Hey Shadow! Haven't instant messaged you for a while so you probably forgot who I am? I'm Sess-kun, or as you and Chaos called me, pooch. Sorry for getting off topic but I loved this story. A perfect combination of smut and intriguing plot. That's all I have to say. Hope to talk to you and Chaos again sometime.

you still suck for ending this. you could have done so much more. on the brighter side, you are a pretty good writer

i have to say this is hot, HOT, HOT. it was beautiful in a sexy way! i really loved it.

3
obsidian

I really like this story! Have you thought of expanding this into a story? Please consider it and write me back! This plot is so original so kudos to you.

arrghh!
come on thats not fair! you can't end it there!
O man...
By the way my BF has a stupid grin on is face because i jumped him somewhere in chapter 1, I bow down to you oh master of the lemon XD
BTW i live in canada too ^^ beautiful weather no?

NOOOOO!! lol I absolutly loved it. I've read all of your stories twice on FFN except for Vying for Dominance. Although I planed on reading it again tonight. You are awesome and because of your stories I got interested in het pairings, I usually did yaoi But geez your skilled. I'm juelous!! I can't wait to seee what you come up with next!

-Biggest Fan
33Piggy Chan

NOOOOO!! lol I absolutly loved it. I've read all of your stories twice on FFN except for Vying for Dominance. Although I planed on reading it again tonight. You are awesome and because of your stories I got interested in het pairings, I usually did yaoi But geez your skilled. I'm juelous!! I can't wait to seee what you come up with next!

-Biggest Fan
33Piggy Chan

NOOOOO!! lol I absolutly loved it. I've read all of your stories twice on FFN except for Vying for Dominance. Although I planed on reading it again tonight. You are awesome and because of your stories I got interested in het pairings, I usually did yaoi But geez your skilled. I'm juelous!! I can't wait to seee what you come up with next!

-Biggest Fan
33Piggy Chan

**^_^** --sweet-- although i can't imagine sesshoumaru w/ short hair

Wonderful! Absolutely wonderful! =]

Hey my hentai friend!!! I woke early...it's Saturday ( March 29th,2008) morning here in the ever changing weather of Missouri. I'm awaiting the weather to stay dry so my new manufactured home can be put on the torn up property the January tornado distroyed and since I'm feeling rather phsyically and mentally down (and a bit dizzy) I just had to pull out my laptop and thank God for the landline so I could find my ever loving friend and twisted authoress, Shadow! GIRL...YOU ARE AMAZINGLY TALENTED (in more ways then I care to admit) Oh God yes, I wanted to do exactly what the words were saying...but, (the good girl that I am...Umm,cough, cough) I just had to refrain. This has got to be one of the most hottest fics I 've read in a LONG time. Oh, yes, my friend, I need a cold shower and if that doesn't work I will ravish my husband till he can't walk when he gets home from work and make him wonder where the heck all this heat come from!!! I dare NOT say Shadow did it cause then he'd take my laptop away out of jealousy. It's been awhile since I've been "in the mood" and your little inspirational treasure you wrote here is totally phenominal. It needs to be in the "Hall of Smut". Thank you for the lift (take that any way you want). I honestly needed it. I hope my new house can get put up soon as I miss you and all the others here in the Fanfic World. Life is a real bore without you all to give me a reason to live and laugh. (oh, and the inspiration to want MORE sex) Love ya lots, Girlfriend! Take care and PLEASE do continue to write more "smut" as only you can do so totally, fantastically enjoyably fun. Hugs and kisses JEN

The first chapter left be breathless with anticipation, wanting terribly to know that it was Sesshoumaru, and wanting it so desperately to be him. I laughed hysterically in many parts, and noted that Kagome's reactions seemed pretty normal for her, and in-character. The ending of chapter one was priceless, leaving me wanting more. Imagine my surprise when I thought I was pressing the button to review and instead got the next chapter!

