Your story is very well written and the plot is unique. I hope you update soon.

*eyes widen* HE LOST IT?! WTF?! lolz actually i knew it would happen... Inu can't really keep things safe... -_-'

ok you are safe now, i have decided to put my sword down. I knew you will fix it !!!! Great chapter as always on of the best writters i have ever seen

ok you are safe now, i have decided to put my sword down. I knew you will fix it !!!! Great chapter as always on of the best writters i have ever seen

Well, hello there *waves* It's been awhile I think but...thats okay. Great chapter. I'm so glad that Sesshoumaru is okay. You had me a little scared. I do hope Kagome and Inuyasha reach their destination before the wolves kill little Rin. So Inuyasha lost the shard. Just how exactly? Did someone attack him and take it? I wonder who...oh well I'll wait for the next chapter. I do hope it's not going to be too long...but please no pressure to hurry ^_^

Haha, that ending sounds familiar, though I think it was the other way around. I love this story! Please update again soon!

Okay, so the end of 8 made me slightly upset. Then you put the story on hold, and I was more upset.

Now, it is back and it was worth the wait. Thank you for an awesome chapter. I would also like to thank you in advance for updating again soon.

Really, I enjoy all your work and get excited anytime I see that you have updated any of them.

Emily

Wow updates from u always brighten my day ......er well it is night so........ Anywho yes! nice chapter i can't wait for the next one but i will ....did i mention i love your story Heh heh =D

wow this is such a great story even though i had trouble following it cuz of all the big words^_^but it was still great!i even cried!

Gah! That was an awesome chapter, please don't leave us in suspense for too long. Update again real soon please!!!!

(looks around for bows and arrows, can't find them... ) ahh here it is (picks up sword) Elle RUN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I'm going to get you for this!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! how could you.??? haha just kidding Great chapter I know you have a great reason for killing him... I hope

(looks around for bows and arrows, can't find them... ) ahh here it is (picks up sword) Elle RUN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I'm going to get you for this!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! how could you.??? haha just kidding Great chapter I know you have a great reason for killing him... I hope

WHAT?! O_o HOW?! How COULD you?! This is NOT cute! Sesshomaru better be transforming back into his old self! If he died, Kagome has to go back to the well and start all over. But it's already been months. Who's to say things haven't gotten horribly worse in the future? T^T Fix thiii~is!

I thought it was great, no need to run! The battle scene was nicely done and you almost had me crying at the end (that in and of itself is a feat). Keep up the great work!

omg what did u do T_T? j/k. wow, amaing chapter. i really love it. i can't wait to see how the characters & story develop. update soon.

elle, elle, elle! you are probably one of the bravest writers out there...sesshy is dead?!?!?!? I mean, it was well written, but I must go don black, I am in mourning.

Geez, yea you should run! lol that is one of the worst parts that you could possibly end it, and you know it too! Can't wait for more.

:)

-FangedBeasty

wow! This chapter is amazing.. and all cliff-hanger like! And evil T_T You left a cliff hanger.. -cries- I must know what happnes next!!

geeze louise, as cliffhangers go, that's a freaking colossal doozy!! O.O

i have my suspicions about what will happen, but i won't say nething, just in case i'm right. i wouldn't wanna spoil your fun ;]

hurry!

Sesshoumaru can't be killed for good - someone suggested that, but it's clear that he had to relearn some things - compassion and caring, the things his grandmother had sent him back "be-spelled" as the blue-haired youkai said -- to learn.

Now having learned them, perhaps he can return to his adult form.

I wasn't sure I would like the "return to the past" thing either, but so far I'm enjoying the story immensely. The characterization of Sesshoumaru as a child and Inuyasha as he realizes he is to teach his little brother, the entire idea of them BEING brothers and acting as such, was wonderful.

Of course the writing was excellent, and the story well-paced.

The only thing that truly disappoints me is the author's note regarding "Digression" indicating that it will, if at all, be updated sporadically. Too often that means it won't be updated anymore, as another project (this one) has taken its place.

