I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
clover_babe- Sat 10 May 2008
bahh. i wanted Sessho to do something extravagent and utteringly romantic. but this works too.
XD
hmph. he better have learned from his mistakes.
sequel? :D
You know in ...like I want to say "Fruitsbasket" Whenever the main character or characters find out something horrible and their face is all O_O and their mouth is all D: .... ya know? THAT is how I felt when I found out that this fanfic is NOT YET COMPLETED! I'm going to go drink cream soda and hope it makes me feel better. D: I love the story btw.
please please please update!!!!
Lisa- Fri 11 Apr 2008
I just love your story! Oh I notice a grammar error that keeps popping up. In many places you use 'was' when you should be using 'were' and vice versa.
Lisa- Fri 11 Apr 2008
Your story just keeps getting better and better. I love it when Inu Papa shows up in fics.
Lisa- Fri 11 Apr 2008
Chapter 11 done and I so love you story!
Lisa- Fri 11 Apr 2008
Finished chapter 10. Oh sh*t!
Lisa- Fri 11 Apr 2008
I just finished chapter 9 and I take that part back about a blubbering twit. Looks like she is ready to fold any minute now. I was hoping she kept it together a little longer and paid him some, guess not. Anyway, great story.
Lisa- Fri 11 Apr 2008
I'm so happy to see a story where Kagome isn't falling all over herself blubbering like a silly twit with no dignity. I've just got done with the 6th chapter so I hope the following chapters make him pay dearly for his torture. I can't believe after all he's done and continues to do he expects her to just come right back to him. I love your story!
Stacy- Tue 08 Apr 2008
hey when are you gonna finish the story ... i been waiting for such a long time .... plz plz update its a really great fanfic
I hope you update soon!
tir3dgurl- Tue 25 Mar 2008
holy crap this is amazing!!! very nice work i will say....... soooooooo plez update as soon as possible. im dying to know what happens next!!! ^-^ ^_^ ^.^ :) =) ;)
Megan Consoer- Tue 11 Mar 2008
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
Megan Consoer- Tue 11 Mar 2008
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
KagomeFreak 28- Tue 04 Mar 2008
Thanx 4 the update !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Neko-Chan- Wed 27 Feb 2008
I love it! I cant wait to read about what happens next!! you are AWESOME ^.^
me579- Thu 21 Feb 2008
HURRY AND PUT ANOTHER CHAP UP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!i need 2 know wut happens nxt~!~u hav 2!!!!!!!!i m gonna cum back on 2morrow and if there iznt another chap up im gona send u more nagging reveiws!~
wicked- Wed 20 Feb 2008
That was awesome please update soon!!
Jasmine- Wed 20 Feb 2008
please write more
LordSesshomaruLover16- Wed 20 Feb 2008
good jo b loved the new chpater keep up the great work
me579- Mon 18 Feb 2008
awwwwwwwww!!!ive been waitin 4-ever 4 u 2 finish another couple chaps and u only do 1?!?!?!its ok though!jst hurry and update soon or i'll keep nagging u wit reveiws like these!!!!!!! ps:peac+luv+respect=happiness
Red-Smartiez- Mon 18 Feb 2008
Woah!! Loved it!! ^_^
I loved the part where Inu Tashio goes "Since when?" and Sesshomaru replies "Since now!"
I was like "SNAPP!" XD!!!
I can't wait to see what our sexy demon will do. Wil Kagome throw a fit or will she welcome him with open arms? I have a feeling its the first one XD!!
Great job love 3
That is not nice, leaving it off at that point. You better not make him mess up again! I can not wait to see your next chapter!
:)
-FangedBeasty
PLEASE UPDATE SOON! ASAP!- Sun 17 Feb 2008
Cant wait to see what happens in the next chapter! Update soon!
Megan Consoer- Sun 20 Jan 2008
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
me579- Wed 16 Jan 2008
plzplzplzplzplzplzplzplzplzplzplz!!!!!!!!!!finish! ! ! ! im freaken beggin here (and thats not somthin i usally do...ok i dobut still) ps:peace+luv+respect=happieness
luna- Thu 20 Dec 2007
this is the best kagome and sesshomaru story i have ever read it is so funny but not in a bad way its funny in a good way
sheena- Tue 04 Dec 2007
love your story so please update soon dying to find out what happens next please oh please update your doing such an awesome job please update fast and soon
thanks your fan LordSesshomaruLover161
Kagome Freak 28- Thu 29 Nov 2007
I WAS LISTENING TO HELL IN YOUR EYES , SO I THOUGHT THIS REALLY WENT ALONG WITH IT , SO I SERIOUSLY ENJOYED IT . !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I NEVER CRY BUT WHEN SESSHOUMARU CHEATED ON KAGOME I CRIED !!! IT'S SERIOUSLY ADORABLE ! HOW HER EMOTIONS CAN GET THE BETTER OF HER !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Make your chapters longer. More descriptions needed using the five senses - touch/feeling, smell, sight, hearing, taste.
Uhmm.. and Make Sesshoumaru SUFFER 8)
sharilynn- Fri 28 Sep 2007
man you are really good please keep writing.
Sharilynn
al- Fri 28 Sep 2007
You're doing fine.
You may have snagged a couple mistakes with a couple words,where they sort of didn't belong,but the story,for the most part,is just like before.
Take care and good luck.
s- Thu 27 Sep 2007
:o! Too short! Don't end there! MORE MORE MORE!
Danielle aka Mirokuschildbarer- Wed 26 Sep 2007
BRAVO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! omg im not used to reading stories where they are already together (well in this case, were together) im glad to read this and cant wait to read whats next!
xoxo
Red-Smartiez- Wed 26 Sep 2007
well, I must say I like this cahpter a lot!! I love the ending....MAKE HIM CRY! XD!!!
anywho....keep it up 3
youkailady- Wed 26 Sep 2007
What's wrong w/u people making kag in2 a major sap! sess makes her life a living hell then suddenly decids he wants her back and expects her 2 b ok w/it like what he did was no big deal. and then kag, so weak, she quickly bends 2 his will w/o putting 2 much of a fight! it was so easy 4 him 2 cheat on her while still married, lying, telling her those hurtful words and she easily let him do as he pleases?! kag should make the asshole grovel at her feet before letting anything happen. show him what it feels 2 b lied 2 and betrayed. come on! he offers breakfast and she agrees, he demands he wants 2 talk n "my place or yours?". really COME ON! i must say, i was kind of hopeful after i noticed u fixed ur fic, thinking 'hey just maybe' then u go and disappoint me. sight
Kohana- Wed 26 Sep 2007
I like your story, but I think Kagome is being to easy about the situation. It seems like its happening fast like within a week. Betrayal is betrayal and that kind of hurt isn't something swept under the rug. Woman don't usually forgive infidelity so easily, at least none that I know. Ask yourself if it was you would you be soo forgiving?
~K~
al- Wed 26 Sep 2007
When we said the last chapters weren't as good as the previous ones,it really was just the last two chapter,K.B.
Really.
I love the unique format you chose.
It was like falling rain.
But I guess in order to change those last two,fixing up the others would wreck stuff up.
Either way,take care and good luck.
You're doing alright.
Spirit of the Chihuahua- Tue 25 Sep 2007
I love it thus far it has potential I hope you keep up and update soon.
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