I whooped and sighed along with the chapter, and as everyone has noted in other reviews--Sesshoumaru's line about almost making a new lake was hilarious. However, the ending left me wanting... I don't know. I mean, Sesshoumaru was bursting at the seams just to see her again, and his wistful thinking about Inuyasha was heartbreaking. However, Kagome's reaction was lacking conviction. Here she was, pining over the past and scare/excited/anxious about meeting up with Sesshoumaru, and... NO SEX!? I mean, I get sleepy like normal people, but if my fiance came a knockin' at my door after not seeing him for however long and was pining from some good ol' fashion sheet-ripping, I would be GAME. Especially if I were virginal and had never done it before--how freaking RICH would it be to already have your door locked, house quiet and sleeping, and Sesshoumaru tucked around you with a raging hard-on wanting to poke you? Hard-ons are hard to ignore when pressing into you like that (like you noted in My Experiment, where someone's felt something like a flashlight...), and you almost have to be frigid to not feel a bit of a twinge of Ooo-La-La when one is at attention over you.

On top of that, the story made me quite embarrassed to remember my own debauchery on the internet back in my early teens when chat rooms exploded onto the scene. Egads... it was almost a turn off to remember my stupidity.

HOT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! VERY HOT!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE IT!!!! its so good and did i mention HOT man never read something like this before you go to sleep! you should do more story like it! cant wait till then.

...Okay, so I wanted to add a few things that were getting to me. First of all, I agree with Kagehime. Could we have more in-depth explanations? And I guess that Sessh must love her, but it's kind of a stretch with the whole 'incapable of loving' thing. What exactly was he supposed to do with the sword? -Sigh- I still loved it, but... I'm kinda confused.
Love and fudgesicles~ Tainted

...Holy...SHIT. That was completely indescribable. No amount of praise could cover... How fucking AWESOME that was. Damn.. It almost makes me wish it would keep going, if it hadn't ended so perfectly..
Much love and dang do I need to take a cold shower {I don't really think girls need to do that, but I SWEAR someone just turned the thermostat up about 30 degrees..} ~Tainted Sins
Oh, and about your 'instructions'... I didn't follow them, but maybe some other time. ;D

WHAT!!!! who the H3LL goes to SLEEP after Sesshomaru crawls into bed with them???? Is she friggin insane???? LOL, what an awesome story. Yeah, Sess was ooc but honestly, in mosern day america, he'd kinda need to be. i think you captured the essence of his character pretty well. moderating a chat room? yep, pretty weird, but being immortal probably would drive him to do off-the-wall stuff. Cool story.

Real good If you do another story like this I would read it

wow dude you were right about being below the gutter! but it was awesome!!! normally i don't like fics set in the modern era but this one was positively lovely!!! i loved the line about Colorado!! that was hilarious!!

Okay, I know that you keep saying that it's over, but then you shouldn't leave it at a permi-cliffie. That is just evil. EVIL!!!! So... please continue? Onegaishimasu?

I'm freaking ready to bow for you! You're totally amazing when it comes to writing! Please, oh please write one more! Like when Kagome agree to become his mate or something! Please *puppydog eyes with tears in them*

Shadow -

I agree with Tessahime -- this story is fantastic as it is, but there are things that are left unexplained and unsaid.

I want to know why he thinks she died... and the rest of it, the OOC thing with him running a chatroom and the rest of it..

Odd, since this story was so very erotic, I found myself in tears.. the depth of sorrow and loneliness on her part and the need on his -- and then the realization that it was Sesshoumaru (which we knew, even with the language and cybersex) and that for him... finally hearing his name from Kagome... it was a very powerful thing.

He said that he could never love.. but it seems that he DOES love -- I wanted more of that stated. She acknowledged that she was his, it was the last thing she said... but he didn't reciprocate.

I wanted to see him as he was then, some greater glimmer of Sesshoumaru, to displace the cybersex Assassin that we got to know in the first chapter.