I would wish it otherwise, much as I enjoy this, becoming invested in a story and then not having it completed is always a frustrating experience.

Excellent story :)

i like this story.


it's a bit confusing, but still really good.

*blinks at you...and then stares* Holy crap, I know you didn't just do that! *laughs* You're so ballsy, I love it! Coming back from a long hiatus (during which I eagerly awaited an update and re-read some of your other fics) and now throwing this cliff anger at us! Well, I hope your break wasn’t due to anything serious. Honestly, if you told me Sesshomaru had stolen you away for some serious loving I wouldn’t be surprised. Who wouldn’t love to be abducted by that handsome hunk of man flesh?

So, now on to the actual praise and all around good feeling time; the character development was simply astounding! I wondered how Inuyasha was going to ‘soften’ up and I have to say you did it spectacularly. And who couldn’t love a mini- Sesshomaru? He is simply irresistible…or, I guess he was!*Cries*

Plus, your new character is lovingly cloaked in mystery, and Kagome is…well….I didn’t know if I was going to like the whole ‘need to re-do the past’ thing. But the more the story evolves the more I absolutely love it and WANT/NEED/CRAVE/ more!!!! So feed a poor starving reviewer and update?*pulls the puppy dog eyes*

Much adoration from this chaotic,
~Chaos

O_o~!!!! um.. i totally wasn't expecting that! um... ok now i have to see the next chapter.
I knew shippou would come into play...it sad he isn't with the group, but makes sence. ^_^ im just happy i found your fic again, i was just kicking myself for not bookmarking it.

I really really hope you didnt kill Sesshoumaru for good, or else you will have to find a very safe spot to hide >.

BEAUTIFUL!!! i love this chapter! poor thing.......i can't wait to see how this turns out!!

What the hell was that!!! I can't believe you did that. Even more, I can't believe I just chewed all my damn fingernails off, but that was a DAMN GOOD chapter. Update soon

yes, I definitely think you should start running!

Oh my god, that was such an awesome chapter, even with the cliffhanger! This story is quickly turning into one of my favorites. I love the interaction between Sesshomaru and Inuyasha, it is priceless. Even though we know that Sesshomaru is not gone from the story, it was still hard to see his "die" as a child, which made it even more sad :[

Keep up with the amazing writing and I hope that you update soon :]

how could you, you killed baby shessy : ( bring him back you big meanie, other then that great story, keep up the good work, and please update soon

Dammit, you'd better run!!! No cliffies!!! Bad Elle, BAD! *sniffs* You'd better put up the next chapter soon!!

So Inuyasha pummeled Sesshy. At least he didn't seriously hurt him. Hmm, I hope to see another update soon =)

Ooooooh, I wonder what's going to happen next? From reading all of your other stories, it's definately going to be good. When't the next chapter coming out?

I really love your stories!!! I just can't get over what a great author you are!!! Its amazing!! Your amazing

Yaay! It was great, just like all the other chapters. Wonderful I loved it! :)

-FangedBeasty

Can't wait to see what happens!

No cliff hanger? LOL Your definition of cliffhanger and mine differ greatly. *S*

I enjoyed the battle scene and how detatched he was. It's interesting to see Sesshoumaru in this mind frame, very interesting indeed.

wow this fic has been really interesting. i like how you have written it, it's really interesting. i mean first kagome has to go back to the past trying to do the same thing she did before and now sesshomaru is all litte. really good! looking forward to future chapters!

Sesshoumaru is turning out to be a cute little demon who obviously has been trained to be eventually in a responsible leadership position. Despite his youth he is very mature. Kagome seems to be getting along with him quite well. Inuyasha is turning out to be a jerk. What kind of guy would take advantage of such a situation? I think each time Kagome tries to reset time she will see major character faults of Inuyasha, which will make him an unacceptable potential mate.

