swasdiva- Mon 31 Mar 2008
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Stephanie- Wed 19 Sep 2007
Maru-KunKun- Tue 18 Sep 2007
Jestergirl- Tue 18 Sep 2007
hazel- Tue 18 Sep 2007
clavira- Tue 18 Sep 2007
and it's true too, kagome (as well as most other mange/anime characters) has a reeeally short skirt.
i especially liked the the last... 3 sentences or so - where they "talk". it just kinda... i don't know, sums the whole thing up :D
al- Tue 18 Sep 2007
good read,though.
Black Wings- Tue 18 Sep 2007
This is quiet...unique indeed. :] I like the way you wrote it. It caught my interest. The ending was humorous as well. All in all, great job.
-Black Wings
Eddward- Tue 18 Sep 2007
I have to say that I love your cute little one-shot. I had the goofiest grin on my face after I finnished it. 10's across the board for all! Yay! Keep up the great work.
Later!
Eddward
inumaru_Rapture- Tue 18 Sep 2007
Sommerstars8o8- Tue 18 Sep 2007
I really enjoy this i just cant stop smeiling ^^
~Sommer~