Kagome's love and desperation for the one she had loved were clear.. his FIRE for her were also clear... but also his statement that he could never love and she could and needed love.

If she is to be his, then he must love her.. had you left it at the first chapter I wouldn't have been altogether satisfied but it was the second chapter that had so much more in it and raised questions.

Yes, with Tesshime, I agree, a third chapter is needed to complete things.. I'm not sure how you would do it, since the second chapter has the feeling very much of "the end" - but the unanswered questions linger, as does the nature of their relationship.. is he still "our" Sesshoumaru? Is he capable of love? Can she and can he forget that they encountered each other in cybersex - something that feels wrong for these two; their passions are very real, but Sesshoumaru would do, not say - of course he didn't know it was Kagome at the time (again, why did he think she had died?)

And even after he knew it he still tried to initiate cyber - that didn't feel wrong; Sesshoumaru, once knowing that Kagome was indeed there, would not want to cyber with her -- he would do what he did, get in his plane and get to her as soon as he could.

And after her admission about his fire and ice and her feelings (the one that caused the plane to dip - great passage there) where was his reciprocation?

I have never been moved so much by something that purported to be light PWP fun... but the questions remain.

gods... that was amazing!

awwwwwww come on!!!
T.T one more chapter with kagome agreeing to be sesshoumarus mate and smut!!!
xD
-drools-
I love it how you describe sesshoumaru's body.....

Wow!! You were right...No normal person could read that and not feel something!! Lol!!! Great story! Sesshoumaur was a little OOC, but, hey, people change with time!!!

3rd chapter! 3rd chapter! 3rd chapter! lol common Sesshie cant be left like that! ;)

damn hold on im tryign to catch my breath over here man your good your really good can you update son send me an email when you doo update ok maan that was intense

Very nice. You could leave as is or better yet make an entire story out of it. Then again sometimes that screws up a shortie like this.

What's really bad is when ever you sign your name Shadow I think of the character on Bear in the Big Blue House. She tells stories too only with shadow puppets. Ah, the joys of having a toddler. "Oh where or where oh where is Shadow?"

OK, I thought chapter 1 was it!!! Then I saw the nice shiny button that said next chapter! How could you Shadow?!?! >_

I was fine with the way chapter 1 ended! I liked it! It seemed complete! But now, you added in chapter 2!?!? GAH! Now I want MORE! I don't like how chapter 2 ended, well I do, but it's not enough. You took it that far you have to continue! because I said so. :) Great story though... Jeez, how much greatness can you pump out of that little hentai mind of yours? :p

Wow shadow... wow!

While I didn't, uh, folow the onscreen prompts as it were, I was totally feeling the moment... So kudos! You really do have a way with the nauty stories, and I mean that in a good way! :)

Hey again, I have a couple of questions, still, after reading it for the hundreth time. How could and would Kagome help him wield Tetsusaiga? And the fires that she talks about before she logs off (and he almost drops to sea level, which made me laugh unbelievabely hard), are they of passion/lust, or of her powers that were becoming less dormant? Oh, and by the way, I love the irony of him being a cop. Think about it. A cop staring a chatroom where every once and a while he corners an unknown person and has cybersex with them, without proper assurance of age. Quite amusing in a good twisted way. By the way, how old is Kagome, and how long ago was she evicted from the well? And why does Sesshoumaru claim to have "seen her die" with his own two eyes? That part is still somewhat shady. Anyway, this fic will never cease to be the hottest one out there, and you deserve the highest kudos. When it's voting time, you're number one for several categories! So, looking forward to more yummy smut (especially VYING 4 DOM).
Toodles!

Very good story, and i really did love the ending. But dang, I was looking forward to them actually having sex in person, but we can not all get what we want. If you ever thought of continuing this story I think it could go very well. I have read very few that Sesshoumaru is a cop. In fact I can only think of one. None the less thank you for giving me this glorious story with all its red hot heat.

