton was sooo good !!

~nightmare~

WhiteRose-Kurama- Fri 01 Feb 2008
And so it begins... *dum dum dum* I'm surprised that Rin is the spy. But I can't wait to see if Kags can figure out what's going on b4 she gets kidnapped or something. And who is Lord Yuma? What's the deal with him? Is he really Kags' father? I just end up having even more questions after reading ur chappies even after some of my questions are answered. Anyways, keep up the good work and plz hurry w/ the next chappie! Your very loyal fan awaits for what's to come. :P

moonlit marauder- Fri 01 Feb 2008
cant u update the one on fanfiction.net insteed of reposting it on a single spark, thanks

April- Thu 31 Jan 2008
I really love the introduction, but it caught my attention that all the Lords but 1 are of canine descent. I think it would be more interesting to have 1 animal of the sky (bird) and 1 of water (otter).

WhiteRose-Kurama- Thu 31 Jan 2008
I wonder who Kagome's dad is? Do the elders know the answer? And I'm glad that you've portrayed Sess to seem more "human"... i know.. not the best thing to say about sess but it's true. You should do more chappies where he doesn't hide himself behind a mask. Also, are the oni-tenshi going to storm the western castle? Keep up the good work and can't wait to read the next chappie :P

WhiteRose-Kurama- Thu 31 Jan 2008
Ok... that was an interesting chapter. I liked how you included alone time for Kags and Sess. I wonder what Inutaisho will tell Sess? Also, is Kagome the child of one of the bad Fallen angels? Keep up the good work:P

WhiteRose-Kurama- Wed 30 Jan 2008
Hehehe... I love how Inutaisho can be so sneaky. I just wonder how Sess will react when he finds out Kagome's secret? And how different is Kagome? Who are the elders? Who are Kagome's parents? And could you make the chappies a bit longer? Cuz i just can't get enough of your way with words. Keep up the good work and thanks for updating so fast. :P

Kawaii_Kilala- Wed 30 Jan 2008
Well, im glade it was the longest review you have ever gotten, i get that a lot really! lol
I cant wait till the next chapter, but, i want to ask you a few questions, for example: Can Sesshoumaru's beast talk? like talk to Sesshoumaru in his mind? Because, all you have had him do is growl and pur and stuff, nothing to make anyone believe that he can talk or comunicate with Sesshoumaru..... And, Didnt InuTaishou have questions to ask that Adara girl? Wasn't he going to ask her those questions Before he laft the room? I was under that assumption....lol so, i hope you up-date soon, and i cant wait to see how far they, Kagome and Sesshoumaru, will go after that kiss sesshoumaru gave kagome....
Ta Ta For Now;
joanne

Kawaii_Kilala- Tue 29 Jan 2008
HEY! I really like this story, its unique to me, i've never read a story with kagome as a HALF angel, i've read one where she turns INTO a anger, a full blodded angel, but never where she is born a Half angel!!! Its totaly unique, and all the better for it! When you titled the chapter as "Defeat" it made me think, that kagome would be taken with the bad half angel half demon dudes, to their 'master(s)'....but then, all that happened was she got badly wounded....she didnt get kidnapped at all, not that im mad that she didnt, im actually glad that she didnt, but i AM mad at sesshoumaru for not going to make sure kagome was all right. I hope, and this is wierd coming from me, that both his father, kouga, and Inuyasha beat him to like, five feet from death, so that he'll learn to trusts his insticnts, maybe, highly unlikely, but you never know.....
lol! I hope you up-date soon, and that it will be a great chapter, all the others have been great, and i actually felt my own heart clench when sesshy did that trade with kouga, only for a sword! the nerve, now i love sesshy, so me saying i would punch him in the nose for that is saying something! lol
Alright, this review is long enough!
Ta Ta For Now!
joanne

