Utterly hilarious!. I take it that they've become friends which it seems from their thoughts will soon turn romantic. I would love to see a picture viewing his back with two handprints on his butt. Precious indeed! haha! I hope she's pulling his leg by pretending she can't swim. When he realizes this, it'd be sweet revenge on his part to take her to the nearest cave and, well --- let your imagination fill in the rest.

That was so funny. I love the dynamics between the characters. I can't wait to see what is next.

humor dose not even come near to how funny this is. I laugh so hard I cry and almost p my pants.

OMG it's so funny i loves it -^.^-

I just read this story for the first time and these first 2 chapters were way beyond hilarious. I laughed so hard, I'd loose my breath. I caught enough to know that she has romantic feelings for him inspite of her mental ramblings about him. I bet next time he won't ignore her. Please, it's been a month since your last update. I'm anxiously waiting.

I have to say, it was so funny, it made my friend shit kittens. That and my sides split...ouch...

~more humor soon plz!
~zen

You did a wonderful job on the second chapter and maintained the same intensity of the humor as you did in the first one. I loved it and can't wait to see where you take this. A messy Sessy, he's a boy that needst to be mussed up a little every now and again. No one can be that perfect all the time.

Good job and happy writing! Keva

I laughed myself silly when I read this. Just imagining the look on Sesshomaru's face when he realizes not only that he's been felt up but that he has hand prints on his ass. You have an awesomely twisted sense of humor!!!

I love it, and as someone who writes mostly humor I am a little more particular in what I consider a funny story, hence why I don't usually send reviews to people, they just don't make me laugh. But you my dear moonflames made me laugh and I thank you for it! Hope to see either more of this story or more of your stories. Best of luck with your next flash of brilliance. Keva

I can just see it slime with a little dash of mud running down his face! The madness it would cause in his lands to ACTUALLY see HIM dirty! Its SCANDALOUS!