Very good story, and i really did love the ending. But dang, I was looking forward to them actually having sex in person, but we can not all get what we want. If you ever thought of continuing this story I think it could go very well. I have read very few that Sesshoumaru is a cop. In fact I can only think of one. None the less thank you for giving me this glorious story with all its red hot heat.

I don't know whether I sould be angry with you or kiss the ground you walk on for thesecond chapter. How could you just leave poor Sesshoumaru like that? Anyways, THANK YOU for another wonderful chapter in the litany of amazing fiction under your belt! Honestly, you are in my top three favorites for this site!

damn you better keep postign more chapters man thats hot put a god damnl lemon between these two on the next chapter please im all wet by just readign thsi fuckign story

My gawds.... I had to turn down my own heater.

Nice job! please! write the next chapter! we need this. Be intense!
Greetings!.

Shadow you are awesome! I absolutely loved how you rapped up this story even though it was originally a one-shot. Thanks so much for coming through for your fans!

Beautiful ending, I wouldn't x-pect anything less, it was really amazing ok maybe I let my hentai mind get ahead of me and thought it would be smuty but I think its perfect the way it is now Awesome fic

Okay. I know that you say that this is the end. But if you were to pick this up as a fic. when you have compleeted some of your others, I dont think any of us would complain.
You could have Kagome move to America with him, as he works with the 'finest' and she learns english.
Just a sugestion. I know I would realy appreciate more of this story.
Love ya, Kiaya.

that;s it!?!?!? awwww.....it has such potential.*goes into corner and sobs*

ohhh well....it was good while it lasted.

NO I REFUSE TO LET IT END WITHOUT A SMUT SCENE!!!! lol It's a shame that i love lemons so much. come on just one more chapter....please....pretty please...with a cherry on top....okay maybe you don't like cherries.lol. ^_^. well it was a great two-shot story and i wish it could have went on forever but all good things must come to an end. ja ne.

Tee Hee, that ending was so cute. I 'm glad that they finally reunited. Oh, *squeals* picturing Sesshy-boy in a uniform *drools* yummy. I have to admit I always admired a man in uniform. Cheesy I know but hey I can't help it. Anyways great job Shadow. No wonder your one of my fav authors. ^_^

I love that you wrote an ending for this! I must admit, I would have loved to see more smut, but it worked out perfectly. Ironically, I had just posted the link to this story on demonlordlover's yahoo group as one of my favorite one-shots. Imagine my suprise when I checked your page and saw chapter number two! Kudos. You are definately my favorite author. I can't wait for more (especially SotF)!

In my opinion, I think the second chapter was a better ending than the first. I enjoyed the whole story.

Great writing.

A rather satisfying end actually. Excellent choice.

EP

yep, that ending was better. it's still kinda open but it's also more... i don't know, conclusive maybe.
anyway, hopefully we'll see updates for your other stories soon!! ;)

GOD I love how you write - you have to be one of my favorite fanfiction authors.. you are up there with Rinseternalsoul and ciraarana. You have the knack of combining the smut (hehe :) ) with a plot which makes your stories all the more a pleasure to read. A big thumbs up and keep writing!

I thought it was great. Sess looks good in blue. ^_^

Supposing that you let the story at the end of the first chapter, the mood would have been mysterious and the readers would be left to imagine their own endings. The second ending on the other hand is sweet, with a promise of the future to come. While I think both endings possess their own individual attractions, I personally think it would have been more effective if you had left off at the end of the first chapter. But that aside, I feel slightly sad that the story has finally ended. But then all good things must come to an end, no?

Anyways, congrats on finally finishing a fic well done; not too rare and not too overcooked.

wabbit

Shadow, come on, you can do better than that. You said close I feel chapters coming on. Why Because you turned it into something much more. Please reconsider and turn this into a story. And hey it doesn;t have to be long I don't know 7 more chapters, maybe even ten. Or even 5. But you left it wide open to be something more.

