this is too cute. very nice.

FL

I finally got to read the whole story! It was excellent! The scene in the forest was sexy as hell and it's actually got me thinking...

Anyhoo, wonderful story! I hope you do well in the Dokuga.

I like this story and I can see why it is a winner! I have read it twice and it just keeps getting better!

Of course, The Swan Princess is a WB film, buuuut...
Oh, the book was so cute! Yeah, writing kids books is harder than it looks! I tried to write one for my brothers once and.. oi..
That and my illustrations sucked 'cause I can't draw for shit.
Lovely story, though. Kinda wish it hadn't ended so soon..

LOL!!! I love this! My favorite parts was when Rin screamed, 'Big Brother!' that was so cute. But I think the best would be, 'Silence woman. I'm seducing you!' I can so see Sesshoumaru saying that. LOL

Awwww!!! That was so sickeningly sweet! ^_^

I really enjoyed this little fic. I was reading the last chapter and when I came across the 'Shining, Shimmering, Splendid' line I about fell out of my chair laughing because Aladdin is playing. Too funny.

I loved this fic sooo much. It was funny and sweet at the same time.

I love your story. Can you make a sequel to make it last longer. I know it may sound selfish, but i realy LOVE your story.

Finally I got to catch up! Well, sorta...

I absolute thought this was the cutest story! I actually pictured Sess trying to do oragami...with those claws? HA! Funny...

I'll read chapter 6 later. Thanks for this. I needed the cheer factor...dang cold...

Hurray! In the words of that annoying purple dragon from that one show on PBS 'Dragon Tails' (Is that thing still on?) Loooooooooove it~! "Silence woman. I'm seducing you." Hilarious. Pure gold. -Whines- Does it have to be over? Fine, then. Oooh, I love Disney! Right now I have the song 'Longer than Forever' stuck in my head.. Loved the origami part at the end. Awesome fic! Love and fudgesicles~

that was very nice, I loved it

This was like M&Ms with peanuts, addictive. I had to read the whole thing. It was delightful, sweet and charming! I enjoyed it so very much. I'm glad you didn't add a lemon, you are right, that would have ruined it. Very good work!

*is laughing on the floor.*
*still laughing*
okay let me speak for danny she loved your story and thought the ending was really fun she said that it was a great work of art and that she hopes you could make a sequel to it thanks for the amazing storys you have been providing for everyone

by danny and shadow

Lovely Story ... I Would So Love For A Guy To Do What Sesshomaru Did For Kagome ... Hmm i Would Love To Come Home To That!

Beautiful. Loved it from start to finish. I'll miss it. Brava!

OMG!!! dat was so cute but i was disappointed dat there wasn't a lemon bcuz i wanted 2 see if Sesshomaru was really violet in bed or not. (wink, wink) it was really a let down for me on dat part. So my suggestion 2 u is 2 go back and add a lemon. :)

hey (sorry i didn't see if someone else posted this review)
i loved your story sooo much.
just an added note, was it shining shimmering splendid? not shimmering shining splendid?

haha anyway, same thing. but great job and i hope to see more of your writing soon!

Silence, woman. I am seducing you.

So completely simple, and so completely Sesshomaru. God, that makes me giggle. That and it's two something in the morning...ah well.

I really enjoyed it. You kept them both in character perfectly and the the little Inuyasha, Shippou, Sesshomaru scene was hilarious. I can vision Shippou raising his fist and exclaiming nonsense.

Love it. Well written and all too. Kudos.

Lilith-sama

Beautiful! Loved his last line "silence woman, I'm seducing you." Brilliant!

That was the sweetest ending. I so wasn't prepared for it to end but still that was a wonderful way to end it. LOVE LOVE LOVE your stories and I can't wait to read more from you.

this story makes me feel so giddy like a school girl...its a wonderful and funny piece...but what i like most, aside from the romantically hilarious relationship between the main characters, is the awesome dynamics of the relationship between the two inu brothers...just absolutely love it. They dont have to keep going at each others throats when they speak their opinions to each other...really great...good work & godspeed

OMG YAY!! The Kiss! Horrah!!!! Please Update As Soon As U Can!! I Can't Wait 2 C What Happens Next!

