I was reading a story on here when the author recommended popping over to your profile. I am so very glad I did. This story is hysterical! I noted that at the end of the last chapter you posted you said an update would be in two weeks, but that was in January. I hope you haven't given up on this story because it is just way too funny.
LadyinRed- Thu 27 Mar 2008
ooo this is definately going to be a favorite. the only thing bad i can think of is how dreadfully impatient i am... lovely story thank you for taking the time to write about this oh so intriguing couple.
Jessica- Wed 27 Feb 2008
Great story. I can't wait to see what Kagome does to poor poor Sesshoumaru's world. This is going to be too funny!! Update!
I'm totally loving the first two chapters. I couldn't stop chuckling. I can't wait to see what happens at the council gathering. :)
Usually I review a fic after I finish reading the story but after having read your first chapter, I must comment on what a wonderful read this is. Every sentence is enthralling especially "...his lordly derrière." It got me cracking up for nearly the whole five minute. I also love how none of the characters seem OOC. You are an excellent and talented writer.....now *ardently goes back to chapter 2*
This is a very enjoyable story. It reminds me of Shakespearean play in some ways...one of his comedy plays. I love it and can't wait to see what happens to my favourite couple.
Excellent writing :)
*hugs and smiles*
Akay- Mon 28 Jan 2008
Good chapter. Lol. Miroku playing chaperone... and Inuyasha wants to join? Awkward. Lol. I'll be waiting... two weeks...
Midnighttimberwolf- Mon 28 Jan 2008
Wow, now that is what I call a chapter not to long or short however, left with wanting to know more....... Gosh, I can't wait til you update I know it will be jammin
TONI- Mon 28 Jan 2008
i THOUGH THAT hAIKU HAS ONLY 4 AND NOT 3 LINES
TONI- Mon 28 Jan 2008
i THOUGH THAT hAIKU HAS ONLY 4 AND NOT 3 LINES
Alexandra- Mon 28 Jan 2008
interesting story - can't wait for more - hopefully these two will find somethings in common and also maybe... find love in the future...
Alandrias- Mon 28 Jan 2008
awsome! lol i love it so much... just like sesshomaru doesnt understand no XD
Jean- Mon 28 Jan 2008
Interesting and amusing beginning.
Fun stories I love
With humor and witiness
Thanks for the great read!
Keep up the fantastic work, I look forward to the next chapter!
Amusing and I really enjoyed reading the whole chapter entirely. I especially enjoyed Kagome's "tempts" to refute any or all of Sesshoumaru's demands.
Kula- Mon 28 Jan 2008
Like the story can't wait to see how it plays out.
jadedinu- Sun 27 Jan 2008
OMG....i laughed so hard at this chapter!!! just imaging the look on Kagome's face when she realized that taking her sneaker back started this whole courtship thing!! Looking forward to your next update!
Diantha- Sun 27 Jan 2008
I love this story, you give a really original and fresh (funny too!)voice to this pairing, keep up the awesome work, can't wait for the next chapter
ElegantPaws- Sun 27 Jan 2008
The edit mode comment stayed with me for days. I absolutely, positively love this story. Keep up the exceptional work woman! Mister Wise-Ass is in for it.
EP
Sola- Sun 27 Jan 2008
Oh man! What a great story. Wish you would update more than every two weeks, though. CAnt wait for the next chappy!
loved the first chap... can't wait to read the next......... keep up the good work...
EP was right as always. This first chapter's haiku was funny. Great chapter by the way!
I really like this fic! Finally something to make me laugh. Also, for some odd reason, the haiku at the end cracked me up... although the second line only has six syllables. I won't tell. :P 10/10
Best wishes!
LW
demonlordlover- Tue 15 Jan 2008
Wonderful story! Humorous and witty, with the right touch of sarcasm thrown in there. Can't wait to see Kagome's reaction!