Well that's your local tori, I'm back in action.
Thanks Shadow.
Tori

Very nicely done. A little taste of both options. I really would have enjoyed a bit of naughtyness, but at least it feels complete. Very good. So maybe an update on one of your other stories is in order now???? (crosses fingers and hopes it comes soom)
Your a great writer. I love all your work, please keep it up!

good second part! Glad that you didn't leave at the end of the first chapter...And almost sad that it is really the end now *sniff*
But really good story, you are the best!

That was great!!! I'm glad you made a second chapter. I will satisfied that you said that was the final chapter, but would be happy if you decided to add more.

Can't wait for your next body of work!!

AWESOME!!!
Now for sure - for sure nothing else needs to be said. I loved it. It was freaking awesome man! You rock.

Great ending! I thought the first one was great too though ^_^ You handled it very well and it leaves it open to imagination. Great job!

ahha! when you updated the story the first time asking us for our opinion, i read that little part you made up where sesshomaru typed that winking face, and i thought it was sooo funny. so when i finally read the actual chapter 2, i laughed so hard when i came to the "let's do it again...;)" part!
but yea, this was a very interesting story! more please! (:

See? I knew whatever you came up with would be perfect! I am happy.

I'm up way past my bedtime, but I honestly couldn't be happier to be sleep deprived at this very instant. Okay, so it wasn't a one-shot--but goddamm what a gorgeous second part/end. I'm enthralled, mesmerized, impressed, and looking forward to going to bed. I absolutely loved it. Sexy, romantic, sweet. Yay you.

Hi there. I think you should have her reaction in the next part if you write it. I think they should keep us with their online meetings before they actually meet but of course Sess could try to sneak actual glances of her and maybe Kagome of him. Get their relationship to grow more before they meet. Thats my suggestion but you gotta have her reaction since we got his.

Please do a sequel!!! And I vote for option #1. If you decide to do a sequel please make it soon.

NOOOOOOOOOOO DONT NOT WRITE A SEQUEL!!! please do not write a sequel. that reason this is so good because it is a one shot it is more poetic and mysterious. if you contiune it will become tacky and like every other story so PLEASE DONT WRITE A SEQUEL!! dont give into the dark chessy lemon loving side. do that for other story but keep this one the way it is.

-studdedmisfit

I would have to vote option #2. I like both ideas but I think I like #2 better.

Delicious...as per usual. I have no sympathy whatsoever...we DEMAND a PART II.

EP

Either is fine with me a sequel would be great

That was hot, but I would have loved to have Kagome's reaction to her name, like we had Sess's

You should definitely make a sequel or more chapters showing how they find each other and make a lemon where they really are with each other.

Well, I thought that the ending was sufficent enough...but I'll not admit that I'm adverse to a sequel. In the case that you do write extra, I would have to say definitely, scenario #2. Cheers,
wabbit

well out of those two senarios i have to say that the second one would b the most entertain for me. Oh and about the whole to many stories problem just end the one after this next capter

i think you should add both it is awesome i would like to see them reunit after such a long time so love the hotel idea please add more i vote for both like the others you rock update please ok can't wait to find out what your going to do but im hoping they meet me like Lemons :P

i think it would be awesome for them to meet i luv the whole cyber sex thing that was extremely hot but i think they should meet after so long he seems to be obsessed with her let them meet each other pretty please!!!!!!!!!! LEMON :P

update update update pretty please with loads of sugar on top!

i like the idea of the whole oh shit it was really the person i was thinking about so i like the second option

well, i'm definitely for #2. it would kind of go with the flow if they continue to "meet" or whatever via internet and kinda built up their relationship or whatever where they met again and then the real life meeting is just kind of the cherry on top - the happy end for everybody because they get together and live happily ever after.
but i'm sure whatever you decide on will be great.

srry srry...i mean please do a sequel to the assasin's seduction...it was so good and i would love to know what happens...and just so you know i'm also a huge fan of your other work like love has nothing to do with this...not that i'm hentai or anything *coughs* anyway i'd love to hear from you.
from,
a fan

please,please,PLEASE do a review.....please?