WhiteRose-Kurama- Tue 29 Jan 2008
You have out did urself again. I really liked the battle scene... but it seemed too short to me since I just can't get enough of picturing nephilim vs. oni-tenshi. Could you try to extend the battle scene please? And what's w/ the flash of light? Does the Shikon jewel still have a role in ur fic? Keep up the good work and thanks for updating so fast. :P

SnstvWitATuchOfCrzy- Tue 29 Jan 2008
Very cool plot. i'm so enthralled. Don't keep me waiting long for the next update please! =D

WhiteRose-Kurama- Mon 28 Jan 2008
Wow! Wasn't expecting that sort of reaction from Kags after waking up. I wonder how Inutaisho and Kouga will react to Kags' big secret. How will Sess react? And I have to say, that I love how you just keep the chappies coming... So thank you soo very much. Keep up the good work and can't wait to read the next chappie :P

WhiteRose-Kurama- Sun 27 Jan 2008
That has a pretty good battle scene. I wonder how well Kags would do in a sparring match against Sess? Anyway, I wonder what Inutaisho thinks about what he just saw? Who is the mastermind behind the attacks and how special is Kagome? She's no ordinary nephilim is she? Keep up the good work and can't wait to read the next chappie :P

Tanya131- Sun 27 Jan 2008
GOD!!!!! i hate it when you guys just stop at the best part of the story.....but can you write more please.....i want to know what happens next

faithless- Sat 26 Jan 2008
superb!!
i cant wait for the rest!

Twisty- Fri 25 Jan 2008
I cant wait to read more of your wicked cool story. I am really enjoying it and I hope you continue to update frequently.
I hopefully was able to give you some motivation ^_^

K,T,M- Thu 24 Jan 2008
YAY another chap i hope u update soon oh and i still think u should have them find out shes a nephilim in a VERY dramtic way. oh u rock for updating so soon lets everybody give melony922 a hip hip hurray

WhiteRose-Kurama- Thu 24 Jan 2008
You have no idea how happy I am that you've produced another fine chappie so quickly. And I guess you answered my question about angels mating w/ demons. But how close was Shippo and Kagome? Were they just friends or something more? And when will Sess find out about Kag's secret? I can't wait for the next chappie. :P

K,T,M- Wed 23 Jan 2008
YAY finally someone has made a fic to that i hope u update really really REALLY soon. Oh and u have to have them find out shes a nephilim in a VERY dramtic way.

WhiteRose-Kurama- Wed 23 Jan 2008
Hehehe... I guess Inutashio never expected that from Sess. I can just imagine the ear-full he's going to get from his father. And I wonder what Kagome will say to this. Also, what's up with the necklace Kouga found? Did one of the "good" fallen die in that attack? Keep up the good work and I can't wait to read what happens next. :P

summer- Wed 23 Jan 2008
great story, please keep updating!

Mistress of Darkness- Wed 23 Jan 2008
I love the story so far. So, who was listening in? Sesshoumaru, InuTaisho(sp?), or InuYasha? Do they corner one if not all of the nephilim in the palace and demand to know what is going on? I have so many questions, but I quess I'll just have to wait to see what happens next. So, please update your story soon because the longer I wait to get to read it the crazier I'm going to get to try and read your fantastic story. Till the next chapter. Adios.

WhiteRose-Kurama- Wed 23 Jan 2008
Hmm... I wonder who was eavesdropping? Sess? Anyways, this is starting to get very interesting. But I was wondering if you could eventually dedicate a chappy to explaining how Kagome ended up meeting Adara and Kisho and how she ended up at the Western Castle? Also, I was wondering what would happen if in the funture... if a nephilim mated w/ a youkai? Keep up the good work and can't wait to read more :P

piratequeen0405- Wed 23 Jan 2008
Interesting beginning. I can tell it will be a multi-layered story. Can't wait for more.

WhiteRose-Kurama- Tue 22 Jan 2008
I really like this prologue. It's very different from what I've read so far. And I like stories that contain angels in them. So please keep up the good work and can't wait to read the next chappie :P

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