Very nice! I really enjoyed the ending with Jaken narrating. I've enjoyed reading this fic very much. Thank you for a job well done.
Sincerely,
Zoku

I really enjoy reading your story. Please continue, I mean it's not every day that you find a Sess/Kag story with such an original plot. I hope you finish this story on this site so when it becomes a read-only, i can come back anytime and read it over. I have a feeling I will be coming back to read it over.

Please continue....I love how you have Sesshoumaru really wanting Kagome.
I'll be waiting...lol

Love this chapter so happy you updated.

I like this story. its very original and well written. I also love the changes in the points of view. =]

hope you update soon!

Awesome chapters. Will you be transferring this story over to 'Dokuga.com fanfiction site if you don't finish up here or will you post in both places?
I really like this story and look forward to updates soon.

*hugs and smiles*

the story flows very well. the plot is great. please try to make the chapters longer and try to update more. i can't wait to see what happens next.^_^

You have a unique and interesting plot. I like plots that are different. Only one thing, I was disappointed with the love scene. It did not have to be a full blown lemon but more than what you gave. You did not even have them think back on the events of "the night". That was a big important night for them both. It seemed to end up a minor event in the story. Please, please don't take this as a flame! It's not! In spite of that one thing, I am enjoying this story and will continue to read it. Especially moments like the one with Shippo. It was so heartwarmingly precious. Also, I'm glad Inuyasha is being very understanding and adult about the whole thing. I'm glad you added the part with their first heart to heart words to each other and that Kagome overheard what they said. I'm glad Sesshoumaru decided not to confide in his cousin. To me he's the most obvious choice to be behind the whole thing. He's too nice and seemingly trustworthy. I think the cousin probably plans to murder Sesshoumaru, making it look like an accident, and take over as Lord of the Western Lands. He may even go after Inuyasha since he's the only other relative, other than the pup now. Then again, I couild be totally off base and the killer be someone entirely different. But, I'd be willing to bet money on the cousin. I'm anxious for the next update.

You have a unique and interesting plot. I like plots that are different. Only one thing, I was disappointed with the love scene. It did not have to be a full blown lemon but more than what you gave. You did not even have them think back on the events of "the night". That was a big important night for them both. It seemed to end up a minor event in the story. Please, please don't take this as a flame! It's not! In spite of that one thing, I am enjoying this story and will continue to read it. Especially moments like the one with Shippo. It was so heartwarmingly precious. Also, I'm glad Inuyasha is being very understanding and adult about the whole thing. I'm glad you added the part with their first heart to heart words to each other and that Kagome overheard what they said. I'm glad Sesshoumaru decided not to confide in his cousin. To me he's the most obvious choice to be behind the whole thing. He's too nice and seemingly trustworthy. I think the cousin probably plans to murder Sesshoumaru, making it look like an accident, and take over as Lord of the Western Lands. He may even go after Inuyasha since he's the only other relative, other than the pup now. Then again, I couild be totally off base and the killer be someone entirely different. But, I'd be willing to bet money on the cousin. I'm anxious for the next update.

I LOVE IT!!!! Please update soon i cant wait to find out what happens next.

Whoo (celebrates) Kagome is pregnant! Lolz me loves dis story very much! lolz can't wait for the next chapter!

*Giggles* Kags is pregnant! Man, this was the longest wait to find out the results. Glad that part is over.

More updates, btw, you can just bypass the dull pregnancy parts and go to the last leg of the waiting period... *lol* just kidding, wait...no, I'm not kidding. I want the baby (pup) to come soon.

Short but good.
update soon.
*hugs and smiles*

Gee, I feel like I'm pregnant *giggles*...I can't stand the wait.
Update soon and often. It would be nice if the chapters were a bit longer *hint, hint*

Nice & lovely chapter.
*hugs and smiles*

Aww...That was so cute! So is Kagome going to be pupped? Can't wait for the next chapter!

hi hi! cute chapter! kagome is just so nice...i wish i was like that! i can be, but sometimes i forget^_^' i'm going to read the next chapter tomorrow!

hi! nice work! i like your story a lot! i'm going to read the next chapter now!

Kind of a sad way to lose something so precious, but hey it's your story so I'm supporing you all the way! I'm going to read your next chapter now!

i juz wanted 2 say neither kag nor sess r thinkin this clearly 4 if they do go thru w/his outragious idea they r 4gettin that the baby'll already b born w/its own soul. would it b fair 4 it 2 have its soul removed juz 4 sess' unwillingness 2 let go? rin waz supposed 2 have died in d 1st place. cruel? maybe, but true, he should b thankful he at least got d chance 2 meet her. she fulfilled her puspose, teachin d cold dog 2 remove d blind-fold view he had toward d world, n it waz time 2 give back d borrowed time.
now he wants 2 steal d body of his own pup? not givin it a chance 2 experience life it so rightfull deserves? n not juz that, kag is goin 2 help figuratively murder this poor unborn child? i think d real kag n sess r intelligent enough 2 realize this but i guess u need this slip-off in 'em 4 ur story so carry on i suppose.

Gaaah, wonderful chapter. ANTICIPATION~ Who killed Rin? How's the whole transfer-Rin's soul thing gonna work out? Is something going to go terribly wrong? Will they fall in love eventually..? Update soon, pleasy.. Love and fudgesicles~

Chapter 8 was nice but it seem to have rambled on and repeated itself too often...almost as if was a filler but I still enjoyed reading it.

I have a suggestion but you probably already have this story written out in advance but here goes...what if Kags has twins (a boy first and then a girl) both being full demons or maybe just the boy being full and the girl being hanyou. Anyway that was my thought and you may have thought of it yourself already. Thanks for letting me ramble on.

Looking forward to future updates soon.

*hugs and smiles*

Awww, so cute! That scene there with Shippou.. Can't wait for next chapter! Update soon, please!

i like the story,so i look forward to new chapters to come.
take your time,don't feel rushed,and good luck.

Oh, so she's gonna do it? (Was there ever any doubt?) Good chapter.
Loved the description of Shippous tea cups, by the way. Update soon!

What an original plot!!! This story is a unique twist that is great. I can't wait to see how it turns out. please update soon!

So I was correct in my assumption of Sess' plans...*smiles to oneself*

Please update soon...loving the story.

*hugs and smiles*

Good plot line, beautifully written, grammar isn't perfect but when is it ever? All in all a wonderful story, I'll be waiting for your updates.

Ok I finally get it he seal the soul of Rin and is going to place her in another body. He's going after Kagome I bet to replace her for RIn. Hmm Only guessing also he could also get Kagome pregant and use the soul of RIn to the Baby that Kagome will have. Lots of possibilties I really going to enjoy the next chapter hope u post soon!!!

Very interesting. I'm thinking that Sess is going to go after Kags and maybe impregnate her then put Rin's soul into the baby. Just a guess or a thought.

Can't wait to see what Sess is going to do...update soon.

*hugs and smiles*

whose body? not Kagome! doesn't a soul another occupy the living!

Oh! That was depressing!! But really good. But Depressing!!!
I still liked it though.

Nice start...very interesting. I have to admit that at first I thought it was Inuyasha talking about Kagome until I came to the part where he said the first time he saw her when he was leaning up against the tree and he saved her life, then I realize it was Sess talking about Rin. That was very clever *giggles*.

Nicely done...please update soon.
*hugs and smiles*