This story mad me laugh, cry, and throw stuff at my wall. I approve! Continue to write other fics, please, and I will continue to read them all! Now.. On to Innocent Until Proven Guilty!
Ashlyn- Mon 14 Jan 2008
i loved this story so much. it was sad though what happened to kaido and sesshomaru and that he dide, but i still liked it alot!
kiba- Sun 13 Jan 2008
Make a movie outta this.
Very sad story though. I cried :(
Did their babies really have to die in pain?? :(
daniela gonzalez- Sun 02 Dec 2007
b-e-a-utiful man that was nice sad and funny as well you did great
Will you be making a sequel to this story? Where and what happened to Inuyasha?
Jordan Johnson- Tue 27 Nov 2007
this one wuz really good, you should continue it
Jordan Johnson- Tue 27 Nov 2007
this one wuz really good, you should continue it
DemonQueen17- Mon 26 Nov 2007
I like the changes you made to your story, but one thing bothers me; what has Inuyasha been doing these past seventeen years? Is he still stuck in the castle or has he been banished? Has he been demoted to servant status? Or is he dead? If he is, then he's a real idiot. I look forward to reading more of your work. ^_^
Wonderful story from start to finish.
I wish it could of been a little longer and fleshed out more but I understand your reasoning for keeping it the way it is. I cried for the first six puppies that dies from poisoning...so sad; however, I still liked it.
well done...*hugs and smiles*
samantha sargent- Mon 26 Nov 2007
I love your story apples and cinnamon!!!!!! your a fantastic writer!
rowdysgirl- Sun 25 Nov 2007
hmmmm, not a cat-lover are ya?
It's a good story, i enjoyed it a lot, but i don't think i'll ever ask you to watch my cats for me...
reina- Sun 25 Nov 2007
i like this version better. i didn't think it was right that kaido killed himself.
by the way, since when did they have guns back then?
arielle langley- Sun 25 Nov 2007
THank u so much for updating! Boy has it been awhile i thought u forgot about us! Keep up the good work n update soon please thanks n this story was freakin awesome! I loved it thanks
daniela gonzalez- Sun 25 Nov 2007
plz hurry i want to know whats going to happen
Arie193- Fri 23 Nov 2007
I love this story! You must write more.
Holysinner- Thu 22 Nov 2007
This fic is amazing! this is the first fic to ever really make me cry. i was soooooo happy when two of the little pups lived. please update soon.
your fan,
Holysinner
Meteka Smart- Thu 22 Nov 2007
your story touched my heart. u took my life and made it into this story cause this is whats happening with me and the man i love except its his mother whos tearing us apart. thank u for this story ti showed me love can conquor all!
awsome! so sad though that 6 of the babys died. but im so glad youve updated. is there anyway to tell when a story had been updated other then to continuosly check it?
Amanda- Wed 21 Nov 2007
omg. i'm so happy you updated! ah!
gaarasloner- Wed 21 Nov 2007
this an awsome story!!!
write more PLEASE!!!!!!
gaarasloner- Wed 21 Nov 2007
this an awsome story!!!
write more PLEASE!!!!!!
marquisha- Wed 21 Nov 2007
that chapter was kind of sad but kind of happy to because some of the pups died but 2 of them are still alive i hope u update the story soon i can't wait to see what will happen nexty
marquisha- Wed 21 Nov 2007
that chapter was kind of sad but kind of happy to because some of the pups died but 2 of them are still alive i hope u update the story soon i can't wait to see what will happen nexty
arielle langley- Tue 20 Nov 2007
THat was very very very sad yet good! Thank u so much for updating i appreciate it very much once again this story is just wonderful magnificant and addictive thank u so much for writin it hopefuly another update soon thanks
apples and cinnamon fic fan- Tue 20 Nov 2007
i really hope and begging that you wouldnt stop writing this fic because it is very well writed and even more interesting. i hope that princess will soon realise that seshoumaru doesnt want her. and that kagome and seshomaru would soon be together as mates and have happy ending i of course are hoping that princess will get very unhappy ending because of her attitude of seshomaru mother...
please keep writing until this fic is finished and if there is possible that kagome and seshomaru have happy ending i really hope that you write that PLEASE CONTINUE WRITE THIS FIC FINISHED
jen- Mon 19 Nov 2007
dude, i love you. this is so awesome! greatest fanfiction ever!!!!!
dreamer789- Sun 18 Nov 2007
oh my god! i cant belive that they did that! how evil can they be. if sesshomarus father felt that bad about doing it then why didnt he stop! AHHHH! i cant wait til you update in december. this is driving me crazy! i love this story though, it had me close to tears. keep up the amazing work. i cant wait to find out what happens next.
