| I Like, I Lust, I Love!!Please Make A Sequel!!
kim- Tue 08 Apr 2008
| Cool this is so real.
This was a nice one shot. It would be nice if you could maybe add on it and continue with it one day. *sighs*
Well done...*hugs and smiles*
tessahime- Tue 05 Feb 2008
| Awesome! Really, I initially thought it kind of sucked that you ended it there, but then I realized that it wasR and a one shot. So, really the endind was perfect! Beautiful and original idea! Hehehe. I kinda do feel bad for Sesshoumaru though.
reina- Wed 02 Jan 2008
| hahaha talk about having wet dreams! ^_^
white demoness- Wed 02 Jan 2008
| plzzzzzzzzzzz!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! keep going that is good!!!!!!!!!!
snowbird- Sat 22 Dec 2007
| This was really quite good! Very different and sad. Too bad it's only a one-shot. It would make for an interesting story with him finding a way to transfer her with the jewel into the body of a young and pure body of a beautiful female. Whether it be the body of a youkai, hanyou, or human would not matter to me. As long as the female lived as long as he. It would be interesting to follow Kagome as she adjusted to a new body and a new life. Of course she would have to retain her memories! And now Sesshoumaru would have a body instead of a spirit to love and make love to. Aren't I a dreamer? But it would make for a good love story. Think about it.
luna- Sat 22 Dec 2007
| oo wow nice, i just love this fic so plz continue.
rowdysgirl- Fri 21 Dec 2007
| excellent! you had me hooked, right and true, from the start. i was holding my breath at times even. a really good tale. but there are just a couple of things i'd like to point out (blame my anal-retentive soul): bare is to get naked. bear is to carry. quite is to a degree (i.e. the cake was not quite done). quiet is to be silent. please forgive my pickiness, at least you haven't confused wither and writhe; that one really puts me off my nut cuz their meanings are so different. just shake your head and laugh at me, you'll be in good company. lol
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