WoooW this is amazing!! I absolutely love your stories!!

I havent been able to get online for a while and finally got to read the past few chapters and let me tell you i think this story is really unique compared to all the others out there. i can't wait to read what happens next keep up the great work

Ooh, a cliffy! O_O I admit I was having my doubts about Sesshoumaru being a kid. I thought the story was gonna get weird, but I think I like it this way. :D And things are getting interesting. How are they going to get Sesshoumaru back to his original tall self? Can't wait to see what happens next! :D

Uh, oh, if Inuyasha hurts Sesshoumaru I can imagine the beating Kagome will hand out! I like how you're structuring this. The time travel idea is fun, but the way you're going about it is unique too which makes this a treat.

This is so good! I loved your other stories and I'm glad you've started another one. This is such an interesting story, and I can't wait to see what happens next! Please update soon!

I'm lovin' it. Please update soon. Can't wait to read the next chapter.

Great story, I love the complexity of the situation. I can not even begin to fathom what will happen next or who they will run into.

Sesshomaru is absolutely adorable as a child and I love how the timeline is set up. Sesshomaru's grandmother appearing is a nice touch as well and very original

Keep up the good writing and I can not wait for the next update

Wonderful, and as always I can not wait to read more!

:)

-FangedBeasty

A CLIFFIE!!!!!?!! Nice me likey chappie but, T_T I'm a little sad though because you gave us readers a cliffie, but hey i"ll always keep coming back to your stories ^_^

A CLIFFIE!!!!!?!! Nice me likey chappie but, T_T I'm a little sad though because you gave us readers a cliffie, but hey i"ll always keep coming back to your stories ^_^

Aww, Sessh seems so cute XD. Geez, you just had to leave me hanging huh? Just Kidding. But seriously Inuyasha's not going to hurt him right? He's going to be okay *staring at the computer w/hope filled eyes*. Anyways thanks for the update. Can't wait to find out what happens next!

i love kid sesshomaru!! you should reveal how he became so cold in the story!!! that would be so nice.

Hello! Sorry I haven't read or reviewed in awhile. I've been on vacation and I read fics on my break @ work. No, sadly I didn't go anywhere. Just stayed home and watched tons of movies, stayed up all hours of the night and slept. I hope you had an awesome Christmas and New Years. So, to the reviewing. I must say I really enjoy where the story is going. A little Sesshoumaru. I want to hug him now XD. LOL. I bet the grown up Sesshoumaru would really love that huh? I can't wait for the next update oh and yes I would still like to receive e-mail notifications letting me know you updated your fic. Sorry you didn't get feedback from me but I was probably at home sleeping or watching some movies. later ceira

a baby sesshomaru and his grandama was a brillant touch!!

Well, at first Kagome was still getting the major experiences accomplished. However, I don't think Sesshoumaru turning into a chibi was part of the game plan. Is Inuyasha also a child? Either way, oh dear. Kagome won't live long enough to raise Sesshoumaru and she will not have the allies she needs to defeat Naraku. The shards still need to be collected. Oh hell, this time line seems screwed. Enter Akiyama?

WOOH!!!! This story is awesome!! I freaking love it so much

WOOH!!!! This story is awesome!! I freaking love it so much

kami, and the plot keeps on turning and twisting. wonderful chapter! i'm eagerly looking forward to the next!
-hasu86

I liked it, another wonderful chapter for a wonderful story! Great job! Just picturing a young Sesshoumaru in my head is cute.

-Fanged Beasty

O WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOW that's funny, now my only wish for new years is for another chappie!!!! Yay!!

O WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOW that's funny, now my only wish for new years is for another chappie!!!! Yay!!

Amazing chapter once again!

WOOOOOOOOOOO YEA!! I was looking for something good to read then I saw your name. I said, "Oh look this arthour writes good stories, but did she finish them?" Then I thought, "what the heck let me read it," and so here I am now waiting for you, I really like this story. You have just topped yourself, now please hurry!!!! More chappies please!!!