Sammy- Sun 18 Nov 2007
Well it sucks that you will be retiring, I am very picky about the fics I read and I found yours to be well written (or at least much better than some people out there lol) and I guess i wish you good luck with the Nipissing thing, I know how hard it is to pay for college/university (heck I have to go to college for 3 years then university for 1, its bad on my bank account >) Well I wish you the best of luck with those presentations and hope you can finish this story soon, its very intriguing!
jen- Sun 18 Nov 2007
the world will be duller without your awesome possum fanfiction, but i may survive... :cries:
Kjinuyasha- Sat 17 Nov 2007
Ha HA... I don't mean to laugh in your face but I'm so happy that my Senior year will be a breeze. Chill mode like WOE! HA HA! I'm taking the load now... next year all I'll have to do is take 4 more classes and wait for my acceptance letter. I've already applied to scholarship programs and stuff... gotta take my ACT next month then I'm straight up chillin! Research papers suck! I'm working on my third one now... but I wish you the best of luck because my schedule looks almost like yours right now...Homework homework homework.... band practice band practice... parade... preformance... theater rehersal... upwardbound ...chior rehersal... meeting this... meeting that... homework... church ...church church.... and more homework... Seriously... the earliest I EVER get home is 7:00... and the earliest I ever go to bed is 12:00.But I thank God for my clear scheule for next year...
And I hope for the best for you.... Luv ya,
-Kjinuyasha
arielle langley- Sat 17 Nov 2007
U realy had me there it was so sad! That i was so close to crying! I know that u have a busy schedule n all but please if u can dont forget about us i love the story update soon please im begging u! Thanks
rowdysgirl- Sat 17 Nov 2007
your schedule leaves me speechless - a rare occurance. you are right, your grades are more important than this story, but don't plan to retire from writing at 16, just go on hiatus until you have the time. i would suggest keeping a log of story ideas and try creating some original stories. i recommend all of this because i think you have it in you to become a professional writer with time and practice. you have a good imagination and your writing skills are pretty good, but, most importantly, you tell a good story and that gift is not given to everyone.
K,T,M- Sat 17 Nov 2007
dat is so sad please update really soon i have to know what happens HAVE to.
snowbird- Sat 17 Nov 2007
I appreciate you taking the time to let us know why there have been no updates. I understand your heavey schedule and will patiently wait for December. I wish you good luck in your grade scoring. I, too, remember my senior year being the most difficult of my high school years. So I can sympathize.
Amanda- Wed 14 Nov 2007
gah! when are youuuu gonna update?!
Amanda- Sun 11 Nov 2007
I REALLY want you to update this and soon!
Amanda- Fri 02 Nov 2007
I really wish you would update :(
Its quite sad.
cocoke5- Fri 26 Oct 2007
oh you have to up date on this story it isreal good and i love and i cry at some part and i hope that she get her man. up dats
be_a_good_boy_Sess- Tue 23 Oct 2007
I love it! It's really, really good. Um just one thing, have someone you don't know reread it. Your grammar needs a bit of work, not much, just some.
i really like this story. I've reread it thousands of times. U gotta update soon or I'll go crazy. ^_^
swift- Sun 07 Oct 2007
*sniff sniff* I love fanfics where kag is a demon I just wish that kagome had bore sesshoumaru a son or something *crys* the last chapter made me so mad and sad I wanted to jump in the story and whipe the gaurds out my self so kagome could be saved from such pain...*sniffs sniffs* now I wont know if she has been driven insain by this or if she will runaway to avoid the pain of seeing sesshoumaru with another mate...ugh plz update
shiva11- Thu 04 Oct 2007
I'm not even playing. You need to continue and kill off that lil bitch who is going to separate Kagome and Sesshomaru. How could you leave it at a cliffie like that?
