It's really kickass! I love it u rule! :) would u do me a favor? And read the stories i'm working on? I just want 2 know what u think. Lol :)

I think the banter between Inu and his mate is cute and I sort of feel sad for Sess but I'm slightly confused about where this story is going. The story has many spelling/grammar errors and it's not flowing very smoothly. It has potential and I would love to see where you take this. Like I said previously, it is cute. Put some guts into it girl *sniggles*

I appreciated your message to me and that's why I'll be honest with you. No flames...just critiques.

*hugs and smiles always*