Lovely twists and turns! I can't wait to see what you have in store for us readers ^_^

OMG, this is hotness in it fine's form. You see I knew that this was going to be good, I mean a blind person can see that you are the sh*t when it comes to writing a great story, but I must say that the whole talk at a well with Sesshoumaru and Kagome was total over my head, I still enjoyed it. (whatever they where talkin about) But anyway this is a GREAT F*CKING STORY. I can't not wait til the next chapter. It's been a while since I have read a story that had me on the edge of my seat the entire read. WOW I'm still shaking. PLEASE by all that is good in this world UPDATE soon. You really are THE sh*t

I bet I know who the male is! He was stuck in the cave wasn't he? Oh this is so interesting please continue the first chance you get, please?

-FangedBeasty

i love this chapter! the mystery man was a nice touch!! i can't wait to see what'll happen with sesshomau!

nice that was pretty neat write more soon

o_0 Well, the end was certainly unexpected. Everything is mixed up now! I'm completely in the dark here so... I guess I'll just have to wait for the next update, huh? ^_~

Marvellous as always, always keeping us off kilter and I greatly appreciate that. Your works always take me to new avenues and differing perspectives and I wish to thank you for that. I can feel greatness here. Well done.

EP

I can't wait for the next chapter! It seems like this story will be great!(again! ^^)
There is something wonderful about your writing, it is unique: you have the skill to make the typical sessh/kag stories into something more interesting and breathtaking.
Thank you for all of your great stories!

yay, a new ff=)=) Great!!^^
Also a great beginning!! Must be really confusing for kagome to come to an totally other lifeO.o I'm reeally curious how the story will go..and why Inuyashas daughter(with kikyo?) wants to kill KAgome!!

Whoa... BIG changes... MAJOR difference in the storyline as compared with your more recent stories. Kudos! I think this will really stretch you as an author, while it will (most probably) keep us readers completely off-balance (just as you LOVE doing!).

It will be very interesting to see where your fancy takes this one; I'm ever so glad I'm along for the ride!! Not only that, but I am eagerly looking forward to updates that will whisk me away from my mundane existence like this one did!

Many thanks for some enjoyable evening reading!!
:D
~~Wiccan~~

I LOVE THE INU DAUGHTER PART!!!!! definetly unexpected.

-dies-

WHY?! AGAIN?! CLIFFIE?! ACK! INUYASHA! DAUGHTER! BAKUSAIGA?! WHAT?! I'M SO CONFUSED!

Oh well. I'm sure you'll explain everything in later chapters.

BYE BYE AND UPDATE SOOOOONNN!!!!

Oh my, this story is getting more interesting by the minute. Great job. Full of possibilities and suspense.

*hugs and smiles*

Thanks for updating so soon again. It was a great chapter that I enjoyed. I already can't wait for the next one. I wonder what Inuyasha's wish was? I wonder why Inuyasha sacrificed himself, or whatever? Inuyasha's daughter? Oh my gosh. This story is already full of suspense and I can't wait to find out what happens. Keep up the great work :]

Hey there. Glad to see another fic. Can't wait for the next update. You have me very curious as to what to expect. If your still sending email notifications please let me know. (its me Ceira lllotrfan@yahoo.com). Hope you had a nice Thanksgiving. Bye.

Wow, I'm completely at a loss as to where you're going with this. Sesshoumaru is still Sesshoumaru, so now I wonder what the heck happened to Inuyasha! A daughter?

OMG OMG OMG...what the heck happened in this alternate reality?!? Please update soon. You are writing another great fanfiction. I can't wait to read the next chapter.

This is absolutely spectacular. It has all the makings of an epic fanfic. I can't wait to see where it will go.

Ummm Update Soon I Need More Info! Love The New Story And Chapter!!!

