I love the story but longer chapters when you get a chanc would be nice. And maby putting it like this (
The was a big explotion and then appaired Naraku. "Naraku!" Kagome yelled as he did his evil chukal.........) some thing lik that and I find reading other peoples fan fic's helps me write (it un-blocks my Writers -block.)

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?