Kagome-Chan

HAH, Sesshoumaru lost the origami battle. That stuff is HARD, though! Of course, I have zero patience, so.. And, my god. He was creepy when he killed those bears! But they kissed! We should have a party or something to celebrate.. And Rin moved away. I think I'm gonna cry. Wonder if they'll really stay in touch.. Besides coffee shop stuff. The 'Shou's Origami Fiasco' book made me laugh. Please update soon! Love and fudgesicles~

Sweet.:) I especially like that scene where they kiss. I loved the fact that there were absolutely no words exchanged between them. And Inuyasha was really sweet, me thought.

Oh!...and we used the play F.L.A.M.E.S (Friendship, Love, Affection, Marriage, Enenmies, I forget what the S stood for)...sure does bring back memories!:D

~fantaskie

Sweet.:) I especially like that scene where they kiss. I loved the fact that there were absolutely no words exchanged between them. And Inuyasha was really sweet, me thought.

Oh!...and we used the play F.L.A.M.E.S (Friendship, Love, Affection, Marriage, Enenmies, I forget what the S stood for)...sure does bring back memories!:D

~fantaskie

Awww! Very cute chapter! And whew, naked Sesshoumaru in the moonlight; can't get any better than that!

oh my gosh!! i'm sitting here crying.. that was such a beautiful chapter, and story for that matter. thanks for sharing. can't wait for more!!! =)

I loved this chapter. Inuyasha and Shippo are hilarious!! And Kagome tricking Sesshoumaru into going to the Oragami practice reminded me of all the times I've manipulated my boyfriend into doing something that he didn't want to. lol good times good times...anywho! I loved the chapter, so sad that Rin moved. I still cannot wait to read more I'm enjoying this story so much. ^_~

~*Elisa*~

WOw, I love your writing. If you wrote a novel like that i would so read it.

Oh now that was interesting...a story witin a story. You blended that very well together.

Jakotsu is very observant. I love the sexual energy between Sess and Kagome. Nice job.

Eeeeeyah, I love it! I mean, me being the bookworm and all I usually do love these kinds of things. But still! It's a new concept, I think, Kagome being a coffee shop girl and all. I think. Loved the 'excerpts' from Murder and Skin.
You better update soon! And if you don't, or take the story down, you will wake up in a strange metal room full of ugly over-priced ceramic garden gnomes and they will all be STARING AT YOU with their beady little eyes. And holding steak knifes and meat cleavers. Are we clear?

*grin* great chapter! I absolutely love it! :D
I can't wait, please update really soon!!!

i am so digging that last line!!!!!!!

ooooooh what a place to leave off here 'you will find out'. I'm loving this and looking forward to more! Hurry up please :)

Hurrah! Update! Kagome's rant about Sessh standing up Rin was really cute! She's so adorable when mad!

WoW! You've put a great deal of thought into the novels! I liked the storyline and found it really intense. I think I'd have been drained after reading a saga like that! In a good way.:D

I must agree with Kagome, though. One wonders what would draw so many women to the books. Can it be that they have an inkling as to what Sesshoumaru looks like? That's the only reason I can think of! lol

There were quite a few typos and errors in this chapter. More so than in the others, it seemed to me. But I really enjoyed this. Am really looking forward to chapter 5! ^_^

~fantaskie

this is an amazing fic. i loved the novel exerpts. keep it up.

this is an amazing fic. i loved the novel exerpts. keep it up.

hehehe i like this on please write another chapter

AH!!!! PLEASE Update Soon!! I LUV What He Wrote! What a Naughty Sesshomaru!!!! (Laugh) Please Update As Soon As U Can!!

- Kagome-Chan C:

Oh my. What a great chapter! I think you did very well on the "book". I loved the ending of this chapter ^_^ Keep up the great work!

we find out! we find out! AND he signed it! That's the coolest most nerdiest rush in the world- even if the author is your best friend, when they sign their book for you, personal like- ITS SO AWESOME! And Sesshoumaru gave it quite the hot twist...

