"yes". that was a good chapter, i was wondering when u would update. And that was good. You rule :-)

I like your story its awesome!!!! I just think it would be even better if you had a beta.... just remember names are capatilized :) keep up the good work

When you learn how to write, get a dictionary and learn how to use it, figure out what grammar and punctuation really mean, and at the very least take the time to learn how to spell the character's names properly and correctly, try posting a real story. As of yet, there is nothing here worth the time, or the pain of trying to read. The 'summary' (note correct spelling), is enough to give anyone a headache.

please write more

for the vote... can you keep on going where you stopped? I love those kind of things with sessy and kag! and you did a pretty good job on typing, too. And a starting thing for the vote all i can give you is: make them wake up (or whatever) and later on... Perhaps make them Mate? and in between, make them spend more time together! I'lm gonna bookmark this foreva!

the story line is original,while the spelling for the story's title was awful.
desire.that's how you spell it.
as for sesshomaru's mother's name:
could have chosen something more original.
that wasn't as good as could be.
i'd say you need a beta.

i love this story its really good you sould type more of it

Maybe if you would ever use proper punctuation this story wouldn't be such a pain to read. Names are capitalized, by the way. This is incomprehesible, get a beta.

please write more

i love it please write more