I just read this story, and it is unlike any other I have ever read. And that's saying a lot. This story was funny, and romantic in a quirky way. The magic stuff was new and well thought out, and the contract language was hilarious! I like that Kagome was portrayed as needing Sesshoumaru but not portrayed as a complete idiot. He stayed in character. A memorable story.
This was a very interesting and slighty different plot. It was a joy to read. Naraku mated to Midoriko...now I didn't see that one coming...*giggles*
Great job!
*hugs and smiles*
kotainuchan- Thu 31 Jan 2008
awwwe cute
Sicilia- Thu 24 Jan 2008
this is the cutes story ever, i love it.
Jean- Mon 21 Jan 2008
An interesting read. Sesshoumaru has become her mentor. Since he is educated, he understands her future life and goals better than her feudal era friends. Obviously the topic of conversation varies away from jewel shard collection and destruction of Naraku. In other words, Kagome can be her true self with Sesshoumaru. Kagome's survival after his attempt to exterminate her with his poison resulting in her now carrying Sesshoumaru's scent is an interesting plot point. I look forward to reading more.
So far your story is going fantastic and I can't wait to read more so I hope you keep up the job well done. I also can't wait to see what you future stories will be like.
Dark_Twinkle- Sun 20 Jan 2008
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE CONTINUE!!!
kotainuchan- Sun 20 Jan 2008
I LOVE IT!!!! Can't wait 4 more.
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