snowbird- Thu 04 Oct 2007
Oh wow! The last part of this chapter made me cry. Just like one of your previous reviewers, I normally don't like Kag to be demon or hanyou, but with this plot, it fits. If the upcoming chapters are anything like these, this story is going to be heavy with emotion and heartwrenching. I hope you make him hate his parents, especially his father, that they actually feel physical pain from his hatred. If he has to mate this other female, I hope he can do it without actually having to rut her. It'd almost be like him having to rape himself and his emotions. So no heir from her. That would be a slap in the face to his father. An even better slap would be for Kag to give birth to a son, the future heir but in a situation where they couldn't take the child from her. Forgive me. I know the story is yours, but my emotional claws are out for revenge and my thoughts are running away with me. You're a talented writer to do that to a reader. So keep it coming.
BloodyHellsAngel- Tue 02 Oct 2007
OMG!! This was fucking awesome! Normally I dont like Kags being a demon but you made this work. Gawd, Im about ready to cry!!!
Koroleva- Tue 02 Oct 2007
that was so sad im crying right now Y.Y update soon though... poor them
Amanda- Mon 01 Oct 2007
Gah! I hope you update tonight!
Hurry, I'm waiting :)
Rhapsody- Mon 01 Oct 2007
Le Gasp!
I love it! Of course... you sure like those cliff hangers, dontchya? Well, I guess it keeps 'em comin' back, right? ^. ~ Just don't keep us waiting to long, kay? I can't wait to see what Sessh does to the bastards! Rawr!
Great writing,
Rhaps
jasmine- Mon 01 Oct 2007
pleaze write more i was crying so hard right now it's so sad they took kagome away from sesshoumaru
Kanazawa- Mon 01 Oct 2007
waaahhhh!!! crying- that was soooo beautiful.... but hear wrenching!! I can't wait for the next chapter!! please update soon!!!
Kanazawa
its so touching.hope u update soon.^_^
Tensaiga- Mon 01 Oct 2007
omg that was so sad i was almost into tears. YOU HAVE TO UPDATE SOON!! That was so good!! omg :'(
Amanda- Mon 01 Oct 2007
Update soon, ugh, I'm so in love with this fanfiction! Gah! I just ahve to read the next chapter! Update as soon as possible, I will be checking everyday!
mhs02- Mon 01 Oct 2007
please keep it flowing
Lady Kirara- Mon 01 Oct 2007
“I could and will never forget you. You are my only mate. You will be my only mate. The mark I will be forced to put on the mangy cat will mean absolutely nothing. You will forever be my mate, my Lady of the West, my love, my Kagome. Understand? No one, and I mean no one, will be able to tell you otherwise. They know nothing. They don’t know us. We know us. Understand?†Sesshoumaru said softly, yet sternly.
That made me cry. T_T And when Kagome told Sesshy that she loved him I started bawling, I really really really hope you get the next chapter up ASAP! I didn't read it before...so I have no idea what happens!!!!!
marquishawright- Sun 30 Sep 2007
i wonder what happen i bet they kill kagome u had me really crying in the end it was really sad but i did enjoythe lemon do the story is getting really good i can't wait until u update the stroy again i can't stop thinkin of all of the possabilties that happen to kagome and what will happen next i really praise this tory so please,please, please update the story soon
marquishawright- Sun 30 Sep 2007
i wonder what happen i bet they kill kagome u had me really crying in the end it was really sad but i did enjoythe lemon do the story is getting really good i can't wait until u update the stroy again i can't stop thinkin of all of the possabilties that happen to kagome and what will happen next i really praise this tory so please,please, please update the story soon
marquishawright- Sun 30 Sep 2007
i wonder what happen i bet they kill kagome u had me really crying in the end it was really sad but i did enjoythe lemon do the story is getting really good i can't wait until u update the stroy again i can't stop thinkin of all of the possabilties that happen to kagome and what will happen next i really praise this tory so please,please, please update the story soon
somone- Sun 30 Sep 2007
dude that made me cry!!! but please update i want to know if they get together agiain! ^__^ upadte plez!!!
