It's good ... it's very good. I can't wait to read more! And thanks for that dedication - it's so nice of you. I'm truly touched.

Keep in touch and keep writting this joyful little piece.

P.S. Sure there some grammatical errors and some typos... but beside that it's interesting. Woottt Wooottt girl! Rooting for you!

Ah that was so mean! A cliffy the most unsatisfying type of chapter! grrr, still can't wait for more though!

:)

-FangedBeasty

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

NOOO fair it just gettin ggood!

I like the twist in plot. Well done

you gotta hurry up and update

I love it o far adn i really hope you will write more and possibly send it to me....thx!! *smiles*

Nice begining, i must say. I didn't really think that a story named 'detention' would start with Kagome being a swearing girl, but i really think this story has promise, minus a few spelling errors or course. if you do not have a beta, you should get one, if you do, you should get another. there are some grammer errors, but not many. I wont give examples, because i am pressed for time, but i want to congradulat you on a well done first chapter, and wish you luck on continueing. Is this persoal experiance or made up? And i hope you had a wonderful Christmas and a happy New Year! i will try to at least review every toher chapter for you, and help you out, kay?
TTFN;
joanne

hm... sounds interesting so far... keep upt he good work, pehaps some longer chapter... pLease!!!!

Chaos

please update soon this is good and great!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

when is the next chapter going to be up i absolutely love this story and its plot!!! You did a very good first chapter!!!

What?!!! Mean mean person you! *pout* It always happens when I like a story. It started by me running out of candy and now this? What's next? A giant elephant falling from the sky. *Gets crushed by an elephant and almost doesn't finish the review*

Very nice story so far, still you were mean by doing that! Please update soon? :)
:)

-FangedBeasty