Lady of the Mist- Mon 14 Jan 2008
I think this is Awesome. It left me laughing wondering how Kagome was going to get back at him and what the Southern Lord's mate was going to do. lol. I love it! Con't plz.
I really like your fic. I hope to see your next update in two weeks, right? If you have the time can you send us (readers & reviewers) an e-mail update notification. My e-mail is lllotrfan@yahoo.com. If not thats okay = )
yay! you posted. can't wait for the next chapter
JBella- Sun 13 Jan 2008
Lol, great job so far. I can't wait for the next chapter. Great characterizations all around, very funny...update in two weeks, huh? *Sigh* okay...
Tink- Sun 13 Jan 2008
Lol... I like the ending... cant wait for the next chapter!
jadedinu- Sun 13 Jan 2008
Poor Kagome....she literally doesn't know what just hit her!!! Can't wait for the next installment!!!
wabbit- Sun 13 Jan 2008
I love your story! It's flawless, no spelling mistakes (at least that I could pick up), the sentences connect...and humour-wise, it's just hilarious. Please continue, I'll be waiting for the next chapter!
Biteswhenprovoked- Sun 13 Jan 2008
love it. the way its written makes it very easy to read cause you kinda get drawn in. i'll continue reading it
Noacat- Sun 13 Jan 2008
Brilliant and hilarious. I love it. This story reminds me a bit of William Goldman. I'm reading the Princess Bride (which was a book before it was a movie... who knew?) right now -- and your story reminds me a bit of his style, though not entirely.
In any event, I love it and I can't wait for your second chapter! Good luck!
rdove- Sun 13 Jan 2008
I love this fic so far. Such an original way to get these two together. Very Humorous indeed. I look forward to reading more. Hope you update sooner than two weeks!!
HA! Loved and really enjoyed reading the descriptions in regards to the Southern hime’s gate into the scene & the actions towards Sesshoumaru's thought process to his “dilemmaâ€Â.
The only thing I didn't like was your comments in the parentheses b/c it was basically self-explanatory w/o them.
I look forward to your next chapter.
I really like the start of this and I hope to see more.
Li- Sun 13 Jan 2008
Oh, my, freakin, GOD! THAT WAS WICKED! But I do hope that he is, indeed, courting said female because he has a smidgen of affection for her rather than merely lusting after her power, because if that was the case, I can just picture Kagome purifying his ass to the deepest level of hell and back LoL
Please update soon! I love it! Ja ne!!
Hehe that last part was funny! I can't wait for more!
ElegantPaws sent me here promising me a great story
it's fantastic, well written and I can't wait to see where you take it.
Hehehe!!! This is some fantastic writing Meara. I could not stop laughing - in fact, at a few points I had to stop reading and wipe away tears because I couldn't see the screen. There's wit and sarcasm and Sesshomaru is described in a whole-new, original, and interesting way. I can't wait for the next installment. Until next time, ---Eddward
LadyRose- Sat 12 Jan 2008
I love this story please write more!!!
Angel- Sat 12 Jan 2008
This is a great story so far, keep up the good work! I can't wait for your next update!
piratequeen0405- Sat 12 Jan 2008
How fun! Can't wait for more.
mistress butcher- Sat 12 Jan 2008
omg. This is fantastic. I love you voice, I love your writing style. You have a great nack for telling a story. This is awesome!! Although it's only one chapter, this is probably the only new story in about six mouths that I found myself reading all the way through without skipping anything. This one chapter helped me remember why I love fanfiction. Keep up the good work.
studdedmisfit- Sat 12 Jan 2008
ha ha this story is so funny. i really like your style of writing its funny and different please keep writing i cant wait for the next chapter
Novalis- Sat 12 Jan 2008
THIS IS BRILLIANT!!!!!
ElegantPaws- Sat 12 Jan 2008
Okay so I am sick....I freakin love the Haiku. A brilliant start and looking forward to more.
ElegantPaws
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