sorry you must of been pretty shocked yeah and sorry again for all the foul language but it wasnt soo long ago and he is still a cheating fuckhead who deserves his dick choped off. too bad he was hot. but brothers and boyfriends just put me off wanting to......... anyway lets not talk about that. thanks for listening and keep up the good work
love from me
marquishawright- Thu 27 Sep 2007
i hope u udpate the story soon i can't wait until the next chapter but i can't believe wat inuyasha did but please , please, please, update the story again just keep swimming
karla- Thu 27 Sep 2007
i like it! the only think..heh think.. ahem, THING, i would recommend would be keep it comming, and double-check your grammer in some places. rin is adorable, a little too modernish, but it fits.. especially if she's been under kagome's influence lol. update soon, i am liking it so far!
stupid fucking cheating bastard inuyasha. i have nothing against him he is just a idiot in this story. sorry for the foul language but my besty went out with this guy who cheated on her with her friend amy than they broke up. like a year later he broke up with amy (amy is not her actual name) and went back out with my friend and cheated on her for another one of our friends we were all prettey pissed. so you can understand where i am coming from.any way i know this is a kag sess but in the begining can she marry a random villiger and have a kid or somthing then kill the random guty off before kags and sess start having fellings. i just hate it when kags is always a virgin where she loses it to sess. i just find it kinda offending and stupid that guys in that era could sleep around till there balls turned blue but girls even if they were raped were considered dirty.
love how the stories going those were just some suggestions
love from me
OGF- Thu 27 Sep 2007
I like your story so far, it promises to be a good one.
faye- Thu 27 Sep 2007
I like this story so far! I especially like Rin! I'm not sure that many human girls in the time would really pursue InuYasha, or that he would stray from Kagome for someone who is a stranger, but for the story's purpose, I guess it's okay. One other thing. Kagome falls down the well on her 15th birthday (episode one), it didn't appear to be winter then, or even fall. I would say early spring because the characters in the modern day are wearing long sleeves. lol, sorry, I don't mean to be anal about it! I'm not an expert or anything.
Review for ya know you wanted one!!!!
LoL
Anyways, good story so far but it would be nice if you added a bit more detail, realism and...can't think of anything else... ~.~'
Well, update soon, and if possible, please email me whe the next chapter comes out!!!
Thanks.
BTW, i like your user name!
youkaidragon- Wed 26 Sep 2007
very good plot so far. keep up the good work and update soon.
mortefille- Wed 26 Sep 2007
You have to update!!! Its not a question more like a demand...l.o.l. But please do Update!!!!!! Its a must!!! ^.^
Sounds interesting...I'm liking it thus far.
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