Thanks for the Update--- Itwasperfect!

I love this chapter!! update son plz!!!!

no problem.get some sleep,pick this up later,and good luck.
sleep is good.
wonder why most people don't get enough of it?
hmm.
anyway,take your time and good luck.

i loved it, it really rocked and when you didnt continue uh i was so hoping for more but i guess i will have to wait, But anywho keep on going please?

That's alright, sweetie...take your time. I'm waiting patiently...

Thank you for adding new depth to our favourite demon Lord.

Nice work B*R*A*T.

GR8 Chapter!!!! o0o0 Sesshomaru Writes Romance Novles? Whoa!! (Laugh) Please Update As Soon As U Can!

Kagome-Chan C:

You wrote this out of boredom? Hell, I wish I could get so inspired bored. This is a really good story. The only thing I'll caution you on is the run on sentence. One or two okay, but you had quite a few and they interfered with the flow of the story IMHO. Other than that, this was nice. I hope to read more soon...

LOL. I'm a little unnerved that he does! [in response to iloveprettysilverhair's comment]. In all honesty, I'm curious about the novels...so, please do explain! :)

I loved the part, in this chapter, when Jakotsu looks at him and then asks 'who is she?' ....and I thought Rin's collection really sweet. Am looking forward to chap 4.! ^_^

Great chapter! I love the fact that Sesshoumaru writes romance novels is it? Fantastic! Keep up the great work!

I really like this story so far - Sesshoumaru's I-don't-care-a-fig-for-anyone-else attitude turning into a gradual interest in Kagome, and their 'coincidental' run-ins. And the pace at which it is moving is perfect!:)

Just one detail regarding grammar, though...in using the past-tense of the verb 'to be' the conjugation would be 'I was, you were, she/he was' (singular) and 'We were, you were, they were' (plural). 'Was' is used only for the first and third person singular...;)

Gr8 Chapter!!!! Nice Way 2 Fit Rin In!! Update As Soon As U Can Please!

See U Soon!!!!

Kagome-Chan C:

It's funny, every story you write has such a unique voice. I love this one, I really do. You're a very gifted writer. Really, this could be a story that'd be published, if you wanted it to. Because it goes beyond just being fanfiction. Beyond just taking the templates of another author's characters and making a story about them -- these characters you've created really have their own voices. You've always written stuff that's thought provoking, but really entertaining at the same time. I applaud you. Can't wait for the next chapter!

Yey!! I'm thrill you continued!!
and I don't mind if you made it a short one I'll read it any ways!!!
thanks a lot!!
update please

Great chapter! Leave it to Rin to be the little push forward that they needed to spend more time together ^_^ Keep up the great work!

IF I KNOW sESSHOUMARU HE SEES RIN AS A PERFECT OPPURTUNITY TO KNOW KAGOME!!!

This seems like a good story! I like coffee shop stories. They always turn out interesting! Please update soon, and if you could, e-mail me when you do?!

YuMYY! I want more :D Please?

It has all the hallmarks fo being a nice read. Take it down on pain of death you. Just get writing is all. Boredom serves you well *chuckle*.

EP

"When Boredom Strikes"? Haha well let's hope it does again. I love the idea of this story and hope you finish it. I will be eagerly awaiting your next update (Because I KNOW you will or very bad things will happen =] ) Until next time...
Shayna

NO!!!! PLEASE Don't Take It Down!! I Want 2 Keep Reading It! PLEASE Update As Soon As U Can!!!! This Is a GR8 Story!!

Hope 2 C U Soon!

Kagome-Chan C:

I hope you put the next part of it, cause I really, really liki it!!
at least I hope you get bored again so you can continue it!! ja ja
PLEASE UPDATE!!

It's a good story, hope that you will update really really soon. I can't wait to read more...please update soon!

Well I liked it very much, it was charming and well written. I hope you put up the next part ^_^ Thank you for the nice read!