I think I prefer the one with them meeting at a hotel. However, I trust that anything you come up with will be wonderful!

I think you should make a combination. Thinking about it, Kagome would probably freak seeing her name on the screen and would definitely want answers and I could totally see Sesshomaru using it to his advantage for the real thing.

I think you should make a combination. Thinking about it, Kagome would probably freak seeing her name on the screen and would definitely want answers and I could totally see Sesshomaru using it to his advantage for the real thing.

Ya know the old saying "Leave them wanting more"--I think the operative word is leave. Maybe I just like to be teased, but the way it ended was spot-on. That said, if you do write more I will read, and read happily. And for the love of all things sacred and profane--ENDING 2!

You're going to add more? I can't say I'm disappointed with that, though I think I was one of the few people content with the ending.

I vote you continue their online relationship and end it with them meeting IRL, kind of mimicking how they reacted to each other online, but more keyed down.

Well I was oh so very happy to see that you are considering writing a sequel to your amazingly smexy story! Its not every day that you run across a fanfiction that is so well written and well arousing. Anyway, I would be oh so happy in anyway you decide to continue it, but I really really really want to read about a real life interaction (okay to be honest I want to read in life sex) but I really want to see Kagomes reaction as well. Now I know I can't have my cake and eat it too but erm, I really want to? I would love to see both Sess and Kags without the courage being online gives them, though I imagine that courage is sort of shattered when they realize just who they were talking too. Plus how could they be sure that they are really talking to the real each others. Web cam perhaps? >. Oh me Oh myyyy. Well I hope to read more from you soon with this marvelous story. Much Lovvve

Is it wrong of me that when my fans ask for a sequal I normally stay firm? In this case i think you should stand firm because you ended on a good note... nice little cliff hanger that pleases the reader, allowing them to run away with the story in their own imagination. Some stories have an incomplete feel to them... but this fic was nice round and whole... you feel me? I say leave it... but if you do write more... I'd be more than willing to read it when and if time pemits.

Luv ya,
-Kjinuyasha

Personally, I really liked the way it ended. I don't believe that you could add anything to it that would make it more than what it is now. The way you've left it leaves the reader's imagination to run wild. Add if you want/need, but the one-shot was perfect as it was.

I thought your previous ending was perfect as well. It allowed us to imagine what happened next in our own minds, but I guess I was wrong too :o) So, since you are considering another (hopefully final, lol) chapter, I kind of like option 2. Just the little bit that you had there was enough to crack me up and make me wonder what Sesshomaru would say next. Even better, maybe Kags could find a way to make our favorite demon lord blush. ;o) Happy writing!

omg... I loved it... very very nice... you have to be my favorite author... I fell in love with My Experiment and was hooked... I really hope you do decide if you havent to make a sequel for this... :)

laterz
#~Tink~#

Ok let me just first of say that I am super exstatic about this being continued. I am waiting for like all the other WIP peces that you are doing however I am more than happy to wait for them for this little number! Hmmm... as for the plot line I can see why you can't decide...both are so very good. I would definately like to see kagomes reaction to finding out it is sesshoumaru and seeing him trying to seduce her again. While I like what little bit you wrote for the second option better than the first, I think the IRL smut just reads so nicely....But if I must make a choice then I would say the second option. It would be hot and humourous just like the first part and there are already so many other good in person lemon writings out there, including yours, that it would be good to end it with online smuttyness for originality sake.
So that is just my opinion. I am thrilled that you will do a sequal part and will love it either way!

Totally think 2nd plot.

I think a whole:

Wait

What do you mean? Are you really.../>

*tapping on window*

Kagome turns to find Sesshoumaru dressed an on her window sill. Instantly hilarity as she shrieks and is caught naked.

Or the whole he immediately goes to the shrine after he logs off and confronts her. Leads her away to get from the ears of the family...

You're so cool.