Great first chapter!! I am hooked! Keep up the great work! That was quite a cliff hanger at the end... I definitely want more! When you have time, please update!

amazing chapter and add me to the alert list!!! you should have kagome and sesshomaru word together to try to restore her time to it's original state and have sesshomaru die in the process. TRUST ME MAJOR DRAMA TRERE!!! and they have to find a way to bring him back in order to go through with their journey. maybe you should have the gang pay sesshomaru's mom a visit to bring him back!!

love this story so far just like i absolutely loved a little faith your a fantastic writer so im looking forward to this new brillant story of yours i cannot wait to find out what happens next so keep up the awesome job your so damn good at doing and update please

thanks much love Sheena

one of your greatest fans ^^ :P

Yippie Skippy!! Another elle6778 story to comfort me in my occasional misery (not to worry, I'll live)!!! And, as usual, I'm hooked from the first chapter - gee, not surprising to me!

I can hardly wait for the next exciting installment, especially since you left one HECK of a cliffhanger there! I mean, like, WHOA!!! Thanks so much for continuing the writing and good luck in the IYFG voting!
:D
~~Wiccan~~
nkrempa@comcast.net - please add me to story alerts??

whooo wooo....You are back!!! And with a vengence!! I cannot believe how incredible this story seems to be and it is only the first chapter!! Wow! I am already craving the second chapter...

Oh my, it has been too long since I reviewed...and I am sorry for missing the last few chapters of ASF...but it's seems we are both back lol. I really cannot wait for this newest story to get rolling! You really rock my socks!

oh that was great... can't wait till up get the next chapter up

Woohoo! You are back and a great start too. Update soon!

EP

Oh My!!!! You simply must update!!!! I must know!! I will not survive if you dont Ahhhh!! Your stories are so great. Im so jealous, well great job ^_^ cant wait for more

ZOMG! Awesome, as usual. I can't wait to see where you'll take it! Put me on the alert, s'il vous plais!

OMG! When I saw that this story was written by you, I just knew that I was going to be reading another enjoyable fic. Great start!

You are so good. I'm on pins and needles now. Update soon.

*hugs and smiles*

OMG....a new fanfic. I love all of your fanfics. This one seems to be very interesting. I can't wait to read the next chapter, as always! Please update soon.

HOLY CRAP, WHAT HAPPENED?!

0.o

UPDATE SOON! I ALREADY LOVE IT!!!

That was a great start i am excited to see where this goes. I like your use of the recent manga stuff but minipulating it to fit your needs ina good way. Well done! But, GOD! didnt it just piss you off when Sesshoumaru got his arm back .. i mean damn you totally wrote a great story about him getting his arm back then R.T. goes and screws it all up! ::Sigh:: lol ... anway great job.

Katie

and all the cows are holy!!!! oh yeah, i'm buying a ticket for this ride. girl, i don't know where you're going to take us this time but i'm with you to the end cuz this sounds like a really intriguing adventure. and you are such a good writer that you don't need to worry about lemons. sometimes lemons distract from the story. anyway, let's go...

please update soon!!! i love it

Yay. I'm so excited for this story, it sounds like It'll be really good. Thinking back, I don't think I've posted a review in a long time. But, I'm back, and will be leaving a wonderful review after every chapter like I did so long ago. I have to say that I'm very impressed with how quickly you are starting another story. You just have tons of ideas apparently, which is fabulous. I really liked this new chapter though and am very excited for the rest of the story. You surprised me with changing Kagome's time due to her actions, very creative. I wonder what changed due to her past actions though? It seems from the description that a lot changed, almost sounding like for the worst unfortunately. A new adventure awaits Kagome and Sesshomaru once again, I can't wait to read what happens. Keep up the great work :D

yay! another story out! it sounds great so far, i can't wait for you to update.

I love it. There is no way you can't go on with this story. I'm already sucked in and I don't think I could handle you not continuing. It's well thought out I can tell and I'm hoping to be surrprised by a few twists.

yay! another story out! it sounds great so far, i can't wait for you to update.