Oh, my god. chapter 4 actually made me cry. that's just horrible! Wht in seven hells would taisho allow that to happen! or frickin' help! grrr......
but you did really good at writing all this out. please update soon because that's just too sad to leave for any extended period of time.
OhBrother- Sun 30 Sep 2007
oh my gosh! how sad! please update soon! i want to know what happens! please.... poor sesshy poor kag...
-OhBrother
jen- Sun 30 Sep 2007
this si friggn' awesome! OMG dude!
Rhapsody- Sun 30 Sep 2007
Oh my gosh! You simply MUST update this soon. I've fallen in love with the characters. The way you've tied the family all together and just everything! Good job on making it so that Sess isn't really OOC at all! I can't wait for the next chapter!
Great writing,
Rhaps
P.S.
If you have a mailing list for updates, please add me. If not, never mind this and see you next chater! ^^
sharilynn- Sat 29 Sep 2007
man your doing really good you got me wonderin and everyone else please keep writing.
Sharilynn
Ana- Sat 29 Sep 2007
*Sigh* This is where things start to get messy... I read the past one, and I must say, there were too many deaths and tragedy for my taste, (though I certainly wouldn't mind you finishing off the hanyou and blasted NW family in the most hellish fashion) But, hey, whatever floats your boat, I support all the way! update soon! Ja!!
marquishawright- Sat 29 Sep 2007
u left me on the edge i can't wait to the next chapter i wonder what will fluffy will do i bet the girl he going to mate is a hoe will any way please please update the waiting is killing me just keep going
Anonymous- Sat 29 Sep 2007
How will daddy dearest react to the newest injury to Kagome?
It's not like Inuyasha can go to his father and tell him that Sesshomaru nearly tried to kill him, without daddy finding out about what he nearly did to Kagome.
Wonder how long before Inu finds out what Inuyasha did to Kagome?
Is their a reason why father is protective of Kagome?
Poor Kagome, just when she found a mate, she lost her second mother.
Sesshomaru has one heck of a fight with his beast about Kagome.
Father doesn't seem to mind about Kagome being Sesshomaru's mate, what about the mother would she mind?
Who will be the first to ask the dad if there's a way to break the "mating mark"?
It be interesting if Sesshoamru ends up changing his mind, but Kagome still wants the mating mark released.
What will happen to Inuyasha?
Is their a reason why he's cruel to Kagome? (Maybe he's jealous because his father cares for her more then him. ) hmmm.
Please update ASAP.
This is great.
Ana- Fri 28 Sep 2007
DIE BAKA HANYOU!!! Grrr, I do hate an insensitive idiot with a small brain and a large ego, serves him right, the dickhead... Oops, sorry, I sorta deviated there, great fic! Please update soon! I can't wait!! Ja ne
hey i love the story! it's really great and so well written, and the last chapter just made me wanting more! so i hope you'll update soon cause i'm dying to know how sesshoumaru is going to see her worthy!
Claudia- Fri 28 Sep 2007
Great Chapter. Though it's a bit weird when Sesshoumaru and his beast are having a conversation. I like that. It lets me know what they are planning and thinking at the sametime. The one I'm starting to get mad is Inu Yasha. He sounds so ignorant, so....childish, so....Inu Yasha. With his bash mouth and all. Great chapter. I had lots of fun reading. I can't wait to read chapter three. Keep us hook.
Claudia
love ur story!!!please keep going!!!can't wait for the next update!!
It's great. i hope u'll update soon. man that inuyasha is such a bastard.
s- Thu 27 Sep 2007
:o! So good! More please please please!
lovely hope there is more
Ana- Thu 27 Sep 2007
Wonderful! you decided to repost it! Edit later, Update now, please! I wanna know what kind of ending this one has! ^_^ Can't wait! Ja ne!!
kiki- Wed 26 Sep 2007
i have seen this before you all reddy ended it last time she got a babby and many more sesshomaru was forced to mate a cate demon but the mark disapered in the end he staed with kagome
Claudia- Wed 26 Sep 2007
Please continue. Wonderful start. You have me hook.
Claudia
winnie- Wed 26 Sep 2007
this was great! one of the best fanfics i've ever read! plaese make the next chapter soon...
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