Very creative piece looking forward to where you intend to take it....then again, it is about the journey not the destination, yes?

Hmm, I'm really not sure where you're going with this, meaning is it going to be Sesshoumaru/Kagome centered or just have that pairing? Either way, I look forward to the next update. ja

Well you cannot possibly stop now??? This is cute and fun and creative and has oddles and oddles of potential. I look forward to see where you go with this. And if you are unhappy with it, then that this ok it is only the first few chapters. I have discovered with my own writing that the first chapter you write you are are usually most happy with but the next few always seem to be a tad bit rocky. Goddess knows that I have been feeling that way lately with my own work. But you definitely have a wonderful talent, and I would be sorely disappointed if this fic did not continue.

I really enjoyed this latest installment. And it would be nice to see everyone find happiness, including your Yasha and Ivy personana.

I must say this was my favorite line, "Nightmares are just dreams waiting to find their happily ever after" Wow..that line blew me away. It was simply beautiful.

Now please update if not for your readers than for your inner muse that must be begging to let this story out :)

Your writing might not make you happy, but it sure made me happy!! I wanted to sing when I saw chapter two!! I was wondering if maybe you could put in a bit more about how they got where they are, as in the final battle, why they are all staying in the same camp, exactly what happened the night before, stuff. Beautiful work, and Ivy is already one of my favorite OCs ever!! Keep writing!!!

ok... nice ... but you need to open up..lol..muses(muci) are such pushie folk.. but i enjoy the battles.. i do not often have reviews as i dont presume to know a writers' mind ...but i do want to have you continue this bit of a tale... i would like very much for inu yasha to have a little frivolous romance and mayhaps feel real love of heart and all of your work is very pleasant to read.....

This is just fantastic I love it. I have read your other works and always particularly enjoyed the side conversations with puppy boy...they were so sweet and lovely and real. I must admit when I started reading this newest tale I was a bit skeptical on how it would work. But your first chapter already has me hooked and excited to see how you are going to weave this particular tale, the concept is so novel and unique. It was a fantastic first chapter it truly was. I am very, very eagerly awaiting your update.

Very interesting, looking forward to see where this goes. :o) Make it both Kags/Sess and Ivy/Inu and it should be for a fun ride...especially given the beatings Inu has taken previously.

AAAIIIEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I am sooooo in love!!!!! YOU MUST CONTINUE!!!! If you don't continue, I swear I'll...I'lll....Hell, I don't know what I'll do, but it won't be pleasant. I absolutely ADORE this idea!!!!!!! Your writing is so amazing, and so unbelievably good, I feel like jumping around the room singing something embarassing. PLEASE continue this!!! Its one of the best self-insertations I've ever read, or heard of, or even contemplated. PLEASE CONTINUE!!!!

that was good a great start i am interested in reading more please continue

WOW, so ookkaay about you, naa i`m just playing!! I like to mess with a lot of people!! I think I have never read any of your stories!

Bye,
Faby

Well, this fic takes me back to a book called "Sophie's World," an interesting read if you're into questioning what is reality, really. I couldn't help but find humor in your character, Ivy. I mean which writer wouldn't enjoy this scenerio happening and if it did, cursing the powers that be who did it. Moving on, I wait for your next update. I was thoroughly entertained with this idea. Ja ne.